THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1 - Page 76

Originally posted by: -Mishu-

awesome update...
loved it a lot...!!

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Superbly written! Lovely song! Geet mesmerised by Maan! Poor Adi! Pinky n her food 😆 Maan laughing at his plight! Kabir! 😡 Bt Pinkly in Geet knw! Maan der 4 Geet! update soon

soo beautiful ! me still with maaneet on the top of mountain and travelling in the bus in darkness cozy with the warmth of the shawl ! she asked for hi...and he said it !! will he wait for her, to ask for those three magical words too...? and our geet is so naive...he came to trip only for her and she thinks...does he remember her... from the staff library! and even though he said nobody else came to that room...she didnot even get a small doubt on him...! where maan was going through so many emotions...so many assumptions...she is completely oblivious to all that...thinking about her daarji ...!! and yeah ! that waterfall scene...normally heroine is described...with wet looks and water droplets splashing all round... here our hero took all the credit...loved the update ! when you write about dev-istar its a dhamaka...and its soo soft and romantic with maaneet ! though read the part as soon as I got pm...wanted to read it one more time...leisurely...before giving a reply...and today got the chance...

Originally posted by: dqno1

Still waters run deep!

Nice pic Lakshmi!

Did you notice the black shirt and blue jeans I put in the last update for you?

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

avi... coffee ho jaay...

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

soo beautiful ! me still with maaneet on the top of mountain and travelling in the bus in darkness cozy with the warmth of the shawl ! she asked for hi...and he said it !! will he wait for her, to ask for those three magical words too...? and our geet is so naive...he came to trip only for her and she thinks...does he remember her... from the staff library! and even though he said nobody else came to that room...she didnot even get a small doubt on him...! where maan was going through so many emotions...so many assumptions...she is completely oblivious to all that...thinking about her daarji ...!! and yeah ! that waterfall scene...normally heroine is described...with wet looks and water droplets splashing all round... here our hero took all the credit...loved the update ! when you write about dev-istar its a dhamaka...and its soo soft and romantic with maaneet ! though read the part as soon as I got pm...wanted to read it one more time...leisurely...before giving a reply...and today got the chance...

Originally posted by: dqno1

For the night owl in me!😆

Thank you..

Originally posted by: sweetkj

I feel I am drugged. It was splendid... I loved it like anything... I am smiling... Like a dumb from last half an hour or so... Jab se I started reading your update.. Abb jake I am in a state to say something. Hugs you... I luv you :D