maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1 - Page 53

Originally posted by: sam111111

nishu pyaar radha ka bhi sach tha pyaar rudmani ka bhi the lines just stolen the heart yaar👏

ur poem's r aswm ,dil ko choo lene wali👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

My one tu awesome hai hii
Other ff wali bhi mast hai
U had great voucablary
And its all seen in ur poem
Really great



Raat ke andhero mai shubha ki jhalak mili thi
Unhi jab teri aane ki khabar suni thi maine
Jag ki aubha tu roz hua karti thi
Meri subha usse raat ki chandi thi kahi

Well poet ko poem hi girf karte hai naa

👏

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

THAN GOD

PURI POEM MAIN KOI LINE TOH ACCHI LAGI😆

arey dear poori poem mein tho wo line jyaada acchi lagi😆
kabhi aisa huwa hai jo mujhe tumhare poem acchi nahi lagi😆

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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ME FINE MISS SHAMPA😉

Its Sampa,
sab mere naam ke saath extra 'H' laga dete hain.Poor me. 😭

Originally posted by: jooo

ur poem's r aswm ,dil ko choo lene wali👏

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no : 49

its for saathiya

ff by tellyme

saath to hum

pahle bhi the

par ab ,

yeh kya naya

khumaar sa hai !

tu

saath hai mere

par aur paaas aaye

iske liye

yeh dil bekaraar sa hai !

hum mille the

kyoki milna tha hame !

har kadam

saath chale the

kyoki ,

dost banaaya tha tumhe !

par

is kadar

saanso main

bas jaauge tum

yeh to nahi

bataya tha tumne !

ab yahaa aa kar

chalo

kuch to behisaab

kar jaaye

aao

itne paas aa jaye

ke

judaa hone ke

har derwaaje ko band

kar aaye

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Its Sampa,
sab mere naam ke saath extra 'H' laga dete hain.Poor me. 😭

Originally posted by: palindrome

Lovely poem dear...👏

perfectly describing geet's longing for her love.😳..😊

Originally posted by: sam111111

arey dear poori poem mein tho wo line jyaada acchi lagi😆
kabhi aisa huwa hai jo mujhe tumhare poem acchi nahi lagi😆