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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Hey I didn't saw them before...
u pm'ed the page that's what I read ...
abhi dekha ...the new poems...commenting on them...😊

me waiting dear😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
[its for sati ff by muskanp
''new emotions'']:


wow loving this thread more & more...
these poems are mindblowing yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago

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poem no

its for bandhan
ff by :tellyme

<font face="Arial"><font color="#993399" size="4">kyu hota hai aisa ,</font></font><div>
<font color="#993399" size="4">koi chu jaata hai dil ko</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">bas ik pal main !</font>
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</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">kyu hoti hai halchal ,</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">is dil main</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">jab hoti hai woh mushkil main !</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">
</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">kuch toh baat hai ,</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">kuch toh usme khaas hai !</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">kyu woh hokar hum jaisi ,</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">phir bhi hum se alag hai !</font>
kya yeh sach hai ,
par phir kyuyeh dil har pal ,
<font color="#993399" size="4">dekhta hai ussme us chupe hue bachpan ko</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">jisse ab bhi kahi ,</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">jindagi jeene ki aas hai !</font>
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</font>
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<font color="#993399" size="4">kahi kuch to aisa hai ,</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">jo main jaanta nahi !</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">tabhi toh ,</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">jab sab kahte hai undekha kar usse ,</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">toh yeh dil maanta nahi !</font>
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</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">abhi abhi to milla hu usse</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">phir kyu lagta hai ,</font>
<font color="#993399" size="4">kuch to mera juda hai use</font>
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catching the essence of the story you portrayed Maan's feelings in such a beautiful way.Bachpan,may be there's no bachpan in Geet's life in this story but Maan himself being 16 feels that,then why not others.

lovely one.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

[its for sati ff by muskanp
''new emotions'']:


wow loving this thread more & more...
these poems are mindblowing yaar...


thaxxx dear

did you read the one i write for kashmakash
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39


bahut der kar de
hazoor aate aate

kaha thi aap😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


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poem no 42

its for sati ff by muskanp
maan feelings



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<font color="#990099" size="3">chalo milke ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">kahi se ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">ek nayi shuruat kare !</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">rah gayi ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">jo adhuri ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">puri har woh ek baat kare !</font>
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</font>
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<font color="#990099" size="3">jaana ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">kuch to chalo na ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">chahe phir ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">ruk jaana !</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">kyoki ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">mere chalne se toh ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">poora na yeh faasla hoga !</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">tumhare</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">kuch kadmo se hi ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">mittegi duriya ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">mujhe yeh hosla hoga !</font>
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</font>
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</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">jaana ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">mujhe hai pyaar ka ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">ik ghar banana !</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">usse phir ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">tere mere</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">sapno se hai sajaana !</font>
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</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">par jaan</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">yeh sab kaise hai karna</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">sirf tumhe hi</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">hai mujhe bataana !</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">kyoki</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">sir tujhe hi</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">is puri duniya main</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">isss dil ne apna hai maana !</font>
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</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">meri galtiyoono</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">ko dekh kar ,</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">mujhe na thukraana !</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">pyaar mere</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">pyaar ko dekh kar</font>
<font color="#990099" size="3">mujhe apna banana</font>
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Awww
koi itne earnest Guzaarish ko thukraaye bhi toh kaise...

Par ghalti bhi toh bahut badhi ki Maan ne,bhugatna toh padhega.

Beautiful lines
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


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thaxxx dear

did you read the one i write for kashmakash


no!!! I'm going on first page now...
Starting se read karoong😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback


no!!! I'm going on first page now...
Starting se read karoong😃

nd plase saare comment issi thread par


not on last one😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39




Awww
koi itne earnest Guzaarish ko thukraaye bhi toh kaise...

Par ghalti bhi toh bahut badhi ki Maan ne,bhugatna toh padhega.

Beautiful lines


thxxx
dear
see next one

tarif bhi ki hai
that tooo in style😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


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poem no : 43

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">its for sati ff by muskanp</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4"> ''new emotions''</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4"> </font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">hasratyien aaj phir</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">sar chad rahi hai !</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">bhikhar gaye the</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">jo sapne !</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">unnhe phir se aaj ,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">aaankhein bun rahi hai !</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">tu chali mere saath ,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">toh</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">mujh pe bhi hai<font color="#ff0000">noor</font>aaya !</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">ke tujhe dekh kar</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">saath mere ,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">duniya yeh jal rahi hai !</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">sirf duniya kya</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">woh khuda ,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">jisne hai hame banaya ,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">ab saath hame dekh kar</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">usse bhi</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">khud pe hai fackr(proud) aaya</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4"> yeh teri payal ki</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">cham cham ,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">kya yeh khanak ghungruoo main ,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">hamessha se thi !</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">yah aaj tune</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">chu liya inhe ,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">is liye yeh bhi bahak gaye hai !</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">chamak teri mukhde(face) ki dekh kar</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">dekh</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">suraj taare bhi chip gaye hai</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">itni hasi hai tu</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">ke tujhe ik baar dekhne ko</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">saaye bhi ruk gaye hai</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">
</font>

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You wrote it after reading the latest part of Sati,right? When gets ready in red saari,payal,jhumka and looks oh so beautiful.
You've again described Maan's feeling so beautifully.

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