maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1 - Page 51

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


thaxxx alot dear

which one you like most

love2_soma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago





superb n beautiful...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr the lovely poems n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...







Mituag thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
My one tu awesome hai hii
Other ff wali bhi mast hai
U had great voucablary
And its all seen in ur poem
Really great



Raat ke andhero mai shubha ki jhalak mili thi
Unhi jab teri aane ki khabar suni thi maine
Jag ki aubha tu roz hua karti thi
Meri subha usse raat ki chandi thi kahi

Well poet ko poem hi girf karte hai naa
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Posted: 12 years ago

That is just amazing

your are so talented





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Posted: 12 years ago
[ poem no : 47
i ts for Pregnant with
a player' kid
FF BY
nandy_bru]

You've turned the FF into a much lighter mood.Tho the story itself is written in not so gloomy tangent but your hilarious poem makes us laugh at poor Geet's plight.Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


few lines for


A THRAHED BARBIE
FF BY BULBUL.


1.) papa acche hai
mummy acchi hai

par
lagta hai,
woh abhi bhi bacche hai

tabhi toh
woh ladte hi itna
har baat par kutti karte hai.
isliye ab hum bhi unse darte hai




2.) kyu aisa hai
meRi khushiyo main bhi
ghar main maahol gum jaisa hai

kya mera class main first aana bhi
mummy papa ke liye
normal jaisa hai




3.) aaj nani bhi
mujhe chod ka chali gayi
jo ik khushi thi
mere paas ,
woh bhi
muh mod ka chali gayi




4.) zindagi ,
nayi udaan
bharne lagi !

hu main bhi zinda ,
yeh mujhe
meri ruh
kahne lagi




ok girls
as you see
above one i not one poem
but her feelings ,which she pen down
from very small age



atleast hit like button guys ,i think itna toh main deserve karti hu.



hey nishu kaha thi itni din kitni baar aayi thi main yaha par tera tho pata hi nahi


sweetsampa39 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
[ poem no :48
its for ADHOORI
DASTAN
FF BY
BULBUL.]

Kabhi kabhi hum ek dusre ko khokar bhi toh pyar ko uncha darja dete hai,
juda rahkar pyar ke unchaiyo ko prapt karte hai,
har pyar milan toh nahi,
judaai bhi toh ek pyar hai...!!!

How soulful your poetry is!!!!!!
Lovely.
sweetsampa39 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
[few
lines for
A THRAHED
BARBIE
FF BY BULBUL.]

Its not a single poem but a mosiac of 4 beautiful poems expressing the innocent grief of a young girl.Each poem was like a pircking thorn to the heart.

You are amazing.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sam111111



hey nishu kaha thi itni din kitni baar aayi thi main yaha par tera tho pata hi nahi



even i missed you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing poems just luvd it
specially poem for adhoori dastan
luvd it
thanks for the pm

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