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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 101


@pari_jyothika
wow ur first n mine too, so Milan is special for both of us😃.
@deepthich
Thank u dear, I always feel so giddy after your comment😳
@hermoso
Ur comment actually took me by surprise'😲 It was really beautiful n I loved the lines your wrote for maaneet👏
@mila1
WOW!! 1000 comment on milan😃, hayee' now it's as special for me as it is for u' Btw I also became Goldie abhi so we are moving together😉.
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Every comment is precious but like big updates makes u happy, a little elaborate comment makes me happy😃. So thanks a ton for taking out your time n leaving a awesome comment.
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Thank u for all the wishes friends and a huge thnx to the silent readers who commented on Milan completing a century🤗. It means heaps that u all love the story so much.

⭐️⭐️HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY TO ALL⭐️⭐️


@nalini, @deptisam
A special big-wala thnx for gifting the aweeesome banners. Luv u❤️
This part is dedicated to:
@mila1
For becoming a Goldie⭐️⭐️
@diptisam
For rocking the exams🥳






(geet's pov)
Fiza Mein Mehakti Shaam Ho Tum
Pyaar Mein Jhalakta Jaam Ho Tum
Sine Mein Chupaye Phirte Hain Hum Yaadein Tumhari
Isliye Meri Zindagi Ka Dusra Naam Ho Tum
(maan's pov)
Parchaee Aapki Humare Dil Me Hai,
Yaade Aapki Humari Aankhon Me Hai.
Kaise Bhulaye Hum Aapko,
Pyar Aapka Humari Saanson Me Hai
-by hermoso❤️






She woke with the most contented smile on her face. The smell of barn n bright light of sun made morning delightful. Her body was tucked in his warmth. He had his shirt on, the button were open. The partition wrapped around her securely. She stretched n realized why she was hidden inside his shirt pressed to his form, because she was naked. That was the actual wake up call. She pulled herself into a sitting position instantly.

Oh god!! What did they...? She tried to remember. Scenes played in her mind, random bits n pieces, words n sentences swirling around. She held her head as echoes of last night screamed to her. Him being just in shirt ringed a faint bell but nothing more. How did she come here? She had a bad headache. Standing up she felt dizzy. Somehow she collected her clothes that were scattered around n wore them.
The door of the stable was half open she wondered if someone saw them. Quickly she picked up Maan's underwear n pants and made him wear them. He groaned n twisted but remained asleep. She thanked the heavens and before leaving looked back at him. Nothing had changed she was still the same unlucky Geet but strangely enough she believed in god again.

His hand came out to search for but he didn't find what he was seeking for. He sat up and the movement caused his head to spin. Crap!! He felt empty yet filled and what was he searching for? Geet? Yes, she was here. Wasn't she? He knew. His restlessness increased as he tried to recall the happenings that were causing such extreme anxiety. He stood up looking around at the stable; her musky, sweet smell filled the air n his skin prickled with her touch. Each cell sang of her name n a slow smiled graced his lips. It disappeared the next moment evaporating in heat of confusion n worry. If she was here-which he was sure of-where did she go then?
He came to back to his quarters where Geet was also staying. Just as he entered his cell rang.
She cried on the phone, looking at herself in the mirror, it was all so horrible. She didn't know how this happened but it was a big-big mistake. How could she be such a big fool do something so idiotic?
Why are you crying?
I..we' I mean' we
Geet didn't know what was wrong but she was worried now. Shanaya first calm down n breath, okay?
Hmm' Shanaya did as she was told.
Now tell me what happened?
We' I mean Rohan n I. We had sex.


What? How could you? Maan exclaimed loudly. You messed up big this time.
I know' I know. Rohan rubbed his forehead. I didn't mean to it just happened, we were both drunk n then we came to my quarters n' you know the rest.
Maan rolled his eyes in exasperation. He had his own problems that were big enough n it wasn't helping that he had a foolish cousin. I don't think Shanaya is like your regular girls.
Of course she isn't.
Calm down. Maan was surprised by his sudden anger.
She is nave Maan and that's why I am worried.
Rohan n worried about a girl that too after his purpose being fulfilled? Maan asked exaggerating his astonishment.
Oh thanks Maan that you think of me as a dog.
No seriously. How can you be worried? Wait a sec, do you love her?
Wh- no. I don't love her. He didn't even know what love was. He wasn't like his cousin n Geet. They could spend years wailing n mourning but he couldn't, as simple as that. The sappy feeling wasn't his cup of tea.


It means nothing. Shanaya said bitterly. She had never thought that her first time would be some meaningless sex with a playboy. You know how he is.
Rohan is a nice guy, Shanaya. He is not that bad as you assume him to be.
Yeah right. She said sarcastically, wiping her tears. She was drunk but he could have stopped, okay he was drunk too. So what in the end he got what he wanted n now he would throw her away. At this more tears leaked from her eyes.
Look Shanaya don't cry please. Tell me where are you?
I am in the quarters bathroom, not the bedroom one where I.. I slept with him. I didn't want to see his face. Or face him to be more specific, she said inwardly. But you don't worry I will leave in a bit.
Nai, you wait for me. I will come-
No need Geet I don't want to see anyone.
Geet came out into the living room after Shanaya had hung up. She had already taken bath, kept the saree she worn earlier securely into her bag like a memento.
Maan looked up n found Geet coming. Her eyes widened, she certainly wasn't expecting him.
Rohan, you give her time. Wait for a few hours if still you didn't hear from her then go search.
Hmm'
I will call you later.
Shanaya is there only. Geet informed. She called you? Maan asked. Yes. She is in the bathroom downstairs in same quarters as Rohan. Oh' You should tell Rohan. No, let him figure out for himself. He looked up n now only noticed the deep blush on her cheek, in fact her entire face. She wasn't looking pale like always. Her face was glowing hugely like fresh morning. She appeared extraordinarily beautiful.
When she found him staring at her like that her heart started thudding, she gulped turning around but it was too late. He stopped her keeping his hand on her shoulder n turning her back to face him. He was so close that her wet hairs brushed his face. He took a sharp breath in n her eyes got fixed on the water the drop above his lips beside his nose. What he saw in her hazels was incomprehensible.
Her hand on its own accord came up. With a gentle stroke of her finger she wiped the drop but her sensuous touch stayed there lingering near his lips n as she leaned in close. Maan held his breath. Something mighty rouse inside him while his whole being thrummed with excitement and anticipation.
She moved back and her lowered her eyes immediately. She looked as surprised by her action as him.
You... must be having headache. Mai juice lekar aati hu. She scurried to the kitchen and Maan stood numb.
The action was too bold for her. She touched him and was going to kiss him? Maan touched his cheek. Heat emanated from the spot going down n collecting in his groin. God! Now he needed a cold bath, to calm down both mentally n carnally.
He waited for whole 10 minutes as Maan said but could do it no more. Quickly wearing some clothes he came downstairs to go search for her but found her running instead towards the door, in just his shirt? First, he heaved a sigh of relief and then stopped her before she could go out.
Where are you going? He demanded irately, instantly regretted though seeing her condition. She looked messy; he had never seen her like that. She was always tip-top, not a hair out of place. A wave of hurt passed though him when he realized that she felt their night to be a mistake. It had been wonderful. He remembered when he had kissed n sucked on her sensitive folds how she had moaned his name, how she had asked him to go faster n deeper until she reached the peak of her first orgasm. Since she was a virgin it had hurt her a little n more him-despite of him not being a touchy guy-but she had accommodated him right away. She was so tight n wet, without any ifs n buts, it was the best night of his life and she regretted it all. Was he hurt? No way in this life time. He told himself inwardly.
She started crying, her nose n chubby cheeks becoming red. He pulled her into him and she didn't protest as he slid down to the floor against the door with her. Burying her face in his chest, she spoke in muffled voice. Don't hurt me.
A guilty knot twisted his stomach. I would never hurt you. He said tightening his embrace around her.

Seeing him gulping the juice she stood there thinking what he must be thinking.
She brought juice for him n the moment that had passed between them a while ago. Maan couldn't help the waves of sheer happiness n content that shook him every time he thought about her or looked at her. He tried to calm his overenthusiastic heart to not get its hope high, last she had brought him juice it hadn't meant anything, things had remained the same. But his heart wasn't ready to listen, the hopeless case it was.
Sit. He said in trying be serious n not show how his insides were all mushy like a teenager. With her head hung down she moved to sit across from him on the other couch but snaking a hand around her waist he pulled her down. She gasped landing almost above him n moving back to create some distance. Her heart beat so briskly inside her chest she was scared it would stop.
The way she moved back was not usual she didn't flinch away it was more like blushing away. He could see goosebump over her skin, his own body craved for her like never before. He could feel himself going hard. Oh hell! He could even talk to her now without getting aroused. It was as if a night had heightened their senses to each other. He gulped when she looked up at him. If she continued staring at him like that he didn't know what limits he would do to her.
Holding onto his control damn just for sake he turned to look the other way. You left me alone today morning. He asked n Geet stiffened.
How much did he remember? He couldn't remember much, he was drunk. It would be out of his nature if he remembered something.
When she didn't say anything he looked at her again. Her face had acquired a defiant expression n eyes were hard. She was shutting herself again.
You are hiding something? He asked, his face was devoid of expression but eyes were pleading.
I..I am not. She stuttered.
Why are you lying to me? Why you always have to lie? He didn't have a good feeling about this. Did he somehow hurt her or something? He wanted to know so badly what had happened. It was killing him that she was hiding something from him again this time it included him so he had every right to know.
He gently cupped her face but she unmovable n untouchable. He gritted his teeth as she pushed his hand away not harshly yet persistently. You were drunk and it had started raining. Of course I couldn't carry you here. Rohan was in party. So I came back.
Maan smiled crudely. You can't fool me Geet. I can see right through you.
Well congrats then. She said uncharacteristically. See through me and find out for yourself.
She stood up to go into kitchen again when he spoke from behind. I wouldn't need to do that you will tell me everything from your own mouth. He challenged clenching his hand so hard that his nails dug painfully into his skin. You can't hide from me forever.
She walked away without a response. Only if knew, she wasn't hiding she was protecting.
They ate lunch in silence the tough strain between them hung in air like dangerous electric charge and it wasn't just Geet hiding issue. There was this sexual tension that had tightened around them, desperately clawing n pushing them towards each other every time their eyes met. Geet had the strongest urge to hold him to her chest n Maan' he felt like jumping over her any moment. But both remained put. Maan couldn't hide much of what he was going though. But Geet remained oblivious to it, the little she noticed she ignored. She had also gone back to her nervous, shy self and Maan wondered if she actually had passed that sarcastic comment in the morning.
Rohan n Shanaya had left in the morning only shortening their trip and Maan was restless the whole day. He punched the wall, she wasn't telling him. It was so frustrating, the feeling of knowing being a part of something big n crucial yet remaining unaware n outcast.
By the evening they both had had enough and when Maan informed about them going back to KM, Geet felt relieved.
Jia was elated to have her Daddy back. She had agreed to stay back but had made Dadimaa's n Annie life hell. When he came back then only she let everybody breathe. Maan was also comforted, seeing the face of his daughter some of the tension on his shoulders shed off. After feeding Jia he narrator a story to her n she fell asleep. Which was a miracle considering her recent routine she didn't slept this early but she must be tired after exhausting Annie n her nan.
Maan too was all worn out; he knew Geet had eaten because he had seen her going downstairs for dinner. He didn't have dinner though n came back to his room with the idea of sleeping but somehow knew that won't happen. He couldn't sleep.
Geet slowly cleared her throat catching Maan's attention leaving him shell-shock. First that indescribable glow on her face, then her bold act, her comment n now she had actually taken the pain to bring his food. She noticed that he hadn't eaten? His chest swelled 10 times. She brought food for him. She really did.
Involuntarily his eyes moved down. She had changed into a simple white suit that she generally slept in.
Suppressing the joy that erupted inside and the growing desire he decided to garb the opportunity for the most vital thing and seek answers for the questions that were bugging him. It didn't matter if she regretted bringing his food; he was that anxious for the truth.





Precap- Reports n the room...😲








Wait a sec let me find a hiding place first. Yeah' now u can hit me with whatever u want. I am sorry it wasn't what you expected and this honestly wasn't what I had planned initially but the idea had stuck me while I was starting to type the previous part n this was the reason I stopped where I had. By now you would have figured out to expect the unexpected from Milan so accept my apologies😛. A big revelation is on its way by the way as a consolation n who all are waiting for maaneet's Milan, that's also is not very far away.












Please LIKE N COMMENT if u liked the update...!!



Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 12 years ago
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Seriously speaking... What was that??
now i know.. expect the unexpected from osheen and milan...
and coming to the update... it was awesome.. and very unexpected...
Rohan and shanaya ended up in milan 😆 .. humne kya socha and wat happened...
but i loved the way maaneet were reacting.. they were actually very cute and sweet... though both are unaware of wat happened... and that reminds me, the confession of jia not his kid and wat she went thro is not in their memory... grrr... after so long they actually confessed and now they dont remember.. seriously u are so mean to us...
Actually i liked the way maan told rohan to handle things himself... i wud have felt it weird if they interfered and all.. so this was more realistic...
and actually the bold geet was defo an improvement.. and greater improvement was both of their glow and the restless feeling...
And am so glad that maan is not ready to give up and planning to persist her in knowing the truth...
i just cant wait for the truth... and ofcourse the reports thing...
Ab jaldi se next update kardo.. i cant wait for the next...
Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago
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Awesome, nice part
so beautiful
awww I was expecting something like this
and maan maan y u drink and jab bhi drunk hota hain tab sahi karta and phir hosh aane pe bhul jata hain
now m thinking shall we send maan always drunk or in hosh
my head is spinning lol
joking yaar
poor guy and geet poor her
iye dono ka kya hoga
Rohan -Shanaya iye dono bhi 😳😆 it's unexpected
guessing rohan has some feeling for Shanaya as his reaction make us think
loved bold geet
little bit improvement
grt now maan is all planned and set to make geet confessed
let's see
continue soon


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago

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