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rashmi congrts 4 nu thread...
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waiting ...aaj chance hei kya????
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I vil update within an hr😉
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(Shruthe love you for the banner🤗)

Thanks you all for your wonderful likes & comments & a hearty welcome to Thread 7😃

@ritzy di(ritzy09) -- Thank you so much😳😳I really miss ur comments😭

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Forty Nine

Khurana Mansion

Geet sauntered through the corridors in her own world. The events of the previous night played & replayed in front of her eyes many times which made her lose count of the number of times she must have blushed.

"Par...Babaji, ab main kya karu?...how will I face Maan now...agar unhone kuch kaha toh...Geet, tu bhi na!!!! who told you to test your seduction skills??...ab bhukto!!!"

She passed by Maan's room & had a very intense urge to peep in but didn't dare to do so. Then she passed by the arena where Maan practiced martial arts & her steps froze as her hazels saw Maan shirtless...& doing tai-chai.

Geet gaped at him blankly while a tremor shook her heart. Gosh! He is so irresistible & hot!! Even though a crimson hue spread over her face, her eyes still shamelessly ogled at him. She hid behind a pillar not wanting to be noticed by him. Her breaths turned shallow seeing his every move & the tough looks that had dawned his face. His well-toned body smeared with sweat & the swift movements of his hands. The intensity displayed by his eyes made her nerves rattle. She gulped her saliva as his muscles flexed & found herself on the verge of moaning his name gawking at his tempting biceps & broad chest….and those well-structured abs...her fingers shivered at the thought of having touched them the previous night...The white curtains were blowing all around. Her paralyzed feet managed to walk from one pillar to another as & when he changed directions.

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Finally she realized it was high time she should leave from there but as she was about to do so, she felt a steel hand encircling her wrist & the next moment she shrieked seeing herself caged between a pillar & Maan. The way he looked at her made her heart strings vibrate... Even though he thankfully wore a black vest, the heat radiated from his body was enough to tamper her breaths...

"Woh...mujhe...mujhe aapse kuch….kuch kehna hai..." she said in a somewhat defending manner.

"Jo kuch kehna tha you said it yesterday night itself in a very interesting way." he said with mischief as his fingers tentatively moved over her raw & swollen lips making her quiver.

"I am glad it was interesting." she said it abruptly & then bit her tongue hardly!

"By the way, I noticed you were drooling on me!" he purred notoriously.

Geet glanced sideways.

"N-Not really...I was just counting your abs…"

She smacked her head mentally for saying that.

"Geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Besharam kahin hi!!!!!!!!!"

His face flashed a mischievous smirk.

"So how is my dole-shole & body as a whole?"

"N-Not upto the mark." She struggled to control the red color of her face.

"Aww...mera dil cloudy ho gaya." he said huskily, "Don't worry! I will do weight lifting by carrying you in my arms every day!!"

His roguish voice made her pout very angrily & she shoved him away!

"Dekhiya, I have a very slim & curvy figure!!!!"

He smirked heavily.

"Yeah! That I saw yesterday very well!!"

So you can't do weight lifting with me, samjhe aap??!!!!" she continued not knowing what se was saying.

"Put on weight. Simple." he said mischievously.

Her nose turned red hot in anger. But then there was an intruder!

"Rukavat ke liye khed hai!"

Annie entered with a taunting smile.

"Bhai!"she looked at him, "Is this some modern method of practicing martial arts?" she asked teasingly seeing Geet almost on the verge of pouncing on Maan!

"No! It's the modern method of romancing!" he shot back in the same manner!

Annie frowned & then looked at Geet.

"Listen! Apply Boroplus to your lips so that you're ready for your next big kiss!" she taunted.

Geet was shocked. Annie walked away with her nose in the air!

Maan smirked as Geet scurried away hiding her blushes!

"This Annie is too much!!! What does she think of herself!!! Babaji, give me one chance to settle scores with her!!!!"

Geet blabbered in her mind on her way to college with Annie. Now it so happened that the three ad film entries which would represent St Mark in inter-college festival were to be declared that day. Geet had high hopes with her Complan ad & so kept her fingers tightly crossed.

The results were announced after the break-time. The first two names were declared in quick succession & Geet was unfortunately neither of them. Disheartened as she was, still she prayed to Babaji as the Princi was just about to call out the third & last name. But sadly it was not Geet's name...

There was a lump in her throat as she walked out of the auditorium. Failure had graced her yet again when she was not even expecting it. Geet went to the film course coordinator who pointed out various direction flaws in her Complan ad apart from praising one or two points. But at then end of it Geet was very much broken.

"So your act of babysitting & making kids drink Complan failed, eh?" remarked Annie.

Maan knew what the matter was after seeing his Mishty's sullen & miserable face.

"Daarji has not spoken to me since months because I... took up the film course & you know what,... Papa was right... When I can't do one thing at a time, how can I do two courses?... I was a fool to decide something so foolish like this... My life is a roller-coaster ride!!!!!" she ranted.

"Well...ah! Did I say you look beautiful when you're sad?" he leaned closer to her.

