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part 12

Originally posted by: -calculus-

part 10

<font size="4">she left ...*sigh*</font>

<font size="4">she really did</font>

<font size="4">i feel very bad for maan ,he will all the more drown in his guilt ,may be one talk or a simple hi to her would have made his day ,but alas maans realization was too late</font>

<font size="4">but its better to be late than never,his restless state made me sad ,poor guy cant talk to his nbewly found love</font>

<font size="4">but then geet is correct on her stand too , the girl was already hurt thanks to maans ignorant behavior,for her all those glances which maan is giving her must be a mirage</font>

<font size="4">this restlessness and turmoil is necessary for maan maybe this will help him to read his very own feelings awesome update shona</font>

<font size="4">love ya</font>

<font size="4">aanu😃</font>

she was unware of him stealing glances of her...same as he didnt hav any clue about her longing eye which every now & then where looking at him..

she too had been searching for him...but then someone told her that he was gone..and thats why she left..unknown to the fact that he was looking for her.. Where as he didnt knew that she had waited for him.

Originally posted by: Shonameet

she was unware of him stealing glances of her...same as he didnt hav any clue about her longing eye which every now & then where looking at him..

she too had been searching for him...but then someone told her that he was gone..and thats why she left..unknown to the fact that he was looking for her.. Where as he didnt knew that she had waited for him.

Originally posted by: -calculus-

part 11

majnu maan back on track

hell yes he acknowledged his feelings ,i m glad that time forced him to do

tch tch why people realize the importance of something when it is gone ..may be its in human nature

i m happy that atleast maan is now aware of his feelings and the bright part his he accepted them

road side romeo huh maan ??

splash on his dreams geet never came out ,she must be sulking inside her right??

boys will be boys

comeon maan show ur guts call geet ,waise he did didnt he ??

maybe this is a future lesson for maan that never ignore geet

awesome part shona

loves it

aanya

yes..its human nature..! See, we all knew this fact very well...then also we take it for granted and repeat the mistake oftenly.
"YE NAA SOCHA THA KABHI...
ITNE YAAD AAOGE TUM.."
and their absence make us realise the important of their presence in our life.

His fear was the onething that was stoping him to accept them.. But now he dont hav that fear any more.
ROAD SIDE ROMIO...😆
"karta hoon uske..
Ghar ke main phere...
Hasne lage hai..
Ab dost mere.." 😉
u are right aanu...geet was too lost in her pain...to think about anything else.
Aur waise bhi, usse kya pata tha ke jiske liye wo ro rahi hai wo uski ek jhalak ke liye romeo bana ghum raha hai..

Originally posted by: -calculus-

yaa both were lost in their own assumptions

when are u starting the trilogy

i m waiting desperately

i'll try to start it soon..bt not now. Right now I am stuck with my personal life and some what am nt in the writing mode...dimag kaam nahi kar raha..;-(

Originally posted by: Shonameet

i'll try to start it soon..bt not now. Right now I am stuck with my personal life and some what am nt in the writing mode...dimag kaam nahi kar raha..;-(

Originally posted by: -calculus-

part 12

awesome part shona

i m glad that maan voiced out his feelings at least but its still like not love god knows how much time will this like take to turn in love , maans turmoil was worth reading somewhere in my heart i did have this grudge with maan when he hurt geet , and now all my ill feelings about maan have gone into drain ,loved the interaction between maan and his bro ,it was good to see that maan took his steps wisely this time and shared his feelings with his bro to get a suitable advice ,

maans brother is too smart ,the way he channelized maans feeling was amazing ,his advice to maan about knowing geets feeling made me respect him all the more ,becoz it was necessary for maan to get nerve of geets feelings too

the time has finally come when maan wins geet all over again with his love .

awesome part

thank u for the pm

aanu

p.s -just curious what is the age of maans bro ?/

thank u so much aanya...am really happy that u like it! And am even more pleased to know that u had disliked maan after geets point of view... But now after knowing maan's side...u dont hav anything against him.. That means i was able to convey both their feelings well and justify their actions/behaviour.
When u are not able to understand something or take a decision...u better talk n discuss with someone..whom u know will guide u correctly.
Maan's confuse state has already messed up things that now he doesnt want to take any more chances...so he choose his brother to share it.. who is more like a buddy to him.
PS:
I havnt thought about his age...imagine him to be 3'4 years elder to maan.
But honestly...for me..age doesnt matter here as many time, even after being mature in terms of age...people lack the maturity of thoughts! While sometimes the youngsters are much more better then them in understanding the need n delicusy of the situation!

Originally posted by: Shonameet

thank u so much aanya...am really happy that u like it! And am even more pleased to know that u had disliked maan after geets point of view... But now after knowing maan's side...u dont hav anything against him.. That means i was able to convey both their feelings well and justify their actions/behaviour.
When u are not able to understand something or take a decision...u better talk n discuss with someone..whom u know will guide u correctly.
Maan's confuse state has already messed up things that now he doesnt want to take any more chances...so he choose his brother to share it.. who is more like a buddy to him.
PS:
I havnt thought about his age...imagine him to be 3'4 years elder to maan.
But honestly...for me..age doesnt matter here as many time, even after being mature in terms of age...people lack the maturity of thoughts! While sometimes the youngsters are much more better then them in understanding the need n delicusy of the situation!

Originally posted by: -calculus-

ya ur right shona sometime i think even youngest of members can teach u or can help u to come out of a sticky situation ,actually i was curious becoz maybe my brother would have been roaming like an unleash lion if i would have told him something like this😆

means??
Did he like someone??
And u didnt helped him?