SS : Raison d'etre (Chapter 13 - P 63) 25/03 - Page 10

the first meeting was good... so it was more of business with pleasure lunch.. both noticing minute things about each other for the first time outsdide their office setting...
geet toh itni doob gayi that she forgot the blind date... well was expecting maan to be a blind date set up by geet's dad... looking forward to see what happens next...how did they end up together😳

simply wow . there r few things which doesn't need to words to appreciate . its just ur feelings makes them so special and i say this ur piece of writing is to b cherished silently ,just wanna feel each every word of urs. awesome going and just loved it .

fabulous writing ! just came across today...and loved it ! their business meeting turned into something more pleasant and may be personal too... waiting to know , if maan is the man set up by her father...

Originally posted by: farzu3008

superb update. i just came across this ff and i loved it. superb writing. confusion is there concerning the boy. hope its maan her boss as that will be so interesting. plz continue soon waiting eagerly

Thank you for the response. Hope to clear your confusions super soon :)

Originally posted by: cristallus

The story is too interesting and written well

Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying it :)

@tamanna1391

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

Waiting to read more...

WOn't keep you waiting for a long time😊

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

nice story

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

interesting and excited also

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

Thank you for the warm response. Will continue super soon :)

Originally posted by: sree10

Beautiful update, loved it very much.

Thank you! I am glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: .Tulip.

awsm story n amazing writing😊

n indeed their deserts were😆

great job .👍🏼

Glad you find their deserts funny😆 Thank you!

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi dear..thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Geet n Maan have lunch! She forget abt her personal committment! Her dad will b angry! update soon..

Let's see if her Dad would be angry or would surprise her. 😆 Thanks for the response :)

Originally posted by: punam2712

JUST FOUND IT AND WILL READ IT SOON

Welcome to the story. Hope you enjoy it :)

Originally posted by: dqno1

Chapter 3:

Awesome. At first I too wondered if he was Suraj uncle's son.

It is always amazing when people we work with are revealed to us in a different way.

As if our minds are used to seeing them as so and so, head of this department, works with so and so.

When we find them as people like us, with similar interests and lives, we respond in a normal way.

This meeting led both of them to reveal themselves a little bit to each other.

The desserts were funny.

Thanks for updating Athena.

Yes when we look closer, the people we know and see almost everyday might surprise us. Knowing a person through work would only tell few things about them, but getting to know what they're outside the four walls of their cabin would be interesting.

Glad you found the desserts funny

Thanks for reading Avi (I think i got your name right, I saw it from one of your conversations.)

Originally posted by: honeygrape

aaah an update thanku...

the part where she craved for her mother was suuuperb...very very beautifully written...brought tears...dont have enuf words to say how gud it was...

loved the part...really are there such ice creams in real??? and still she dint meet the guy whom she came for and mystery still continues...it can be Maan too i thot atleast at the end he ll say that am the one who you came for...but dint happen

ohh thankk so much updating...looking forward to read more of ur works...continue very sooon

They aren't ice creams. They are sweet dishes. Yes they are there, though they aren't available in canlis. I took creative liberty there

Here's the website where you can get to know how to make them at home. Cheers!

http://teach.genetics.utah.edu/content/begin/dna/Have%20Your%20DNA%20student.pdf

And thanks for mentioning her craving for her mother. No matter how older one gets, how mature one can be, some thing still brings back your five year old self out.
Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

The day I started to read you a very good writer also started her very first work.What a coincidence...Every day I wait for both of you.I don know this is your first venture..?If yes hates off...Two writers started their journey with such extra ordinary stories Totally different concept .Different theme ...But command over language story ...out of world...Loving both of works...This chapter really cool..if I say in terms of Maan Geet meeting...Maan was not aware about her real purpose but She was under Maan's charismatic personality.She had forgotten why she was here.

After whole lunch meeting she remembered the real reason of her arrival. But me thinking is Maan same guy ?...If he is the one why he was discussing business matters...

Lots of lots to come in front of readers...Even I can write so so much to express myself ...fir bhi I will need more words to tell how much I like this...

Whole concept is clear ya suspense yet here which is making things confusing and with story to come whole things will also come to us.

i am waiting for next plz update soon.

Sonia 😳 🤗

Thanks a lot Sonia. Your comment always leaves me both humbled and honored. I am humbled to be trusted with the writing, though all I have written is three chapters till now. That means a lot to me.
As for the surprise factor, it will be cleared sooner. Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: palindrome

I was totally lost and when the chapter ended,I was like,why did it end so early???😕

"Beautiful,awesome and all the good adjectives" in this world can't be enough for your "writing"dear..Chapter was indeed a bliss for the reader...👏

Mystery about "suraj uncle's son" is still lingering there...😆 But I liked the way you have removed their "professional masks" to reveal their non professional and little personal side to each other...His grumpy and strict boss seemed to be a compassionate gentleman with a tender heart..😊

Waiting eagerly for next chapter dear..

PS-I would love to taste their desserts...especially the DNA one...😃

Thank you for all your kind words :)
A science student would love DNA dessert, while a dentist would go for Toothy grin. You aren't a dentist then😆

Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Maan-Geet had lunch together...

Maan is so caring...he patted her, removed tear drops from her cheek, consoled her when she was sad remembering her mother...

he got attracted towards her...abhi files beech mein nahin hain to ek doosre ko notice kar rahe hain...hope he is same guy her father send her to meet...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

Yes they will notice when you take all files and projects out of the equation. Thanks for the response :)

Originally posted by: yappingduck

the first meeting was good... so it was more of business with pleasure lunch.. both noticing minute things about each other for the first time outsdide their office setting...
geet toh itni doob gayi that she forgot the blind date... well was expecting maan to be a blind date set up by geet's dad... looking forward to see what happens next...how did they end up together😳

If the other person distracts you by showing the real him, you ought to forget things.😆 Thank you for the response :)

Originally posted by: hermoso

simply wow . there r few things which doesn't need to words to appreciate . its just ur feelings makes them so special and i say this ur piece of writing is to b cherished silently ,just wanna feel each every word of urs. awesome going and just loved it .

Thanks a lot. I am humbled by such appreciation. Thanks again :)

wowie...do i see an update comin??😃

superb update. u write so beautifully. plz continue soon waiting eagerly