maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1 - Page 38

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

[POEM NO _ 45
ITS
FOR my teacher
ff
by armour_reet]

No doubt its so touching,I've already said last four lines are my favourite,jst great.

[ poem no ; 46
its for MILAN
FF BY OsheenDGr8]

I havnt read this fic,but the feeling of love is so universal that it doesnt even need to know the ppl or character to feel the pain in the poetry.The feeling and pain of detachment and longing to meet and attain your beloved is evident fm the lines .GREAT.

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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okkk

and for which ff

under current love hona chahiya

it is for my life's mistake yaar...
maan geet se upset hai... Cos she slept off on their first date... And also lot has happened for him to think she is int in someone else... Both are married.. Under strange circumstances...
aapko link chahiye kya... Ya yeh wala intro teek rahega????

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no ; 46

its for MILAN

FF BY OsheenDGr8

uff yeh ishq

kya balaa hai yaar !

kabhi yeh jeene ki wajah

toh , kabhi

yeh sazaa hai yaar !

kissi ke liye dua

toh ,jisse na mille

uske liye bad dua hai ya !

koi isse ,

paaka hai mar rahaa

toh ,koi

isse paane ke liye mar rahaa !

yeh woh sazaa hai

ke ,

mil jaaaye bas ik baar

koi har pal

yeh dua hai kar rahaa

aur jisse yeh hua

woh bhi kya khub hai royaa

yeh be niyam ka dastoor hai

ke issme

kab

kya hoga

yeh woh kya ,khudaa bhi na jaane

isme kahi har baat ko premi

sach hai

binna kissi sabot ke maane !

i didnt follow this story lagta hai perfect suitor ki tarah isse bhi padna hai

Originally posted by: ar_art

it is for my life's mistake yaar...
maan geet se upset hai... Cos she slept off on their first date... And also lot has happened for him to think she is int in someone else... Both are married.. Under strange circumstances...
aapko link chahiye kya... Ya yeh wala intro teek rahega????

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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thaxxx alot dear

but i really prfer you to read milan

its simply wow work

Actually me myself is thinking of reading it coz when I surf GF the title keeps on inviting me.Ab toh aapne bhi recommend kar diya hai,so I'll defo start it.

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Why incmplete yaar????
I havnt read any of ur stories but now u've moved my kidha(worm) to read but pls tell me why havnt u completed them??
Will you start writing them again??

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Actually me myself is thinking of reading it coz when I surf GF the title keeps on inviting me.Ab toh aapne bhi recommend kar diya hai,so I'll defo start it.

Originally posted by: sam111111

i didnt follow this story lagta hai perfect suitor ki tarah isse bhi padna hai

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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first read any of them

and than tell

you really want me to start riting again

than i will tell you

hy i stop

Okies,I hope there's no serious prblm.Can you provide me the link of ur collection??

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

okkk

and why

muhrat nikaalne ki wait hai kya😡