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Posted: 12 years ago
msk and khabri


Zindagi K Tufano Ka Sahil Hai Teri Dosti
Dil Ke Armaano Ki Manzil Hai Teri Dosti
Zindagi Bhi Ban Jayegi Apni To Jannat
Agar Maut Aane Tak Sath De Teri Dosti…
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ab to life without if ... not possible...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

msk and khabri


Zindagi K Tufano Ka Sahil Hai Teri Dosti
Dil Ke Armaano Ki Manzil Hai Teri Dosti
Zindagi Bhi Ban Jayegi Apni To Jannat
Agar Maut Aane Tak Sath De Teri Dosti'

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thanks to all who clicked like buttons

its my 1st one guys i was jumping around as i got this much warm welcome

i was feeling very happy

be with me in whole journey

prologue 75
part 1 85
part 2 73
part 3 75

thanks to all again
Edited by lovebirdsmaneet - 12 years ago
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ADHOORI ZINDAGI



Banner credits goes to my drakulla aks aka "kingofme"
thanks u sooo much aks ji


Banner credits goes to my praff aks aka "reachsky 2011"
thanks u sooo much praff



A badawala sorry for making u all wait kan pakad ke maafi manging
If any bady wants to curse me do it in hindi as I don't know hindi well😃

A Big thanks for warm welcome cherries i am soo happy here is next part Do let me know ur views.



PART 4
"Bhai tomorrow is "GK" birthday I want to meet her this time at any cost please help me" said Annie
"Aur humari bade potha birthday bhi kal hi hai"
("And our grandson birthday also tomorrow only")
said dadi who entered the room with Maan's fav black coffee.

This time Annie was gone as she forgets her bhai birthday she was praying to god to save her now how can she forgets his bhai birthday and "pari nain" birthday also tomorrow only. Suddenly her devil mind got some idea she pattered her back in proud.

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Kapoor's mansion



The whole mansion was lavished one, screaming about the richness that it has with proud. Why not it was the mansion of "sheela kapoor"


A successful heroine at time, but not now she crushed her dreams and her life with her own hands while running for her fame and money. Now she has nothing in her life her goal is to earn money only money she can do anything and everything to reach that goal. She was a ruthless and heartless woman, who is playing with the innocent soul of geet to do her task. She gives a damn to geet likes and thoughts, forget about her dreams. Sheela kapoor was an orphan but with her beauty and smart brain she easily got entry to films and got success with her hard work, but now it was only a story to be reminded for her. She is the ruler of geet's life "what films" she will do "where to go" etc every decision will be taken by sheela only.

It was an usual day in Kapoor's mansion


Sheela was listening to the story as one of story writer was describing her while she is pampering her doggy and also talking on the phone as she was least interested, her whole concentration was on remuneration geet will get. She eyed the writer to continue while talking on phone he continued as he knows only "GK" can do the charter at any cost he has to convince and sheela decision was final for geet also.

"Its finalized give me the check today itself"
Said sheela after cutting the call who was getting irritated while listening to the story hiding that with smiling face.

"But Mam I need "GK" approval also" said writer hoping to get permission

"you know it very well "GK" was not interested in it why you are asking again how any times I have to get scold" said sheela making an innocent and helpless face. Writer gives her an understanding look just left from there saying that he will send the check. Sheela gives devilish smirk slimes to herself as everything was going smooth the way she wants.

Yes it was the story everyone believes and no one were not interested in knowing the truth also because of sheela past record and her life. Geet became mute spectator in her own life.

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It was sunny day, but in whole Kapoor's mansion one room was filled with darkness and dead silence only faint sounds were there as the person was smiling to herself. The rays were trying to peep through windows to get clear view of that person who is none other than "geet" only.


