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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

part 15
lovely part...
so beautifully described dear...
cont soon...

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

good upate..congrats for the new thread..😊

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash
res 🤗

Tu aa gayi...🤗

Runs into Aashu's arms...

gir gayi...😆😆

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: chavvi16
oh maan kya kiya aapne
she wasnt disgusted by you but the girl
she know you are nothing like that
ufff that could have been something but maan was in his rude mode
as he misunderstood her man
and now is regretting it
bless he lost a golden chance
chalo koi nahin more to go right
and what was that with the kabir guy
cheers for pm

Abhi teenager hai... dheere dheere mature bhi ho jayega...😆

lost chance ke liye woh bhi regret karega...😉

Thanks Chavvi for support

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: palindrome

You know,Reading this chapter was like being in Mussorie itself..Each and every detail was perfectly added,along with Maan's monologue..I was really awed with the way you have described the scenario,till I read this line...

She covers her nose with her dupatta not liking the smell of beer that the boys reek of. At that very second, I promise myself never to drink.

and..I fell in love with this "Maan" once again,dear...!!!Iknow,i am repeating myself but thank you so much for giving your readers such adorable and admirable characters..!!!! I wanted to say alot of things but I forgot everything after this line...😛😆 It took my heart away..!!!
Love you so much dear..!!!🤗
Music was really awesome..indeed Khamoshiyan were humming there between them...😊
Once again thank you for updating the story despite being so busy at your personal front...😊
and Many Many congratulations for fifth thread..May this story have more and more threads in future...😊

Thank you Palin!

I have never been to Mussoorie so had to put in my experience of Switzerland in as Mussoorie. I wish I had a chance to travel in India but we have such little vacation time and its almost always spent with his family there.

I don't like the smell of alcohol and someone does not drink because of that... You always find the parts where I put myself in ...and I noticed that you did not comment about the part that Maan was being stupid... 😆

I have a lot of guests in the summer and with the caring for everyone it becomes very hard to write. Where as the story and characters keep flowing in my mind, the time to capture them and write becomes less and less and it frustrates me. Glad you liked it and thanks for the support. 🤗

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

what was that?? 😲😲😲

one min u make him goody goody wala..next min u make dusht dhanav...😡😆

awww...loved it ...i love both the contrasts in his char...in one frame...what shud i say avi?? ufff im at loss of words...😛

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
what was that?? 😲😲😲

one min u make him goody goody wala..next min u make dusht dhanav...😡😆

awww...loved it ...i love both the contrasts in his char...in one frame...what shud i say avi?? ufff im at loss of words...😛

He is a teenager Kittu... getting carried away ...😆

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: dqno1

He is a teenager Kittu... getting carried away ...😆

tho?? he is ur maanu...i mean aashu ka Maan 😃...he shud be sensible enuf nah...

lol geetu 🤣🤣 i love her loads!!!! awww my geetu bachhi!!! i love u avi..for geetu char!!!🤗

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

tho?? he is ur maanu...i mean aashu ka Maan 😃...he shud be sensible enuf nah...

lol geetu 🤣🤣 i love her loads!!!! awww my geetu bachhi!!! i love u avi..for geetu char!!!🤗

I don't know how to make Geet bad... 😆 I love her too. As for Maan, all these mistakes now will make him perfect later..😉

Thanks Kittu...🤗