SS : Raison d'etre (Chapter 13 - P 63) 25/03

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

was hoping against hope that maan was the guy, geet's dad had set her up with , ...but why do i still feel that it could be maan...am getting stupid

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Sindhu

@sree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Great update. The date was not Maan -i am sad. It is getting complicated.

so is Geet going to like Veer also?

By the way what does this name mean?

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Awesome part jani :D
You got me hooked to it lol.
Pari is such an interesting cheek lol.
Love how she kept calling yash dog lol
Oops veer it is then and not maan. Comphused :(
He sounds to be a nice guy. Now is it maan trying to fool geet?
Cant wait for more :D

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

😃😃 wowww...👏

Nice start...and perfect take off...

the emotions and the way you described ...top notch!!!

and the title...umm...what should i say?? i felt you are trying to convey about geet's pain...and why this story has come to existence!!

"Behind every beautiful thing, there's some kind of pain." and i really dont want to know what pain triggered you to write this.

may be a glimpse of your pain i might see in this story!!!

i dont say it as FF or SS. its A Beautiful story...and it remains as ONE!!!

PS: Thanks darlzz...😉..or else i wud have give a miss ...thanks for the link!!! 😳

Edited by KittuPratzz - 12 years ago

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
😃😃 wowww...👏

Nice start...and perfect take off...

the emotions and the way you described ...top notch!!!

and the title...umm...what should i say?? i felt you are trying to convey about geet's pain...and why this story has come to existence!!

"Behind every beautiful thing, there's some kind of pain." and i really dont want to know what pain triggered you to write this.

may be a glimpse of your pain i might see in this story!!!

i dont say it as FF or SS. its A Beautiful story...and it remains as ONE!!!

PS: Thanks darlzz...😉..or else i wud have give a miss ...thanks for the link!!! 😳

aha aa gayi 😳😃

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: honeygrape

aha aa gayi 😳😃

hehehe 😃😆 tum bulaye..aur hum naa aaye 😉

its tooo good!!! 🤗 it reminded me some one. i loved it...and i love u tooo😃

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Awesome Update ..!

Me too thought that Guy to be Maan , me wanted too him to be Maan only

Loved it ..Cont snn .!

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Enjoyed it. Like Pari and Veer. It would be interesting to see what happens next... Very well written...

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

hmm..so my guess was pretty right..Maan is not suraj uncle's son..The "Guy in limelight" without making an appearance yet is some "Veer"...😆Why do I feel,Maan and Veer could be same..as Maan's full name could be "Maan veer Khurana"...🤣 Did i sound stupid??? I think,I did..😛 Anyways,whoever this veer is,I know my maaneet would be together at the end,since story is going on in flashback..and I am loving every bit of this story dear...Thank you so so so much for writing it..😃

Geet has great friends as yash and pari...They seemed to be a cute couple in process...

Waiting eagerly for diwali...😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

hi thaanks 4 da pm n superb update! Pari is so sweet! Yash n Pari on a date! So its Veer! Ahh that itwld Maan! Bt Pari is right...!! Veer n Geet talk! so he did nt make it as well! wonderfully written! update soon