Geet was smiling to herself after her chutki's call which was adding shine to her beautiful face reminding aniee's nonstop chatter. In today's call her chutki told to her about her pagalpan she did for not lifting her call. She felt blessed for getting chutki in her life how much she can talks she smiled at that thought, she go on telling her about her bhai. Geet knows about her bhai but in tiny mini and also know aniee likes him soo much. Up to now aniee didn't met her fearing for his papa, but she did love her papa and all her family.


Unknown to her tears fell down from her eyes thinking about family and all which every one craves for. She rose from her bed reached photo that was decorated with garland and a woman was seeing her with a smile adoring on her lips while tears were flowing continuously form geet almond eyes.

"Maa'.."

Whispered geet painfully, the word which gives bliss for every woman word which completes a woman but where is her maa she felt chocked with emotions. She was calling her maa continuously from the day when she came to know she is her mother but she was not answering at all. She didn't at least remember when she felt her mother warm hug as she was very small when she was with her. Now only ones she wants to see her feel her mother touch it is her only wish, she was wishing for it from soo many years but it didn't seemed to be come true as her mother can't listen to her. But it her heart was not listening to her waiting for her maa who is not in the whole world. She sunk on the floor breaking down fully seeing her mother portrait said


"Maa tum muje chod ker kyun gaye bathye mai akele yaha kya karu?"
("maa why you leave me alone here what will I do?")

The darkness filled with silence was surrounding her which was killing her heart beat trying to take her into that. Geet was breaking every second it was looking like it was her destiny, she was not fighting back nor willing to go in to that hollow region. Something was stopping her which she herself unknown of that. She was almost at end to given up into that forever to go to her maa for ever she closed her eyes.


. The injection effect was still there and which that devil sheela given to her. Darkness was engulfing geet pushing her far corner where her heart beats were fading away with. With deep thrust to take her into the hallow region. Whenever she reminds her maa she will go out of control with helplessness. Is was very tough job for her to get hold on her tears that was falling unknown to her for her where her eyes were seeing the darkness because they were not willing to see any ray of hope.
She was almost at end giving up into the darkness when she felt slap on her face she jerked open her eyes
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Maan got restlessness again was swatting badly in that ac room also. He was sitting in his study after finishing his breakfast and pooja with her mother not stop pestering. He checked his surroundings and in one swift moment ran to the hall which every one present checked on his family members who were checking the gifts which he brought for them as it was holiday. He was unable to link up on anything that was happening to him he was clueless he got restless in plane also. What was happening around him is there any sign how he has to solve this. He ran to his room to think of it on peaceful mind but it was not helping also he was getting impatient with all these. He opens his personal drawer that was hidden at corner brought a key from that straight away going to his destination. But stopped when his mom naina called him

"Beta come here you came today only and started doing your office work also give some time to me also"
said naina with complaining face

"Ha bhai it's too bad come we will play" said aniee with baby face without thinking


All laughed out loudly with her statement including maan seeing baby sister who is behaving like kid still "MSK" and play he smiles to himself


"Why all are laughing like that am I looking like comedian"Asked aniee with annoyed face

"Yep any doubt we all don't have doubt in that" said dev laughing like manic seeing his sis who is fuming in anger

"I don't have anyone to play with me I want someone" stopped aniee one's and again said "cute little one" eyeing at meera


"Aniee I was fed up with one baby now so don't give me that looks" said meera pointing at dev. He was her soul and life partner but in this age also he makes her running around mansion for his needs while going to office.

"They both are still kids so enjoy them and romance bhi bantha hai haina naina" said dadi with naughty look meera blushed at that while naina just admiring her family while she sensed maan was bothering about something she tried to ask him but stopped listening to aniee

"You all na forget it what will I do now maan bhai aap bathado"
Maan thought for a while as he was not listening to the conversation what was going and the realization struck in his mind at the time his cell beeped saving from his family questions which he didn't want to face.
Naina signed as she knows he won't respond if this call didn't come at that time also while aniee cursing the caller for disturbing her masthi.

