maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

mana pyaar bhi jatate hai

par agle hi pal ,

mera saara khoon pee jaate hai

just read this poem... funny... sach main... even i used to ask reshmi y cant geet do a prank on maan atleast once... but tumhaari tho ada hai hatke that u told it in such a unique way and i really loved it!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

just read ur poem in tanyas EB... gr8... commented there too

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
mana pyaar bhi jatate hai
par agle hi pal ,
mera saara khoon pee jaate hai

just read this poem... funny... sach main... even i used to ask reshmi y cant geet do a prank on maan atleast once... but tumhaari tho ada hai hatke that u told it in such a unique way and i really loved it!

saachi yaar

maine end main

rashmi devi ko pray bhi kiya tha

to do saome help geet in this matter

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
just read ur poem in tanyas EB... gr8... commented there too

which one dear

and give me link here you comment

me want to read

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

which one dear

and give me link here you comment

me want to read

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/82472078

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

i am waiting for ritzy WS... so thought to read ur poem for it

her smile as bright as the sun

never fails to make my day

every time

i lose my self,when i look in her way

world seems to vanish, as i look in her way

need to stop my self,before i start move towards her way

i can't stand to see her down

her tears destroy me from in

i do my best to make her smile

and remove every reason from earth

which can try to make her fail

to see her happy,is all i want

nothing more

and nothing less

but still i can't have her

and allow to her to change me

loved these lines...

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

have to go now...

light nahi hai... lappy charge khatham...

bye... see u later

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OsheenDGr8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

The poems are really nice dear

U are a gifted writer⭐️👏

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: OsheenDGr8
The poems are really nice dear
U are a gifted writer⭐️👏

thaxxx alot dear

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: mrs.msk
Congrats on the new page NIshu!!!!

Since I read Sati from time to time!! I loved that fan fic and geet's pain.

Please keep this up!!

lIke I said before adn I will say it again!! You are so talented with these poems and I wouldn't mind reading a book based on your poems only based on all the fan fics!!!!😆 (think about it!!😉))))

yeh kya tha simi

meri taarif

phir meri leg pulling

me confuse😕