MG (FF) : Back to You (Updated #II link: Pg 141) - Page 3

FIRST OF ALL
CONGO TO UR NEW STORY...
cn u believe ur already a story old..? hehe... i cnt ;)
the vm nd the song is just so superb! wud download it tdy nly...

wow a romantic one...m gonna luv it

p.s xams gng on so sory 4 late coments

Originally posted by: DevilClan

I had bookmarked your previous story and will try to read it. And read the prologue of new story. Its nice. Keep writing.

Hey! Thank you...

Originally posted by: Shefali16

FIRST OF ALL
CONGO TO UR NEW STORY...
cn u believe ur already a story old..? hehe... i cnt ;)
the vm nd the song is just so superb! wud download it tdy nly...

wow a romantic one...m gonna luv it

p.s xams gng on so sory 4 late coments

Thank you so much darling!

Hey Guys!

Another one in a week!

Geet skeptically looked at the Economic Times lazing atop her desk on a gloomy Wednesday morning. Clouds shielded the morning sun as rains had suddenly picked up, thundering and roaring their way to the parched lands below. Any other day and Geet would have whipped her head to her floor-to-ceiling glass window and admired the beauty that was Rain; Beheld the grey sky merge with the blueness of sea in far horizon as rains connected the two ever so lovingly. Any other day and she would have stuck her forehead to the cold glass window and taken in the vista for hours together, shunning all her day's work; much to her boss's annoyance; Just any other day.

But not today.

Turning her gaze back to the newspaper, her thoughts drifted past.

Seeing the man on front page stare back at her with a pair of brown intimidating eyes precipitated thoughts that were condensed somewhere deep in her mind. His handsome face hid most of his thoughts from the world but not her. Every fiber of his face spoke volumes, only if someone could read. Every pore of his body had a story to tell, if someone could listen. And she was that someone.

His grim expression, firm set jaw and clenched muscles gave nothing away to the world, but to her; it gave away everything. His camera consciousness, his dislike at being publicized, his frown perhaps because the coffee kept on the table in front was not up to the mark.

The picture spoke a thousand words which only she out of the zillions and gazillions of worldizens could decipher. His empty eyes spoke volumes which only she could read...

Why wouldn't she?

When once those very eyes had bewitched her, when once her eyes were the missing piece to the puzzle that were his eyes; when once he was all she had and she was all he had!

Why wouldn't she decipher every secret behind his body language when he was hers once?

Her man.

"Thinking about me?"

A soft familiar voice pulled her out of those forbidden thoughts.

Turning around she saw him, her best friend, her partner in crime, her fianc. Would be fianc. In spite of the dear feeling his presence evoked, she had to force a smile on her lips. Today the smile didn't come on its own.

"Well, guess I have competition!"

He winked looking at the news paper Geet had been staring at and then back to her.

Geet's heart stopped.

At her flustered, shocked expression, he couldn't contain his laughter.

"Ranbir is mighty I must say but not as good as me"

He said opening his arms out dramatically and Geet chuckled, relieved at the fact that he had seen an advert on the side.

"Yash"

She admonished.

"Okay. Okay Madam. A doctor can't treat his own injuries! Just dropped in to remind you..."

He said putting his hands up in defeat.

"Don't miss to attend my engagement, with you"

And before Geet could hurl an inanimate object at him, he was out of her office door; laughing his guts out. At once Geet felt laughter burn the back of her throat but the nasty thing didn't erupt. And again she felt herself intimidated by a pair of brown bewitching eyes staring from the Economic Times on her desk.

"Oh why can't you go away?"

She ran both her hands through her hair, exasperated.

Thumping down on the chair, she stared at his picture and then at the pattering rains outside, thundering and drumming on their way. Humming a liberating tune of their own. Only if she could be liberated, liberated from his thoughts and memories!

It seemed he had condensed in a deep dark corner of her mind and wasn't budging from there; His thoughts occupying her already tormented heart. Even Controlled temperature of the room gave her goose bumps as a shiver ran down her body at reception of the lightning outside. She jerked back from the forbidden territory that was him.

"Why? Why are you doing this to me?"

"Come back to me or go away forever."

She shouted looking at his picture on the front page, sighing heavily.

A knock resounded, jolting her out of his thoughts. Why was this so guilty, thinking about him, looking at his picture and being startled at being disturbed as if she was caught stealing her favourite candy!

"Come in"

She said coldly, getting a grip over herself.

"Hey Geet just peeped in to inform that your flight's been preponed. That means you'll have to leave tomorrow early morning!"

Pari, her assistant informed grinning.

"Sure. Thanks"

And Pari was out in an instant, knowing Geet wasn't in best of her moods.

"Why?"

"Why am I still shackled? Why am I still chained down to that time? To you!"

She murmured.

"Come back to me before tonight or go away from my mind. Go away from my heart, Forever. What kind of a selfish man are you? Come and hold me or liberate me."

"Please"

She murmured now as the tears burning at the back of her eyes started flowing without her knowledge.

After all these years, he still had the capacity to evoke extreme emotions in her.

After eight years of pretending to live in oblivion, she still hadn't been oblivious to him.

After eight years of living without him, she still hadn't been able to live.

And now, at the threshold of her new life, he was coming back to her, his thoughts occupying her heart which was rightfully betrothed to Yash. But Yash was nowhere. It was only ever him.

After all, he had left her to come back to her one day. Or so he had said. He had left her to conquer world.

But had he ever come back?

No he hadn't.

Had he ever been in touch?

No he hadn't.

He had slipped out of her like smooth shimmering sand as if he never existed. His only trails were those articles from Business magazines and Papers. His only traces were his interviews charting business channels.

The distance spanned by seven seas and five oceans had pushed them so far apart that hope of meeting again had died ever so silently.

And now there would be nothing left, not even a fleeting memory as she would tie her life down to her best friend. She would get engaged to Yash today and then she would never think back about him. But until then, she would keep the hope alive; she would keep his thoughts to her! In spite of knowing he wouldn't come, she would wait. Wait until tonight. Because however selfish he had been, he was her first love. And last too.

"Come to me before tonight or go away forever Maan."

So how did you'll like the first chapter?

Do leave me your Likes, Comments and Criticism...

By now you'll know how much I await and adore them!

Until next update

<3

Frosted Starlit.

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

Hey!

Thanks darling.

Now, its over.

Have updated Part X

Its the last part...

wonderful start !! waiting for her love to come back after winning over the world...standing at a point ...where time is running out...neither she is able to move forward whole heartedly nor she can forget him or get him back...waiting for that someone to make appearence...

awesome update

Originally posted by: punam2712

<font color="#ff00ff">WONDERFUL FIRST CHAPTER</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">SHE HAS BEEN WAITING FOR 8 YEARS FOR HIM TO COME BACK AND IT IS ALMOST TOO LATE NOW</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">HE ONLY HAS TILL TONITE TO RETURN - WILL BE COME BACK</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">YOU HAVE A LOVELY WAY WITH WORDS</font>

Thank you darling...!
Eight years is a long time and she has crossed that waiting for him...

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

wonderful start !! waiting for her love to come back after winning over the world...standing at a point ...where time is running out...neither she is able to move forward whole heartedly nor she can forget him or gethim back...waiting for that someone to make appearence...

Thank you!!
Let's see if he manages to come back before she becomes someone else's.