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Posted: 12 years ago
a little loss at words today...don't knw how n where to start...with ur words u make sure that i'm bound to feel every emotion u r trying to convey and u take me on a roller coaster ride...which today strtd with getting emotional seeing geet and daarji's bond and the trust daarji had on geet made me luv him so much more... ur portrayal of situations and characters z so so real and it z so easy to connect with them and i just don't knw how to say it but luvddd the sweet moments of maneet...i hv read them again n again...u almost gave me a mini heart attack by bringing geet to halt before maan and not letting her fall on him but luvd the way u twisted it and yes those smiles...they had me go alll dreamyyy...hv actually felt so happy for maan to hv got wht he was yearning for and that babaji bus...Avi u nailed it yaar...all that was so realistic that attention seeking stunt...that concerned look and later the content smile... all this has left me all smiling and happy and A hearty thanks to u for bringing in these smiles on our faces with ur writing!!!😊
Thank u soo much for the update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

a little loss at words today...don't knw how n where to start...with ur words u make sure that i'm bound to feel every emotion u r trying to convey and u take me on a roller coaster ride...which today strtd with getting emotional seeing geet and daarji's bond and the trust daarji had on geet made me luv him so much more... ur portrayal of situations and characters z so so real and it z so easy to connect with them and i just don't knw how to say it but luvddd the sweet moments of maneet...i hv read them again n again...u almost gave me a mini heart attack by bringing geet to halt before maan and not letting her fall on him but luvd the way u twisted it and yes those smiles...they had me go alll dreamyyy...hv actually felt so happy for maan to hv got wht he was yearning for and that babaji bus...Avi u nailed it yaar...all that was so realistic that attention seeking stunt...that concerned look and later the content smile... all this has left me all smiling and happy and A hearty thanks to u for bringing in these smiles on our faces with ur writing!!!😊

Thank u soo much for the update!!!

Gitu... thanks dear for such nice words. I am glad you liked it. It's still too early for her to be in his arms so almost close was best I could do. They need to at least talk before something like that happens.. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

You need a check up too for not knowing what gems you write. Let's visit Onir together if that's a compensation 😆

Oh!! Then Onir is waiting eagerly for you two to come for a check up ... come fast... 😈

😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Oh!! Then Onir is waiting eagerly for you two to come for a check up ... come fast... 😈

😆 😆

Nahi!!!!
Yeh Doc mere brain cells ka bhurji bana degi...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Nahi!!!!
Yeh Doc mere brain cells ka bhurji bana degi...😆

Arey na ji na... hum aise todhi na karenge... Tumhara pura khayal rakhenge... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Arey na ji na... hum aise todhi na karenge... Tumhara pura khayal rakhenge... 😉

Why does this statement strike terror in my heart?
Hiding behind Shika until Doc goes away...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Why does this statement strike terror in my heart?
Hiding behind Shika until Doc goes away...😊

Oh but I'm so harmless... 😉
You want me to go away... thik hai phir me going...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Oh but I'm so harmless... 😉
You want me to go away... thik hai phir me going...

nahi nahi you don't go Onir... woh Doc scares me... Onir is toh my angel...🤗
New character ... MPD wala..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


nahi nahi you don't go Onir... woh Doc scares me... Onir is toh my angel...🤗
New character ... MPD wala..😆

Kuch bhi... now should I be happy you want me as an angel or sad that you don't want me as a Doc... Anyways me toh sab ke liye Angel hi hu... no Docgirir here... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

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