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She was crying seeing the pearls that were flowing in geet eyes she don't know what it meant or why they were flowing. While watching her like that she cried with her heart out while wiping away geet tears. She smiled with hiccups seeing geet smile face but with tear stricken face. She again slapped her with her tiny hands and start crying again then again wipes away the tears of geet which was flowing continuously. This is the same thing happening around from last fifteen minutes. Every time geet tries to reach her or touch her she will crawl back or will snap her hand away crying by nodding a no.



She was looking innocent her hair was all messy she was crying laughing saying something in her baby language. She cont see tears in her eyes so just trying to wipe them whenever a new one forming in geet hazels she was wiping way with her hand crying along with geet. Unknown to her wiping away the pain geet was bearing while keeping away the strands that were disturbing geet trying to see her face with at most concentration. She was the angel that god gifted to geet she don't know to feel happy or sad to cry out loud or smile whole heartedly.


Geet again tries to touch her or to hold her tight in her arms she again cries and tries to go way from her. It pained geet a lot how she can forget about her in her own miseries she forget about her little angel. Geet was mad at herself for doing this for not thinking about her she signed and keep quiet for some time. The baby again came back to her checked geet for sometime seeing her quite from her again slapped her and starts laughing innocently. The slap was nothing to geet why it has to be she wants to see only smile on her face she wants nothing in her life.
Geet also smiles with her with anticipation to hug her ones but she ran way in that dark room from geet crying while seeing back with the support of wall. geet tries to follow her

"No don't follow her let her do what she want"


Said doctor Ridhimaa while keeping way the curtains giving some space to sunrays to lighten up the room. She smiled seeing geet who was startled seeing her at home that too in her room with that little angel.

"Why you brought her here you can call me right"
said geet with firm face hiding away her all emotions the moment sun rays entered in to the room

"GK I was trying to call you from yesterday and I did call you today also but you were not responding"
said ridtz trying to calm her
Geet can understand her stand she calmed herself searched for that little angel, she was at the corner of room hiding her face was sobbing silently. Her heart pained but she smiled seeing her small figure, her attempts to hide away in that wall.
"I hope you didn't tell about this to sheela" asked geet with dangerous tone fearing ridtz

"I came here after knowing that she went out after calling in land line phone" said ridtz clearing geet doubts

"Good for you how is she now" enquired geet hoping for best

"No improvement we were trying our best just give me time" said ridtz and continued

"She will respond for you only u know it also so brought her here I hope u understand"

"But make sure it will be last time and I was also at fault so I am reminding calm now but not next time" declared geet while ridtz nodded silently

Geet with slow pace started to walk in her direction where her little angel was trying to hide away from this world with fear while leaving ridtz in her own thoughts.

Rtdtz pov : I don't know what relation they were sharing I don't wanted to know also as a doc my goal is to keep her alive and happy to see her playing like normal children. She know she was at her last stage she will leave this world at that little age itself fir bhi she was hoping to do some miracle and to keep her alive with "GK" as she know's how much "GK" loves her she is "Gk's" breathe and soul.

Her thoughts were broken with "GK" scream
"mansee uto kya hua tuje mansee plz"
geet was crying bitterly seeing her unconscious

Ridtz ran to them and checked her was trying to get hold on the tears that was ready to flow in her eyes as a doc she cont broke down at least in front of patients she have to save this little angel "Mansee kapoor" who was still kid with five years age only.
But the next incident shocked her when mansee whishpered in unconscious state
"maa "

"mansee dekho mai yahi hu teri maa yaha hai ankeho kholo beta" geet pleaded while crying bitterly

prev: part 3 next.PART5


Dedicating this part to mansee
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Kisi ko mera work bakwas lagatho say it to me
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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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hai cherries how ru all

sorry for late update

i had given replies to all

wow i dont know what to feel yaar i was soo happy
when i was reader i cribbed writers for update ab mera no aaya 😆

really happy yaar dont know how to say it

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Edited by lovebirdsmaneet - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

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second third fourth sab ka sab mera ...
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Maansee kash woh sab update ke liye reserve hota 😛

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