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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

The day I started to read you a very good writer also started her very first work.What a coincidence...Every day I wait for both of you.I don know this is your first venture..?If yes hates off...Two writers started their journey with such extra ordinary stories Totally different concept .Different theme ...But command over language story ...out of world...Loving both of works...This chapter really cool..if I say in terms of Maan Geet meeting...Maan was not aware about her real purpose but She was under Maan's charismatic personality.She had forgotten why she was here.

After whole lunch meeting she remembered the real reason of her arrival. But me thinking is Maan same guy ?...If he is the one why he was discussing business matters...

Lots of lots to come in front of readers...Even I can write so so much to express myself ...fir bhi I will need more words to tell how much I like this...

Whole concept is clear ya suspense yet here which is making things confusing and with story to come whole things will also come to us.

i am waiting for next plz update soon.

Sonia 😳 🤗

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

aaah an update😃😃 thanku...

the part where she craved for her mother was suuuperb...very very beautifully written...brought tears...dont have enuf words to say how gud it was...

loved the part...really are there such ice creams in real??? and still she dint meet the guy whom she came for and mystery still continues...it can be Maan too😳 i thot atleast at the end he ll say that am the one who you came for...but dint happen😕

ohh thankk so much updating...looking forward to read more of ur works...continue very sooon

Edited by honeygrape - 12 years ago

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valli30

@valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

awesome update👏👏
geet was working forgetting her date 😛
both seeing new side of each other.
but still confused is maan the same guy her father told her to meet
dessert pics 😆😆
eagerly waiting for the next part

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Mansi Tripathi

@mansi.tripathi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Nice part
Maan is so caring person
Geet awed by maan
Continue soon

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Awesome update dear.
Awww i absolutely loved their meeting hehe.
Maan was such a gentlemen. He cared for her head then him being compassionate. Wooow.
Both watching each other eat was too cute.
Aww loved their desserts lol. Very good idea lol.
He also patted her back when she cough. How caring.
Ok this update really left me awed hehe.
Cant wait for more :D

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Divya

@april12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

awesome update

it was not a date it was a "supposedly business meeting" 😆 I'm thinking there is something more to it.

For the first time, geet gets to see the real maan and not her boss and they have lunch and a good time together until she is reminded of why she was there in the first place

and there dessert choice was too 😆 weird

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

I was totally lost and when the chapter ended,I was like,why did it end so early???😕

"Beautiful,awesome and all the good adjectives" in this world can't be enough for your "writing"dear..Chapter was indeed a bliss for the reader...👏

Mystery about "suraj uncle's son" is still lingering there...😆 But I liked the way you have removed their "professional masks" to reveal their non professional and little personal side to each other...His grumpy and strict boss seemed to be a compassionate gentleman with a tender heart..😊

Waiting eagerly for next chapter dear..

PS-I would love to taste their desserts...especially the DNA one...😃

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago