If Only You Saw Me (10) - Page 68

Originally posted by: Onir

itni nervous kyun ho rahi hai... tension mat le... I know it will be too good. Aaram se likh time leke... 😃

You're saying it will be good because you're too kind to say bad about anything. I'm not going to let my nervousness take over, that is for sure. Baaqi baad mein dekha jaaye ga. 😊

Originally posted by: Onir

Avi zero error wale category mein sirf Mayyo aati hai... me toh dur dur tak is category ke boundary mein bhi nahi aati... 😊
ask Mayyo she does proofreading she will tell you about my loads of errors... 😆

Arey Onir, if you ever see the draft I write of the story, you're going to believe it when I say that yours are ready to be posted when you send them to me. 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Twinnie ne bhi DQ giri seekh li hai! 😆

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Yeah... ab itna sara DQgiri challu rehti hai toh mujhe kuch todha bahut sikhna hi pada 😉 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Dil pe nahin li but what was wronged should be apologised for. 😊

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okay tujhe aisa lagta hai toh... but kuch wrong nahi tha 😳

Originally posted by: mayyo13

You're saying it will be good because you're too kind to say bad about anything. I'm not going to let my nervousness take over, that is for sure. Baaqi baad mein dekha jaaye ga. 😊

I know you're good in writing so I'm m saying so... or else I'm very blunt and rude... 😉
Accha hi hoga ... I can bet on it... 🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Arey Onir, if you ever see the draft I write of the story, you're going to believe it when I say that yours are ready to be posted when you send them to me. 😆

Mayyo both Avi and myself can vouch for your proffreading... and any first draft will have errors... when I send you it has errors means errors hai... you read and correct them before posting means you minimise the chances of errors... (now where am I going with this... I don't understand did you?? ) 😉

Intehaa ho gayi intezaar ki...
Na aayi update tumhari...

Originally posted by: Onir

Yeah... ab itna sara DQgiri challu rehti hai toh mujhe kuch todha bahut sikhna hi pada 😉 😆

Lage raho! 😆

Originally posted by: Onir

I know you're good in writing so I'm m saying so... or else I'm very blunt and rude... 😉
Accha hi hoga ... I can bet on it... 🤗

I can't imagine you being blunt and rude any time and with anyone. 🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I can't imagine you being blunt and rude any time and with anyone. 🤗

I would like you to remain with this thought... iska bahut discussion hua hai kal Maggie ke thread pe ... 😆
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