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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

MAAN'S SILENCE SAYS MORE THAN HIS WORDS AND GEET CAN READ IT

SHE WILL FIGHT FOR HER LOVE AND WAIT FOR HIM TO COME TO HER


yes!! his silence speaks to her... 😊 thats how deep their connection is, now lets just wait and see if maan accepts the truth😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yappingduck

that one lovely part...

beautifully written...

loved it to the core

keep writing

do cont soon,


thanks dear!! its the encouragement from you guys that makes me write...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

I am loving this story more and more with each update.

Do continue soon.
Wonderful job!


thanks di!! your words inspire me to be a better writer😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks so much dear!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti.1

aweome part ...dev loves samaira and will fight for her ...omg mere to khushi k maare aansu hi nikal aaye ...

khushi isliye k maan jaldi geet ka ho jayega ...loved it very much plz update next part super soon


well sweety won't comment much but remember this is all past... from geet's POV...in present they are separated...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_smily

awesome update

luvd it
so dev love samiara but he doesn't confess to her
luvd the way geet answer to maan nd samiara
thanks for the pm
continue soon


anyone would want her love to come to her for her , not for anything else...i would have wanted that had i been in such situation... so its important maan comes to geet because of his love...not his duty😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

A very crucial part in regard with this story.

As we see our Geet is not gonna sit and cry but give Samaira back what she gives Geet.Loved Geet's superb answer in d canteen.
And then d Maaneet encounter,ohhh,its d best part of the update.Loved it.

So Dev loves Samaira and now Dev and Geet have joined hands to make Maan fight for his love.

Gr8 part.


yep!! in fact the entire story is based on the point made on this part...😊

well lets see if dev and geet can win their love😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow what an update!
i loved the way you wrote the part

amazing
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-13

Life is strange mixture of surprises. Geet smiled to herself as she approached Maan. She decided that Maan needs a hard push or he won't relent.

Maan was sitting along with samaira when geet came and stood in front of him. It is now or never for her. Geet looked straight into his eyes and said," Maan, I want to speak with you."

An unwanted silence spread through the three souls. Maan watched on and all he could find was fierce determination in geet's eyes.

Samaira started," geet, what the hell do you think you are…."

She was cut midway by Maan as he said," I thought there is nothing left to talk."

" well news Mr khurana. There's a lot left to talk."

" don't push your luck geet ."

" don't piss me off Maan."

" you won't give up, will you"

" never. Not when I know that it can be otherwise, that I can have what I had dreamt of."

" what do you want geet?"

" I want a day from your life Maan, just a day."

Maan was watching her. She did not seem like she will be satisfied with one day. Yet he cannot bring himself to deny such an innocent yet earnest plea from her side.

"hmm "

A sweet smile sprayed on her face .

Samaira could feel an uncanny feeling settle at the pit of her stomach.

Maan turned to her and said," Sam, I will be out. I will help you out with this assignment later."

After they left samaira felt the gloom set inside of her. She could feel that dev might have been right about maan's feelings. She could not think of being separated from Maan. He means too much to her. Unknowingly a tear slipped from her eyes but before it could roll down she felt a soothing touch of someone wiping it off.

She looked up to find dev watching her with a compassionate look on his face. Samaira was a proud girl. She could bear anything but not the pity of the man who had always looked to her with reverence. She looked down and said," go away dev! I don't want any of your sarcasms now."

Dev watched the girl sitting in front of him. She had always been the epitome of pride and class… he had known her as his dearest friend and coldest stranger. He had grown to love the woman she truly is beneath her sky high attitude and coldness. He cannot bear her vulnerable. So dev did what he had not done in years. He bent down sitting in front of her

" Sam, it's a beautiful day. And since Maan bhaiya is not there lets go out."

" stop it dev. I don't need your pity dev."

" I can't ever pity you sam. Look into my eyes and see for once in your life samaira."

Dev held Sam by her arms and brought her closer. Sam looked on into his eyes. His eyes were so deep and full of emotions. Gone was the dev she had known from her childhood. That little boy who had been with her for her entire childhood has turned into a man who can make her feel beautiful by just his look. Dev too was lost in her eyes. For once he could look into her soul without her mask.

