THE LOCKET (4) - Page 55

Originally posted by: sweetkj

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hum hum hai... baki sab paani kum hai>!!😆

Originally posted by: Onir

ab me is self praise pe kya comment karu ... 🤣

Originally posted by: sweetkj

yay.

The title was bang on for many reasons'. Many people got their due in this one. Be it Geet's innocence, Naina's hard efforts, Geet's neighbour, Z's retort, & finally Dev the credit chor was caught by his Daadi for his taking situations lightly & basking in others hard work. 👏

Geet the Bambi, I liked the whole description & connection that you brought about between Geet & this movie character. This style you use of giving new meaning to things that have their own symbolisation or meaning in our minds is very good. Naina being the mother hen to protect Geet's innocence somewhere made me feel that she was seeing her own self in Geet. The whole thought process she was ruminating upon just gave a glimpse that may be she too was same & harsh realities of life made her this hard & strict person that she has become now (are you getting what I'm trying to say here?). It was as though Naina was there protecting Geet's naivety & innocence as she doesn't want Geet to face what she has faced in life. In a way her own defence mechanism to bring herself out of the burden she has borne in past which led her in this shell so that she won't feel the helplessness that she sometimes experiences. I just love Naina here. The way she dealt with Mrs. Sethi in her own way was so good. Sometimes there are some nosy neighbours who tend to take advantage of the lonely & meek. It's not always the case but then sometimes people like Naina are needed to straighten some pesky people from taking advantage. Such Naina type personalities usually then get labelled as crude, rude & khadus'. But none of them go to see what that is led them to behave so. Also loved how she gave a fitting reply to Hansa's husband. I love this fiery girl a lot. 😉

The contrasting scenarios you showed in Naina's life was so well brought out.👍🏼 Personal front she had to become the hero for someone while on professional front she so needed a saviour like Daadi to put in place her so called Boss. This chapter I so detested Dev. I don't know why? Must be because of his loose behaviour while handling work. you can't always be take credit when you haven't contributed one bit to it while the other person has struggled & put so much efforts just because he is the Boss and more so if he doesn't even acknowledge the efforts put in. Do something Avi, or I will surely strangle him. I wouldn't have minded if he would have given her due & credit or even appreciation for her work' but no khotta just goes & scolds her to conceal his carelessness in front of his Daadi & clients, when poor girl tried telling him the matter & also slogged the whole night for it.

Zarin's entry, description & the song used was too good. 😳👏I liked Zarin for her catty behaviour, high handedness.😆 Loved Naina's retort to her & even Z giving it back to her. I love to hear these cat fights.😉😆 What I deduced is that Naina is also quite a fashionista or at least knows the brands & when were they in use & when outdated. Sexy back VM'. Hayee dead & gone to Maanland, though it was supposed to be for Dev- Zarin.

I loved Daadi here. She made Dev promise to treat Geet like his sister. Saving her for Maan. But Sanyasi Maan hum sab ki tapasya bhang kar dega'.. Especially in SBV'. ❤️ 😳

Daadi was indeed the saviour for Naina. Just shows she hasn't been running KC without knowing anything, she notices small gestures & even loopholes. Loved that whole scene when she put the clause for both of them to show their calibre depending on their own abilities, without any appendage of inheritance. Dev has to learn that he can't just bask in inherited authority he needs to earn each bit of it.

next update fatafat nikaal.!!😳

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i lub you.. 😳

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originality depth observation

Onir ke liye...

Originally posted by: dqno1

I lub you too...🤗

👏 originality 👏 depth 👏 observation

Onir ke liye...👏

Originally posted by: palindrome

There is too much to handle for "I star" at home and office..Her protectiveness for Bambi eyed girl showed her softer side once again and moreover,its hard to resist the "innocence" that your geet possess in this story..😊 She reminds me of "Chidi" always..If TP Geet had not faced those brutalities,she would have grown up like your Bambi...😊 I am sorry for bringing "TP" here...😛

I love Chidi...There is an inherent urge in me to cuddle her close to me. Geet here is very innocent now but I want her to mature to a responsible young woman which will be hard for me to write as I don't think I am there myself...😆

I totally loved Dadi's decision...In one way,Dev was exploiting Tara's hard work..it would be great to see how he would manage on his own now..Definitely,he had to abandon his "Happy go lucky" attitude...

Dev is going to grow up. The whole concept is teens to adults here so I hope it works out.

Coming to "Zarin Aman"..

I was expecting her to be someone like "Aashu sorry Aisha"..You know, sensible sweet but She turned out completely opposite of my expectation...I am sure,She is not even 1% similar to "Zarin" ,I know...😆

😆 Zarin approved of her new avatar.. I loved writing it...😉

So we have a "Ladke wale" and "Ladki wali" gangs here...

"You"{Maan's mother},Aaashu{Maan's friend},zarin{Dev's friend} are on Boys side..

and rest of us are on Girl's side as Geet's hostel mates and professor...😆 we are going to have lot of fun when both of the couples{DEV TARA and MAANEET} would get married...🤣

I am no longer in the picture...😉 Shika did not like that but still, I will be bringing you guys back as Maaneet story continues and Geet grows closer to her hostel mates...

Beautiful Chapter Avi...You have perfectly portrayed the "Contrast" situations that Naina is facing at her workplace and home..She is "The Hero" in both of them but her "heroism" is rewarded by a "hug" only at home..Hope,she would get her "deserving reward" in office too..

waiting for next...🤗

Originally posted by: sweetkj

sab mere against gang up kar rahe hai avi... 🤔

Originally posted by: dqno1

Me never...🤗

Main toh humesha se teri side hoon...😆