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neha512

@neha512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

so finally m fulfillig my promise and reading these awesome poems by you...

poem 38:

h thats so nice...

i could feel the pain in those words u had written...

and ur urdu is just so fab...

part 39...

that wsa great...

maan's helplessness culdbe felt in these words...

him trying to stay away still cant be... uff so realistic...

part 40 for muski

that was hilarious for me

and thats present ashiq wali baat... haha loved it...

but that amrit wala confession was the best line👏

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.OneDirection.

@.OneDirection.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Lovely Poems ...

Loved them ❤️

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

awesome...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
thinking to stop write poem for other,if no than ,pm karna to bilkul band kar do

kya hua hai?

r u depressed?

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

all the poems are good

plz cont soon with more and pm me

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

superb poems
beautiful flow of emotions
continue soon

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

net dead...

will read al of them later...n comment separetly...

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Each & every poem is just fabulous di...
The poem for Gujarish is sssooo sweet...it perfectly describes Maan's haal-e-dil..

The poem for LFU...superbbb writing di..
The way u hv expressed Geet's pov...it's really touchy...

The poem for Khumari...mindblasstinggg..
Totally passionate & it describes Maan's khumari perfectly...

Both the poems fr My teacher are fabbb...
Very lovelyyy written..

The poem for Sati...it just took my heart way..
The way u wrote"Amrit paas hai magar paani se pyaas bujhana hai"..tht was sssooo nice...
Loved all the poems di..

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

hey nishu iam back omg kya dimaag hai yaar ur poem so suits to the exact situation without reading the story we can easily understand the feeling and emotions just with your poems really yaar ur gods gifted poet still iam asking why cant u print all ur poems in one book because all are precious which has all kinds of emotions which really touches ones heart. 38 39 from teacher are superb because the updates are only so emotional then how can ur mind ditch u without writing such becautiful poem. And for sati i think no need to mention anything as u know i am very big fan of muskaans and as well as ur poem👏

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Rajshree12
Each & every poem is just fabulous di...
The poem for Gujarish is sssooo sweet...it perfectly describes Maan's haal-e-dil..

The poem for LFU...superbbb writing di..
The way u hv expressed Geet's pov...it's really touchy...

The poem for Khumari...mindblasstinggg..
Totally passionate & it describes Maan's khumari perfectly...

Both the poems fr My teacher are fabbb...
Very lovelyyy written..

The poem for Sati...it just took my heart way..
The way u wrote"Amrit paas hai magar paani se pyaas bujhana hai"..tht was sssooo nice...
Loved all the poems di..

thanxxx alot dear

but tell me

which one you like most