If Only You Saw Me (10) - Page 66

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Typing chalu hai. Kal shaam tak hopefully ready kar loongi. 😊

Originally posted by: dqno1

Haan iodex, vicks anything.. Mummy used to mix it in lotion before putting anything on me.

Serious ban jayegi... na baba... rehne de..

main hi koshish karti hoon, thodi kam DQ-giri karne ki...😆

Nahin. DQ-giri mein kami nahin aani chahiye. Sab aise hi chalta rahey. 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Bohut pages huwe kya...

me waiting excitedly...

Pages ka toh pata nahin but I can say it's around the usual length if not more.

And I'm getting nervous about it. 🤔

kyun aisa? usually u are the confident one phir ab kya hua...

Originally posted by: dqno1

kyun aisa? usually u are the confident one phir ab kya hua...

😲 Kahin tum ne kuch aisa waisa toh nahi likha hai...😲

I mean likha hai toh 😳I'll read it for sure...😉abhi bhej de...😆

When am I confident? I never really say I'm nervous but there always is a bit of it. Iss baar thodi zyaada hai aur kuch aise waise ki waja se nahin but because the scenes aren't really playing out the way I would like them to.

Aisa waisa abhi toh nahin hai. 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

When am I confident? I never really say I'm nervous but there always is a bit of it. Iss baar thodi zyaada hai aur kuch aise waise ki waja se nahin but because the scenes aren't really playing out the way I would like them to.

Aisa waisa abhi toh nahin hai. 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Aaram se likh. It will sort itself out. You and Onir are the most logical people I know. Chance of error are 0 to nil...😃 Mera GN, Mari... someone is stopping by..catch u later.. let me go make some snacks..😃

I think chances of error are still there. I found a grammatical error in one of the old chapters of this story while going through it.

Good night Avi! Enjoy your time! 🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Did I say anyone ignores me?

Khair, I wasn't serious when I said that! Of course I know nor my twinnie neither my sweet and salty Avi ignore me! 😳

I know you weren't serious when you said it... me bhi mazak kar rahi thi ... tu ab serious mat ho ja 😉

meri twinnie 🤗 Avi... sweet and salty... 😆 krack jack biscuit yaad aa gaya 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Jhoot bole kawwa kaate! 😛

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Mere sawal ka jawab toh diya hi nahin. 😆