maneet with difference #2new poem thread link added on pg 1 - Page 20

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

I read most of ur poems in some ffs...I loved them a lot...loved the way u wrote them...

N now got to read them here...waiting for more to come from u

"its for u, me, aur...
ff written by valli22"

I think maine isse ff me pada hai...

This is great..
😊

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

"its for u, me, aur...
ff written by valli22"

I think maine isse ff me pada hai...

This is great..
😊

"its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife 19"
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" ek tu sadaa saath dena mera

bas yahi tujh se

aur uss khuda se

meri GUJAARISH hai"
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well writeen buddy⭐️
Loved these lines 😊

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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you think😕😕

I mean pada hai bada...
aisi shakle na banao 😆
u r awesome really:)

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

"its for guzaarish new ff by sadlife 19"
.
-
.
" ek tu sadaa saath dena mera

bas yahi tujh se

aur uss khuda se

meri GUJAARISH hai"
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_
well writeen buddy⭐️
Loved these lines 😊

poem 32
its for sati ff by muskanp

" aur ab is ek pal ko main kya
kahu
jo mujhe pal main ,
widwa se suhagan kar gaya !
aur main ho saku khush ,
un sab rango ke mujhe
shamil hone ka
mokka de gaya!"



Seems painfully sarcastic specially there lines.Yaar hamare desh mein sab kuch ladhkiyo saath hi kyun????
A girl's life identity why depends on father or husband????

And we dont have answers.

Great lines buddy.

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

I mean pada hai bada...
aisi shakle na banao 😆
u r awesome really:)

😲

kadar hum aapke karte hai bohat...

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

poem 32
its for sati ff by muskanp

" aur ab is ek pal ko main kya
kahu
jo mujhe pal main ,
widwa se suhagan kar gaya !
aur main ho saku khush ,
un sab rango ke mujhe
shamil hone ka
mokka de gaya!"



Seems painfully sarcastic specially there lines.Yaar hamare desh mein sab kuch ladhkiyo saath hi kyun????
A girl's life identity why depends on father or husband????

And we dont have answers.

Great lines buddy.