THE LOCKET (4) - Page 78

Originally posted by: dqno1

Teri har murad puri ho... Aameen..

God is great...vishwas rakhna bas...

🤗

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Why would you be embarrassed. I don't understand. Actually I wonder why you give my comments step sisterly treatment. Crying crocodile tears

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

First of all I love you as much as you do me. So get used to it.
Second of all I am not laughing. You actually had me in wet eyes with your work many times and I stopped considering that I might be embarrassing myself stating I cried, actually cried reading something that isn't exactly sad. But deep.
Third of all I don't understand what's there in my work. Trust me had I possessed half of your love for writing and the determination I would have been somewhere else. Aur bolu?

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Look who is here.
I am saying as if I am a VIP 😳

You are more important than that...

Meri khud ki bajana...i'll do later as of now lemme jump in the air and pump fists. Me caught up with the last two updates and damn man you are confusing me and making me question my loyalties. Whom should I love more? I better get a flower with huge number of petals and chant "I love Maan" "I love Dev" "I love Geet" "I love Tara"The writer is confused too.. Why is Dev so much more appealing sometimes? 😆 and Tara? 😉
And so on and so forth
Innocent bambi indeed. And here comes her knight in shining Armour. I always loved girls standing up for girls. I do not understand why should knight in shining armor be a man and that too a lover always.

I think that is a singular joy of being an Indian female. We can bajao any guys band when it comes to our friends. Had to do it to a guy for bugging my sister... warrior princess mode came on so fast, the guy was reeling...

You know Tara banging the door on that lecher's face reminded me of a different scene from one of my favorite FFs by Devi. Love and Despair. And the incident where Naina stands up for Geet in bus. Got me nostalgic
Devi's L&D, even the curtain scene which was her banner and where the story started was one of my favs, though best story was Ghost Orchid, I loved the math major Vidya and her math puzzles...
Zarin Aman, sensual indeed. Who would know it better than her boy friend. 🤣 I will someday write a book titled "Disadvantages of being BF of a siren" And I am sure Tara would be glad in writing its foreword. Me likey likey the cat fight, and me double likey Dadi's promise from Dev.

Zarin does not know but it was fun to pick the shoes she wanted, cobalt blue. Fiery chick who wanted a fight with NT and not lose.

So Dadi had bought Geet purposefully, knowing Maan's love. Hadn't she? But the thing that still interests me is how, how did she know. Don't answer. I would love to find it out.

Now comes another gem of an update. It was beautiful. The song is one of my favorites and when it is coupled with such sweet scenes which i could imagine in my head it left me grin foolishly. Leaving hands while driving, riding the bike in parallel to Geet's window... truly believable, which had happened around my eyes not long ago...

I love the song too. I thought the bike freewheeling was over the top but still teen like so it went in.

Daarji Geet scene was heart warming.

I love writing the Darji parts.. He is such a part of Geet's life that is going to make a difference in her future too due to his principles..

I am falling in love with this story with every passing update. Avi can I kiss your hands for writing a beautiful story like this?