If Only You Saw Me (10) - Page 69

Originally posted by: Onir

Mayyo both Avi and myself can vouch for your proffreading... and any first draft will have errors... when I send you it has errors means errors hai... you read and correct them before posting means you minimise the chances of errors... (now where am I going with this... I don't understand did you?? ) 😉

I'm not talking about little typos. Mere likhne ka style thoda ajeeb hai. I bypass portions of the chapter to write the end first and then continue on in a random order. Jab tak finally proofread na karun, it doesn't make much sense if you read it then. 😆

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Intehaa ho gayi intezaar ki...
Na aayi update tumhari...

Woh aa gaya
Dekho dekho woh aa gaya! 😆

To get a full view of it, shaam tak ka intezaar karo.

Originally posted by: Onir

I would like you to remain with this thought... iska bahut discussion hua hai kal Maggie ke thread pe ... 😆
🤗

Maggie ke thread pe ye discussion hua if you're blunt or not? 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I'm not talking about little typos. Mere likhne ka style thoda ajeeb hai. I bypass portions of the chapter to write the end first and then continue on in a random order. Jab tak finally proofread na karun, it doesn't make much sense if you read it then. 😆

How do you manage the flow while writing so... But yet you do a fabulous job 👍🏼 ...
you're proffreading is very good... are you English literature student by any chance 😉

Originally posted by: Onir

How do you manage the flow while writing so... But yet you do a fabulous job 👍🏼 ...
you're proffreading is very good... are you English literature student by any chance 😉

I think it's only the pointers that keep me on the right track and not let the story deviate.

@Bold: Took you too long to realise this, eh twinnie! 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Maggie ke thread pe ye discussion hua if you're blunt or not? 😆

nahi basic nature type discussion hua tha 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I think it's only the pointers that keep me on the right track and not let the story deviate.

@Bold: Took you too long to realise this, eh twinnie! 😆

pointers... okay 😊
I always knew somewhere you're a English literature student but wanted to confirm 😉

Originally posted by: Onir

I know you weren't serious when you said it... me bhi mazak kar rahi thi ... tu ab serious mat ho ja 😉

meri twinnie 🤗 Avi... sweet and salty... 😆 krack jack biscuit yaad aa gaya 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

I love Krackjack biscuits...🥱

me too 😳

Originally posted by: Onir

pointers... okay 😊
I always knew somewhere you're a English literature student but wanted to confirm 😉

So you have my confirmation now. I am a sort of English literature student. 😊