THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1 - Page 74

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Waah!👏 Comment with pics!
Kya effect diya hai!
I am glad you liked the part. I have tried to keep all my friends tied up in my story so they always remain with me..
🤗Sheen... for all your support! Me lubs my gundi!



Thankuu Thankuu 😆
Lub you too 🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uhh! I can't think straight after finishing reading. Let me get my bearings and then come back with a detailed feedback. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think we need to change the "u got me at hello" to a HI


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Uhh! I can't think straight after finishing reading. Let me get my bearings and then come back with a detailed feedback. 😳

i echo ur sentiments Mari ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

i echo ur sentiments Mari☺️


Haina? And to think that Avi wasn't satisfied when she first started writing about the trip!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Like i said, u gave an all new defination to my fav line...😳

the update was perfect. be it the decription of heaven on earth or their feelingss...

i am speechless...


the other thing which stood out... Geet ki dua...hume pata nahi kabhi dua ke koobool hone ka time hota hai ... sometimes its a blessing, sometimes its not.

i recentlky read a story which left me in tears on this very sentiment...so i am happy that yaha dua kabool hogi in a positive way😃


Sheen👏👏👏 zindagi ka pehla bhala kaam kiya😆😆😆 maan ke dimaag me kuch dala😉😉😉 between aisha n sharmeen maan ko no worries😆

the earing scene..😡 cheater..blue shirt dala😡 why not put the NPm scene wher he actually catches her lobe😳


P.S> maan ka bday tha😲😡 no bday suit🥱 bababji😒


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Haina? And to think that Avi wasn't satisfied when she first started writing about the trip!


😡 wohi
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Superbly written! Lovely song! Geet mesmerised by Maan! Poor Adi! Pinky n her food 😆 Maan laughing at his plight! Kabir! 😡 Bt Pinkly in Geet knw! Maan der 4 Geet! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

After reaching this chapter, i am speechless.

😲name badalna padega...😆
1st at Devs ingenuity .. hatss offf... and more imporatntntly to teh reason for it n his prize😆 revenge will be tortuous dev babu😎 i have full faith on our rulipedia😉

2nd..😡😡😡 hate him...how could he..i mean how could he😡 eat poor Nts tiffin😡 i wud have whacked him n thrown him out of the top floor office😡

now are u into sales and marketing?😕 where did u get this idea from😃 fab..really😕😕😕

Nahi re, hawa mein teer maaring...😆
why was nt undressing waise😕😕😕 not that dev minded by his reaction.

it was a hundred degree...
but i guess its gonna be two steps back. dev has run away from his emotions like a scaredy cat i assume n nt has her hackles raised. lets see what destiny has in store for them n how Geet manages to get them together😉

Awesome update BHB🤗

🤗 For your support at each step, for making me post in the first place...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Uhh! I can't think straight after finishing reading. Let me get my bearings and then come back with a detailed feedback. 😳

Issh!!!

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