The Seven Year 'Hitch' [2] - Chp 11/ Pg 53

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

👏I have no words...

Exquisite writing! I am swept away by each and every word.

The music is perfect for the dance.

Lovely!

More soon..

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Two spots... haiyee!!!

Is it that long the update?

😃

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Some pictures that may help you visualize ...

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Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

woah!!!!!!!! soo many facts he is realising now...just a week away from her made him think about all those tyms he disappointed her n he had seen them all in her eyes but never acknowledged...she shoud have done this deed earlier...

loved the first part where you wrote about the clouds n stuffs😊

loved the comparison between maan n moving clouds...

omg how did you write all those dance steps Onir...haa... i felt like am seeing her dance in front of my eyes

ohh my God, very very beautiful update my dear...i had my mouth wide open by the end of the part...really i was sitting like that...how do you write so beautifully dear...the relief which he felt and all the emotions she went thru i felt like am also goin thru the same...

music is also too good...

am sooo happy to have you here dear...thanx a looot😊😊

feel like comin in thru my lappy n giving u a tiiighttt hug...😳😃 donno y , but this update made me very very happy...

Edited by honeygrape - 12 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: dqno1
Two spots... haiyee!!!

Is it that long the update?

😃

Not exactly... but wanted to separate the dance and the music as a different post 😊

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Awesome! No words!! It was as if they were in front of me!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

wow i guess all he needs to do is think from his heart
be the maan she fell in love with
or just make her realise that you are still the same maan she fell in love with and married
so close and yet so far
am glad he is somewhere realising what could have gone wrong
yes maan you are what she thinks about all the time
that dance just showed you what you needed to see
so all he has to do now is embrace this
hope it works out
wow those feelings she has for maan came out in the ballet didnt they