THE LOCKET (4) - Page 76

part 14
awesome part dear...
lovely...
cont soon dear...

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Yun palken jhuka k mujhse meri auqaat na puch,
K main kuch bhi nhi tere na dekhne k baad ❤️

lovely update...
loved the portrayal of emotions of darji
continue soon
and thanx 4 da pm and continue to pm me

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

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Yun palken jhuka k mujhse meri auqaat na puch,
K main kuch bhi nhi tere na dekhne k baad ❤️

👏 Naureen... Running and giving zor se jhappi
Pouting ... Kahan ho yaar, tujhe bhi koi shayar toh nahi mil gaya 😆

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lovely part

Look who is here.
I am saying as if I am a VIP 😳
Meri khud ki bajana...i'll do later as of now lemme jump in the air and pump fists. Me caught up with the last two updates and damn man you are confusing me and making me question my loyalties. Whom should I love more? I better get a flower with huge number of petals and chant "I love Maan" "I love Dev" "I love Geet" "I love Tara"
And so on and so forth
Innocent bambi indeed. And here comes her knight in shining Armour. I always loved girls standing up for girls. I do not understand why should knight in shining armor be a man and that too a lover always.

You know Tara banging the door on that lecher's face reminded me of a different scene from one of my favorite FFs by Devi. Love and Despair. And the incident where Naina stands up for Geet in bus. Got me nostalgic

Zarin Aman, sensual indeed. Who would know it better than her boy friend. 🤣 I will someday write a book titled "Disadvantages of being BF of a siren" And I am sure Tara would be glad in writing its foreword. Me likey likey the cat fight, and me double likey Dadi's promise from Dev.

So Dadi had bought Geet purposefully, knowing Maan's love. Hadn't she? But the thing that still interests me is how, how did she know. Don't answer. I would love to find it out.

Now comes another gem of an update. It was beautiful. The song is one of my favorites and when it is coupled with such sweet scenes which i could imagine in my head it left me grin foolishly. Leaving hands while driving, riding the bike in parallel to Geet's window... truly believable, which had happened around my eyes not long ago...

Daarji Geet scene was heart warming. I am falling in love with this story with every passing update. Avi can I kiss your hands for writing a beautiful story like this?

Originally posted by: honeygrape

outhouse ya km, both are same for me😳

so , all my confusions are cleared now..thank you...🤗🤗🤗

ok no more tears 😳

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 14 - loved geet as a resonsible & honest girl who thought to support her family by working a part time job ...loved the grandfather & grand daughter relation...both are so much understanding and supporting each other

ufff...popat bana diya na...teaser me laga ke sach me maan aa gaya...lekin maan ke bajay maan ke notes aa gaye thro postman...

oved maan's race to reach the babaji-blue bus, lol, in the excitement to see her once after long time

lovely part

waiting for i-star...rul-e-pedia in next part...lol

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Look who is here.
I am saying as if I am a VIP 😳
Meri khud ki bajana...i'll do later as of now lemme jump in the air and pump fists. Me caught up with the last two updates and damn man you are confusing me and making me question my loyalties. Whom should I love more? I better get a flower with huge number of petals and chant "I love Maan" "I love Dev" "I love Geet" "I love Tara"
And so on and so forth
Innocent bambi indeed. And here comes her knight in shining Armour. I always loved girls standing up for girls. I do not understand why should knight in shining armor be a man and that too a lover always.

You know Tara banging the door on that lecher's face reminded me of a different scene from one of my favorite FFs by Devi. Love and Despair. And the incident where Naina stands up for Geet in bus. Got me nostalgic

Zarin Aman, sensual indeed. Who would know it better than her boy friend. 🤣 I will someday write a book titled "Disadvantages of being BF of a siren" And I am sure Tara would be glad in writing its foreword. Me likey likey the cat fight, and me double likey Dadi's promise from Dev.

So Dadi had bought Geet purposefully, knowing Maan's love. Hadn't she? But the thing that still interests me is how, how did she know. Don't answer. I would love to find it out.

Now comes another gem of an update. It was beautiful. The song is one of my favorites and when it is coupled with such sweet scenes which i could imagine in my head it left me grin foolishly. Leaving hands while driving, riding the bike in parallel to Geet's window... truly believable, which had happened around my eyes not long ago...

Daarji Geet scene was heart warming. I am falling in love with this story with every passing update. Avi can I kiss your hands for writing a beautiful story like this?