THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1 - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Aww!!! Thanks so much...
Teaser ke liye ready ho ja...😃

Me waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
TEASER

"Dev beta, yeh sab kya hai...", Daadima held the paper open to the page with the article about him and Pari, "...you are aware that Singhania is a family friend. I know you don't even like Pari so what is all this about".

Savitri Devi was at her wits end with Dev's behavior. She started in on him as soon as he walked in the door after work.

For Dev, it was another irritation added on to his stock for the day. Nothing seemed to be going his way today. First there was the dream that had kept him awake tossing and turning. He ran his hands through his face and his hair as he walked over to Nakul in the kitchen.

"Yeh kaisa bakwas lunch bheja tha tumne Nakul", he stormed in angrily.

"Dev Sir, it is what you like, your favorite pasta".

Nakul, who had never seen Dev so angry, was shook up by it.

"What rubbish Nakul! There is no taste in this, there is no spice. You better not send such terrible food for me again I am warning you!", he threatened as he made his way upstairs.

Savitri devi watched with her mouth agape. What was wrong with her sweet Dev? The boy never got angry at anyone and in the matter of a few hours he was shouting at Nakul, going to go out with Pari according to the papers and ignoring her. Most important, ignoring her? How could he? She had checked his lunch box herself to make sure it tasted the same as she always made it for him and Maan. He actually stomped up the stairs without addressing her. What could be wrong, she wondered. She decided to give him some time alone to sort it out and get some rest. If he did not answer her face to face, she had other means. Daadi always had a way to get things out of Mr. Dev Khurana and nobody, I mean nobody was going to ignore Savitri Khurana. She smirked at the thought...

A/N: I am cleaning up my PM list and will only be sending PMs to those that have liked one of the two past updates. Thanks!

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Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃

Lovely... I'm more curious about the dream wala part ☺️😳

Nakul ki bhi band baja di... 😆 He prefers thika now... after all sangat ka asar thiki mirchi has left a different taste on his senses,,,, 😉😆

Daadi in action... 😈
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ooch!!! zor se laga
Dev ko shock laga laga😵

So I am too smart for u has finally landed up in trouble
Pari😕
Dream I guess the pink nighty😉
and Dev😲

Dadimaa🤔
but my heart went out for Bechaara Nakul
muft mein maara gaya


Superb one
Waiting
😃


Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
dreams frustrating dev..

aise kaun se dreams dekh liye????


poor dadimaa..

nice teaser DQ.. will be waitng for the update...

gud night...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited my comment on Pg 127
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Edited my comment on Pg 127

😃

🤗 Heytal!
Hope it turns out well. Still working on it...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

😃


Lovely... I'm more curious about the dream wala part ☺️😳

Nakul ki bhi band baja di... 😆 He prefers thika now... after all sangat ka asar thiki mirchi has left a different taste on his senses,,,, 😉😆

Daadi in action... 😈

For you
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Edited my comment on Pg 127

😃

For you!
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
in this ff dev-i-star story is much more interesting than maan-geet story

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