MG (FF) : Back to You (Updated #II link: Pg 141) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: preeti.1

OMG i missed the update...

maan left geet for his career
plz i want happy ending...
geet ki engagement se pehle maan geet ko milwa do

Hahahaaa!!
Lets see where it takes them...
About happy ending, well the story has just begun...!
Lol... I love scaring people out of their wits ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Hey Guys!
Another chapter to this story...
At this rate I guess I'll definitely convert it into an FF
Well, thats for a while later.
Until then, here's the update.
Enlightened shadow

Years of sinewy toil,

I now lay lost and foiled.

Engulfed in darkness, I found light that was you.

My only ray of hope, my sunshine to hold on to….



"Geeet"

He closed his eyes with a sigh.

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In another part of the world, where sun still hadn't risen and nightfall continued to engulf the city, the city that did not sleep...

"This is New York downtown. Accident on 15th West Avenue Freeway. I repeat Accident on 15th West Avenue Freeway. We need an ambulance now"


Amidst clamoring ambulance sirens and boumcing city lights, a team of paramedics working their way out frantically and a half unconscious mind, he was being transported to the hospital.


"Geeet"


That was it. His subconscious knew who it was. His inner mind knew what was gnawing at him since these past months or maybe years. It was her.

Geet.

His Geet.


Thinking about her he slipped in and out of consciousness and one fine moment found himself being carried out of the van. The stretcher was pulled in and tiny lights on the ceiling merged into a fine line. Bouts of light illuminated the dark he never knew he could fight, just as he saw her; soft brown hair, brownish dark eyes and a child-like face that had enchanted him since forever. Standing amidst crowd, she stood out like always; as she waved him good bye.

A soft smile tugged her lips but her eyes told a different story. Today, after all these years he could read that plea, that beseech in her eyes….

"Geet"


Black out.

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He half opened his eyes as a nurse stood by his bed, scribbling something on the board. His meds maybe! He tried to search for her, to hear her voice. He had searched for her through his dreams and found her there in his mind. But she wasn't reality.

She wasn't here.

Again black out.

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"Its sheer luck Mr. Sharma; the accident was fatal. God only knows how he escaped with minor scratches."

He heard someone say in the background, a distant voice looming at the far end of the tunnel bounced back, reaching him in hushed whispers before he slipped back into the darkness he had erupted from.

Black out.

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"Should I inform Daadi maa?"

He heard a familiar male voice.


"No Adi. You know how hyper she gets with Bro. Moreover she's just recovered her bypass"


Another male voice, he could identify but couldn't point his finger to.


Thank god they didn't inform Daadi maa.


Black out again!.

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"Yes Doc. I'll make sure."


He heard Adi talk to the Doctor outside. He was lying on a hospital bed, blue-white walls and ceilings engulfing him and drips and machines making tiny noises occasionally breaking the otherwise eerie hospital silence.


"Geet"


He opened his eyes wider as events of the evening came rushing back.

His depressed mood, client meeting at the bar, the sudden turn of his car, somersaults and Geet...

She was his last thought before he slipped out. She was on his mind throughout those panicking seconds when the car had done fatal somersaults. She was on his mind when he had thought he would die. And the question nagging him since days, god knows how many months or even years was answered that second.

What was his reason to live?

He had earned the world, travelled places, made a life, conquered all that he had once dreamt of and more.

Then why was his life so empty?

Why didn't he have the kick to start his day?

Why did every morning drag itself to night?

What was amiss?


Now he had his answer.

What did he want today if he were to die tomorrow?

What would fill the void that he so gallantly called life?

It was Geet. His Mishty, who wasn't there with him. It was her that he missed. And that one moment of panic was enough to realize the fact that she was his life.

She was the life in his death.

"Adi"

Maan got up from his bed, IV and electrodes still attached to his body.

"Maan sir"

The man came running in, closely followed by the doctor.

"Sir please sit down. You've been in an accident."

The doctor said firmly.

"Adi. Call up Steve. Get my jet ready."

Maan said looking at Adi, his right hand man; completely ignoring the doctor's comment.

"B…b..but sir where are we going? Y...y..you are not well."

Adi stuttered looking at his boss, intimidated by him even while he was ill and attached to wires.

"I am going to India. And no one stops me."

Maan said exasperated.

"But sir you can't go, you're not fit to go."

Maan looked at himself frustrated; a couple of bruises here and there, a little pain in his ribs. Maybe a little more in his head but it was all bearable for her. He could bear it all now that he had realized she was all he wanted. The panic of losing his life that moment without as much as seeing Geet was his undoing.

"Get the jet ready."

Maan gritted his teeth, his demeanor making it clear he wasn't to be argued with and Adi gulped in fear. His boss was sheer terror, even out of an accident. He looked terrified at the doctor to come to the rescue but the doc shrugged apologetically.

"Mr. Khurana"

The Doctor managed to say.


"Since your injuries aren't internal, I will give you a discharge. But only if you check into a hospital as soon as you touch India"


"Sure. Thanks Doc."


Maan looked back at Adi, glaring at him as if the poor thing was a cat and he was a hungry bulldog about to pounce.


"Now, get it ready. I leave in an hour."


"But sir, we have delegates coming from Georgia tomorrow."


"Cancel it"


"And what should I tell Daadi maa? She doesn't even know about your accident."


"Tell her I went back to finish an unfinished task."


To bring back my love...

So here you go...

Ookay, I have started PMing updates so those of you who'd like to receive them do send me a buddy request!

And who would believe me if I say I typed the whole of 'Love from Across' and most of this on a Blackberry???

As always, will wait for your Likes, comments and criticism...

Do leave them by.

Until next update

<3

Frosted Starlit.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
ME FIRST😉

SO THE ACCIDENT MADE MAAN REALIZE HOW EMPTY HIS LIFE WAS - IT WAS JUST A BURDEN WHICH HE WAS DRAGGING
HIS REAL LIFE AND HAPPINESS IS GEET
HURRY BACK MAAN - SHE HAS WAITED LONG ENOUGH😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: punam2712

ME FIRST😉


SO THE ACCIDENT MADE MAAN REALIZE HOW EMPTY HIS LIFE WAS - IT WAS JUST A BURDEN WHICH HE WAS DRAGGING
HIS REAL LIFE AND HAPPINESS IS GEET
HURRY BACK MAAN - SHE HAS WAITED LONG ENOUGH😕

Hahahaaa!
Congo, you first again...!
Now lets see how fast our Maan can run!
Bhaaagooo! Maan Bhaaagooo
There are certain traumas, certain points in life where we truly give worth to value and realize what is life actually for?
Accident was that point in his life...
Thank you darling!
It was lovely to hear from you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome update
hopefully geet forgive maan
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

awesome update

hopefully geet forgive maan
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

Thank you so much!
Hope so too...
But then, lets see..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Maan got his realization but I wonder why he didn't think of her for five years...
awesome update...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Maan got his realization but I wonder why he didn't think of her for five years...

awesome update...loved it

Answers will come up soon...
Thanks darling!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
I want to start with giving u a warm welcome to our gf which is our abode and anothef home.though know i'm quite late yet better late than never wht say!!no really dear,i was enthralled by ur love from across and now loving this new story.and expect u to write now such awesome stories on maaneet which will keep them alive in our hearts.i'm soo glad to have u joining in the troup of the fabulous writers of our forum.thank u soo much for decidng to write on the heavenly couple and ls don't ever stop doing so.
can't wait for the next prt of this story:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
So kismet steps in to help him along to his Geet. Why the delay though? It will be rewarding to find out. Enjoying the story.
Thanks for updating.

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