The parent- 2,NEW THREAD-PG153,AUG 9,2013 - Page 12

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

again sorry for the late reply... am still catching up with updates... life suddenly seems to have become express...uff...{I would say again,Don't feel sorry..😊}

the update was just awesome... u dont fail to amaze me yaar with ur awesome writing skills... the way u have inter weaved the lifes of maan , suta and geet is just fab!!!{Thanks dear..}

the story had definitely started with me feeling sad for geet... but now comes suta... who has suffered without any fault of hers and was forced to live her life alone despite of having a mom and a dad!!!

sutas anger towards maan too just screams of her fathers inconsiderate behaviour towards her!!!

am always ur "pankha" of detailed description of even small things... in this part sutas childhood play of doll was one such... my mom have still preserved my first doll whose hair is now like that of a panditji... just in the middle... but on old snaps i have seen that doll with such beautiful hair! mom says i was crazy for washing her hair and dragging her by her hair!!! wo bachpan ke din!!!!{Aww..that was really cute..😊 well,I used to have a "Gudda" in my bachpan ke din..😆}

she ddint opened the envelope !!! i wish she had... i think after reading that she may not be having grudges neither for her dad nor for maan... when will she open it???

again the brinjal and worm ... wow yaar... hats off to u... to make us understand her pov in such simple words!!!

now waiting for the next...

Originally posted by: muskanp

So much of pain in every ones heart
Can so understand chidis reasoning for not loving t baby
Oh baby
She may be feeling a confused feel now in her :(

Suta feel so hurt .. How would she feel not loved by her father
Can't even imagine her pain learning how her mother left carrying her :(

Maan umm wat do I say
A soul who feels their pain in his own way :'(

Originally posted by: AKSashadow

Tumhare dard aur Zakhmo ka ,
mujhe bhi ehsaas hai,
Jaanta hu main ye bhi ,
Pyar ki tumhe bhi pyaas hai,
Ek mouka to do mujhe,
Apna dard mitane ka,
Ek pita ki tarah,
Beinteha pyar barsane ka.

Again wrote few lines from Maan pov. Kya karu aadat se majbur hu.😆{Bahut achi aadat hai...😊}

Now for update-

Maan noticing small wound of suta and even knowing her dislike without her speaking. At the same time, Suta's disability to talk rudely and unable to see him in pain Watching all this made one thing sure that the fire of hatred for him in her heart is going to be extinguished soon by his water of love,care and concern.

"Born to kill"- what a statement on suta's thumb ring. Very true ,Her presence was enough to keep memory of his own deed fresh in shoki's mind and kill him each and every minute within by burning him in his own guilt.{Wow..a new interpretation..Honestlu,I did not think it this way...I just wanted to present suta's tomboyish lifestyle through this ring...}

Yet another heart wrenching past of geet which became more painful due to her innocence , where she leave her own child which no mother could do and even she hadn't done if she had been matured.

As ususal loved your awesome update of this wonderful story.{Thanks..😊}

Now, waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: Kitsin

The pain between the parent and the child is so deeply and intricately woven by you - hats off to you.

Be it Maan and his mom, Shoki and Suta, Chidi and the unborn child.
Maan's mom's longing for his love and acceptance... Maan's longing the same from Suta... Painful innocence of chidi... Shoki's guilt keeping him away from Suta...Rano's helplessness...

All these emotions are portrayed so beautifully by you, that again you have left me emotional.👏