" you are beautiful samaira", dev said in a trance.

Samaira felt her cheeks getting heated up and she blushed a little with the compliment.

" stop it dev. People might think you are trying your flirting skills upon me."

" what is it Sam? The world or your heart that is afraid to see the truth of the moment?"

" I am afraid dev."

" what makes you so afraid samaira?"

" I have loved Maan from the day I understood what love is. I am afraid of his rejection dev."

Dev sighed as he said," samaira. True love is when your happiness lies in the happiness of your love. They say, if your love wants to go away let him go. If he comes back he is yours or he was never yours."

" letting go is so difficult dev!"

" who had ever said Sam that love was easy?"

Sam was quiet. Dev said," come on sam. Let's go out and have fun like old times. We used to be friends sam. For old times sake?"

Samaira's face lit with a beautiful smile as she replied," for old times sake."

Maan and geet reached kailashgiri on maan's car. It was a beautiful park and you could see the entire city from the view point. They walked in silence. It was little cloudy making it a pleasant day for outing.

" so, what is it you want to talk geet?"

" nothing."

" what? You don't have to say anything? Then why the hell did you bring me out for? I had promised Sam I will help her with her assignment and I broke my promise for you…"

" am I that important that you broke your promise?"

" huh!!?"

" I asked a simple question Maan. Am I that important that you can break you promise for my whim?"

" I told you earlier geet don't read too much into unimportant things."

" only this is not unimportant Maan. You are a man of word. Yet, you came here breaking your promise. Why Maan? Who am I that you break your promises for me?"

Maan was quiet. What could he have answered without divulging thee truth of his feelings for her?

" you didn't answer me Maan?"

" what answer do you want geet? It seems you have already got your answer even before you asked."

" told you Maan, your silence speaks to me. It tells me things you don't."

They continued walking along the narrow path laid. Their hearts were beating rapidly and they had a feeling the other could hear their heartbeat.

Once they were at the view point geet exclaimed loudly," it is beautiful. Whenever I come here I get amazed with the beauty of this city!"

" well it is a beautiful city geet."

" it is like any other city Maan. It has pollution, corruption and all other malice of any other city in India. Do you know what makes it beautiful?"

" what?"

" the way you look at it. Nothing really is changed, just you choose only to see the beauty of it. It's same with life Maan. Everyone has problems, guilt, remorse, betrayals and pain. Yet the way one looks at his life and lives it makes all the difference."

Maan watched the amazing lady he had grown to love. She can truly inspire one to live again.

" come on. I want to go for shopping."

" what? Then why did you bring me along?"

" well you Mr khurana are going to help me choose. I always get confused while choosing."

She gave a puppy dog face while Maan shook his head smiling at her antics.

Shopping was not maan's forte and it was hundred times more difficult with geet. They were near jagadamba complex for almost four hours now. Geet had looked into every collection present in each shop across the entire street. Maan was frustrated by the end of the fourth hour and forced geet into buying few stuffs she chose.

" I am never ever coming out on a shopping trip with you." Maan exclaimed once they were seated on his car.

" that was mean."

" well it was supposed to be mean."

" I am angry on you. First you did not let me shop properly and now you are being mean to me."

" my god geet!! You shopped for freaking four hours. How much more do you want to shop? I can well understand why you were left behind in big bazaar."

" well Mr khurana, don't you dare blame my shopping then cause we met because of it."

She gave a cheeky smile while Maan could not help but smile.

" well madam, that was the only good thing in your entire shopping things. Did you realize that its afternoon and we still did not have lunch."

" we can go now. You don't have to always live like life is a military camp. Give yourself little freedom to be unruly and undisciplined sometimes. It's no harm Mr khurana."

" what is with this Mr khurana?"

" well it goes with your attitude"

"What attitude?"

" I am Maan Singh khurana attitude. I mean what is it with your name? is it necessary to pronounce the full name always?"

" come on geet don't exaggerate. "

" you can ask dev if you don't believe."

" how clever! He is your partner in crime. He will always be on your side."

" he is my dearest brother. "

" well, madam can we please have some food now? Am starving."

" so, when did I stop?"

Maan shook his head and started the car. It is indeed going to be a long day.

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