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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo Suhaana dear on fourth thread and teaser is awesome waiting for real one
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Originally posted by: Luvkriyansh-anu

Firstly sorry for commenting late

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THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part







PART 37

a big sorry to lily and krati sorry dearies actually i was held up with two viva's and then my pc got angry with me..aaj hi theek hua hai so i am updatinng..long part for you and all the readers who waits for DESTINED LOVE AND PAIN





Maan looked at the cute expectant eyes who were waiting for his positive reply … he looked at the family all were dreading geet's reaction knowing that she just had agreed due to diya's sake and here diya was actually trying to tie the thread that are loosen due to the two matured kids….

Daadima chuckled seeing her grandson having a tough Those innocent tears were just making maan restless diya was having tears that means his life was suffering though it was just the two days when the reality of he being father sunked through him but the immense protectiveness was there for his only little angel who there to make him rid of his deeds that he unknowingly had taken in his terms ..diya was crying while geet was trying to take the cutie in her arms..the little tears that were spilling out of eyes were killing both of them… maan had stepped back knowing his interference will not taken by geet though he didn't want her to drag her in anything but still the time and conditions are making him helpless…..

Maan was having no courage to look at them..he had totally forgotton his meeting and everything…. Just diya was wandering in his mind and right now he could not go anywhere since she was crying…

Diya looked at geet making an angry baby face..she was angry at her mother for not going home she wanted to sleep in her room with the little mermaid toys…. she wanted to have a nice time with her toys her mumma..mr bunny and not to forget he dadda….

But right know his total concentration was on her room the room that she decorated with her little tiny hands..the grumpy face was not hidden from geet..she tried to took diya in her arms but geet's cutie had already seen what he wants to do next...maan was about to go upstairs to his study then study when he found little hand stopping him…he knw who was he but he didn't want geet to show her indifference to them at night … diya very cutely asked maan…

Diya: diya wants to sleep with dadda…

It was his decision to take one side it was geet and the other side it was their diya…..maan looked at diya and then at his wife geet..she was seeing the grip with which diya was holding maan' then it was difficult fo him to get it against his baby' wish ..geet looked into his eyes..silently he was asking her permission though they still have that hate relation but maan couldn't deny that till know diya was only having geet with her..she was the only parent she was having and he cannot deny the fact that geet was taking care of their baby with too much ease and difficulty..the love and the pain he had seen in her eyes for diya he dint even have any word to express that…their eyes were locked …which non notice… maan 's trance was broken when his cutie called him….when maan dint respond to diya than diya again called him..

diya: dadda…diya want to sleep…the puppy eyes dint get unnoticed by geet…and the next second maan took diya in his arms making geet to fume..she was not expecting him to do that she wanted her baby with her..she knew this was all diya's charm on maan.she did same with geet those puppy eyes she knew too well….

Geet mumered when she saw them going upstairs she wanted her baby with her and here maan was taking all the pleasure of having her tantrums all by himself…

Geet st: diya made maan a fool and he is actually trapped in those puppy eyes doesn't he knew his daughter …ahh geet what are you thinking it is called father's love .. she can make him fool just in seconds you see the talent of your daughter she has got a new person to annoy me..now…

Maan took diya to their room he had actually thought to make her sleep and then he will call geet so that she can be with their baby… but he didn't knew that making DIYA KHURANA sleep was like stepping up mountains….

Diya was jumping in maan's arms sometime agao she was all tired and know she was in her dadda's arms and this was what she wanted ..her dadda with her… she had actually thought to take her dadda with the,,she wanted to sleep with her dadda in their room which was decorated by her …maan made her lie on the bed she was already surrounded with her soft toys he get her pink bunny night suit..first diya was so happy to be with her dadda that she didn't trouble him at all..maan made her fresh and changed her clothes..all the while the door was slight open for geet … she was peeking and was seeing what actually the father daughter duo was doing…..

Maan: so baby wanted to sleep with dadda … he asked diya who cutely nodded her head… she smiled and came on his lap..maan settled her on his lap comfortably diya was leaning on maan..she wanted her dadda to be with her …

Diya: dadda with sleep with diya … diya mished dadda..

Her innocent eyes were the mirror of his life..the truth she uttered made maan guilty..he kissed her chubby cheeks..diya too responded and hold maan's hands..she was having a play time with her dadda..she was narrating with all her likes and dislikes and even told him what she did at the dinner…

Diya: dadda diya eat chilli..she made again a puppy face.. eyes red …diya tounge was burning….

Maan : who made you eat baby.. he asked being suspicious that it will be someone from his family….

Diya made a funny angry face…and answered…

Diya: mumma…

Maan was like shocked …

Maan : geet..baby your mumma made you eat..doesnt she know that my sweety is allergic to those harmful chillies….

Geet who was standing on the door rolled her eyes …they were too much..

Geet angrily….

Geet: both are same…nautanki kahin ke..this diya I sway honey no chocolates for you….

You are getting too naughty ….



Maan looked at the time and quickly called from the intercom for diya's milk he with much patience made her have milk which was having her medicines…. He deliberately powered her meds and made her have…. A smile crept on geet's lips the way he was having diya in his arms was something she wanted to adore… she was waiting for this day..but know when they were having oppurtunities then their ego's were way too big..she was equally responsible for their life…. She did have doubted maan's love neither he nor she got some time to ask the other why they cheated …. They just passed the judgement and made their enemies successful…..

