THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1

First Previous

Page

109

Next Last

Frequent Posters

893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
this was the sweetest and the cutest update!!!

i enjoyed geets narration of their journey ... and its so different from that of maans...

"remember... staff library waali"... as if he have forgotten her!!! woh tho tumhaara naam japtha rehtha hai har pal kudiye... kab samjhogi???

his bday/!!! it was so nice that he spent the entire day with her and also was able to drool her openly!!!😳

u know what was my favourite in this part ... "hi" ... just a two letter word... but after reading that i was like aweee so sweet...

naureens shers were excellent...

with regard to ur note... u already know am deewani of ur dev and i star... and both the love stories are so different that am enjoying reading both... so plz continue this way...

will be waiting for the next

Thanks Lakshmi!

The fact that even at the slow pace, their love story is affecting people who are reading it, makes me very happy.

For your support...🤗

For the lovely pictures...❤️🤗

Quote

893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: dumas
amazing update beautifully written loved how you are described their feeling and they way you set the scenes loved the songs thanks for the pm

Glad you liked it Kathrina!

The music takes a while to find but when it works like in this one, it is very satisfying.

😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever
Wow this update. ❤️ L ❤️ O ❤️ V ❤️ E ❤️ IT 😃
Geet's pov her dua for tat unknown person turned out to b gods blessing for maan 😳. Return cable car and bus journey 👏 😳 Fabulous update. Enjoyed readg it. Plz cont soon 😊 ❤️

Itne saare hearts...😆

I guess you liked it..😊

Thanks!