"Thanks for the compliment."

"We are going on a date." He announced decisively.

"I don't want to come, you go alone." she said in a sad voice.

"Excuse me?? Till today, I had this notion that minimum two souls of opposite gender each are required for a date. But if the person is gay or lesbian, then same gender is also okay."

Geet rolled her eyes giving him what-are-you-saying look.

"I don't want to go anywhere."

But the look that he gave her was enough to make her change her decision!

"Where are you taking me? Are you kidnapping me again??" she asked while they were in the car & her eyes were covered with a cloth.

"No. I got bored of kidnapping business."

They reached their destination & Geet had no idea where they were. She could her the noises of kids all over. So she assumed they were in a beach or a park.

Maan made her sit in a seat which Geet felt very weird to sit in. And the weirdness turned into a super-duper shock when Maan untied the cloth from her eyes...She got goose bumps on discovering that she was seated on a twisty & edgy roller-coaster ride in an amusement park!!!! Her hands ran cold & numb out of fright...!

"But...But...But you told me we are going on a date!!!!" she turned to Maan who was seated next to her on the ride.


He smirked. But before he could say anything, the ride started! And damn! It was a very heart pounding as the roller coaster took dangerous turns & sharp twists! One second she found herself upside down & the next split-second she was full straight leaning forward! Geet screamed at the top of her voice like the rest of the riders did & Maan just hoped his ears would function properly after the ride!

After the ride ended, Geet was still in heavy shock as to what actually happened in the last 20 secs of her precious life!

And when she recovered from the shock, she found herself sitting in the car again next to a smirking Maan! She pouted angrily! He played another prank!!!!

"So how was our date Mishty?" he asked mischievously.

"Mujhe aapse bilkul baat nahi karni, samjhe aap?!!!!!"

"Aree, what did I do. You had only told your life is a roller- coaster ride so I fulfilled your word. After all, your wish is my command!"

He said as if he was the most innocent lover to ever walk on the Universe. She frowned hard finding herself at a loss of words!!

"Okay, I know you are angry with me. So why don't we just forget our painful past & start things afresh? As of now, you need to concentrate on your term exams. After that, we will make a Close-up ad where you will cast a sexy heroine opposite me. Thik hai?"

His last roguish words made her frown even more.

"Aap toh rehne hi dijiye!!!!" she snapped.

It was night time. Geet was in the balcony of KM. A cool breeze mingled with her lose curls. To be frank, she felt light & rejuvenated after the roller-coaster ride. She felt as if all her self-doubts & tensions have left her after the scary ride.

"Dekh Geet, Maan is absolutely right...jo ho gaya, there's no point in sulking about it because it will ruin your future. So forget about the ad & focus on exams. You have worked hard on that too. You have to enter Top 10."

That was what she resolved. For the rest of the week, she put all her mind in studies & Maan took advantage of that & sipped coffee with her. He helped her silently. Even Annie helped her here & there but not without taunting.

The exams got over in two weeks & everyone anticipated the Top ten students who would go to Singapore for the last term.

It was one day when a notice was displayed in the college notice board about an ad film festival at the national level. The festival would be held in Mumbai & those interested can send their entries to the website. Annie entered Geet's name without informing her.

When Geet got to know of this, she was obviously shocked.

"I couldn't even qualify at a college level, how the heck will I make it to the national level???!!!!"

"Mishty, I will strike a deal ith your Babaji & you start deciding the theme of your ad!" he winked.

So Geet decided to give it a try. Moreover, it was vacations, she had free time to wholly concentrate on the ad.

After much thinking, she finally came up with the product on which she will make her ad.

"Clean & Clear face wash!" she was delighted, "But I need a model for that...Actually I know the girl who would be perfect for it...but will she agree?"

Geet sighed!




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me First

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Geet all blushing blushing😳😳 imagining previous night...😳

Maan physique haayeee😳😳

Maan teasing geet ...

I was thinking ki most romantic mood me bhi maan geet ko tease karta hai woh bhi dialoguebazi se😆😆


"So how is my dole-shole & body as a whole?"

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"Dekhiya, I have a very slim & curvy figure!!!!"


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣



Annie-->height of boldness😆

Geet ka ad select nahi hua


Yaar maan ka funda toh bilkul teda hai..

But still loved how he cheer up her mood..


So now time for best dialogue awrd & it goes to


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"N-Not really...I was just counting your abs'


yaar ye geet toh badi khatrnaak ho rahi aaj kal aise dialogue maaregi toh main toh THUD!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Waise geet abs kitne hai mujhe bhi batana ok😳


Loved the update as usualRashmi



continue sooon...


Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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update ...

i had a gr8 time drooling on maan along with geet... thanks to u...

this annie is cool yaar... she really recommended geet to apply boroplus in front of maan to be ready for her next kiss...


hope she scores in her exams and get into top 10!!!

the roller coaster ride was lovely and maans trick worked too... she really felt lighter after that!!

so the next is clean and clear facewash... and is she annie that geet is eyeing on for her model?

will be waiting for the next...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Thanks for the pm. loved the part. i think the model will be Aniee😉

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