Their was a gap in taking medicines …it was after an hour and maan took her to the balcony they were listening to the calm night 's voice..diya was actually counting stars….and was telling maan about puppies…

Maan; you like puppies baby..

Diya got excited and told maan about what more she adores….

The cold wind was blowing since it was night he took her in his protective warmth so that she doesn't catch cold…already she was suffering and know he doesn't want her to have more problems….

Maan: baby come lets go..diya will have medicines than we will sleep diya wants to sleep with dadda na…

Diya nodded…

Diya: diya wants to sleep with dadda and mumma..she chirped… her two cute ponies were bouncing as she was jumping in maan's arms..she was truly a treasure of his life that he discovered too late….

Geet when couldn't hold herself..she knew that diya was doing this on purpose and she couldn't stand it..she came to their room and saw maan and diya giggling…. Maan was tickling her lightly…. They were having a nice time this engrared her..she was angry on maan for what he did and again her frsutation unleashed on maan….

Geet jerked him and pushed him away from diya….

Geet: You don't have any right on her MR khurana..i know what's good for my daughter..you cant tell me what to do or what not to she is my and stay away from her..we don't need anything of yours… so just stay away from her…..





Maan was expecting this kind of behavior only… she was looking helpless and the pain and aloofness that she witnessed all these three years was quite visible…. Maan realised it was not her fault…. It was his mistake somewhere…

Maan whispered softy….

Maan: I will go once she will sleep….

Geet just nodded in acceptance….

It was almost midnight and diya was tricking maan on having her meds…

Diya stubbornly: no..diya wont have..ewwhh…. she made a grumpy face….

Maan: baby you have to take them…. Yes..your no wont work…

All the while these two were busy in their own busy father daughter land geet was sitting on bed with mr bunny seeing the whole commencement…maan was manoafying her and she was tricking him…

Geet: shouted at once…

Geet: maan stop right there and you… DIYA come here right know..both of you ..just come here…

But no one listened to her….

Geet was in highly angry mood ..here maan was busy with diya..she was making him to have what she wants at the middle of night otherwise MR and MRS khurana can have their medicines diya khurana was not ready to have them….

Geet: maan leave her and go I will manage her… she is getting stubborn..and you ..you don't know how to handle her… moreover I am here to take care of her..we don't need you…. She completed in an utter irritation…..

Maan was already having a hard time with his daughter …..and shouted at her…..

Maan: are you done geet ..you can give me lectures later on I am already having a baby to manage with I don't need another one ….

Geet opened was wide open he called her baby..just like diya…



She pulled him too her making him to fall on bed and geet on maan..she was so angry and frustated on maan..how dare he call her a BABY..she was already a MOTHER…

Geet 's eyes were red with anger that made maan to gulp his saliva ….

Geet: how dare you…..

Maan was confused what he did that she got angry…..

Geet: how dare you call me a baby…I am not a baby did you hear me MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA…

She was actually justifying maan and he was looking at her in confusion both were in their staring session their brief angry eyelock was broken by their cute sweet diya who was giggling seeing her mama dadda fighting….

Geet quickly got off maan it was so embarrassing for them after all these years…both looked at diya..she was about to run seeing geet ..but geet quickly hold her in her arms….and quickly called maan….

Geet: maan get her medicines right know…. She instructed maan to made her have the

syrup while she opened her mouth….

Both of them finally were succeeded in having her medicines…diya glared at them..and maan made a sorry face…

Geet took diya to make her sleep but the next moment she was so angry that she went in maan's arms..and showed geet her tongue…the mother and daughter both were same thought maan…..

Maan: baby you sleep with mama… he thought to go know…but diya was adamant to sleep with her dadda and geet wanted her baby with her..

Maan at last…

Maan: okk diya sleep dadda is here he finally ignored glares from geet…. He was struck ..like his death was confirmed either geet or diya….

Diya: dadda stoly.

Maan: story…

Being a father and fulfilling the duties was a difficult task and here maan maing him capable of being called as diya's father…..

Diya: flog princess…..

Maan was confused..nd he utter the truth to diya…

Maan: baby dadda don't know any story….

Diya was sad she wanted her dadda to recite her a story…. But maan couldn't see his baby's sad face..she was leaning on geet when maan told her to be right here….

He quickly did the arrangements in the room..it was a short forty five minutes story that he searched on internet and connected in the room threatre …diya was excited to see her frog princes.s… but the next moment …

Diya: mumma icecream…


Geet was about to deny but maan brought icecreams for his cutie..he knew that she will just have two three spoons..he wanted to pamper her..even he brought geet's favorite icecream and quietly handed her..diya was all the while looking at the screen seeing her frog princess story… maan was feeding her….


The three of them were so tired that they slept in the same postion…diya on maan and geet on the left side holding his hand…. It was out of tired ness they were having a comfort of their family….. it was indeed a long day for them…diya's disease and its aid… family's acceptance …maan having his daughter…a small start for them but where will this lead was still questioned…..

NEXT: the morning after..

Family knowing diya's aid….




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me first yeppie
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Okay coming to the update

All the updates are amazing 👏
This was just fantastic loved it
Maan and Diya are so damn cute and adorable
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And maaneet lol just awesome 😉
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Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago

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