If Only You Saw Me (9) - Page 57

Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

awesome update

Originally posted by: spvd

part 17
lovely part dear...
Maan is serious about this but Geet isnt?
interesting...
oh wow she and her sis are gonna stay at KM...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: karna91

superb update...

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update

poor maan bach gya jess ke saath dance krne se😆😆😆

so geet is going to stay a whole week in KHURANA MANSION with Maan... gonna be interesting😳😳

Originally posted by: kalabhas

nice update.

i dont think it is dragging,it is ur phase of writing.

i like the update.

but geet dancing with some one else,definetly i dont like it.

maan pls do something to stop that.

Originally posted by: sweetkj

Geet is taking it as a dinner but still anticipating & subconsciously wanting it to be a date. She is binding herself form coming out of her shell or from feeling exhilarated on her feeling for him or accepting them & even him having feelings if any for her as she feels she will soon be going away from them, away from 'Him' precisely. Liked the way her anticipation was shown, while talking to her people back home, or to Anya or even when she receives his call where she expects tiny bit that it would be related to the date but then chides herself that she is just going off track. I loved this pull & push within her. If she has started feeling this then it means the seed of it has been planted. It just depicts that she is close to accepting her true feelings & understanding the depth of it. Well written. 👏

You didn't make next favourite couple of this story A-A to go on a date when given the opportunity. Poor Ayush had to save himself from bashing & had to blurt out Maan's oh -so- no- secret of Liking towards Geet, with Ayush trying to play cupid giving them their privacy. 😆

I liked how you showed the bonding & ease Geet shares with her Mom. She stated everything even the supposed Date to her Mom without much hesitance & when she felt she might have been misinterpreted she went on to clarify. It speaks a lot about the trust she has on her Mom & her Mom has on her. Her Mom questioned her not because she was suspicious of her intentions but because she was genuinely concerned for her daughter.

Ranbir & Mom's teasing had me grinning. 😃 What fun to have someone whom you can tease when you know the said person will be all sharam se pani pani & will try salvaging something & thus dig a bigger grave of teasing from others.😆😆 Loved all the teasing & dramatics involved. It was so lively showing how these 3 have bonded & a mirror to their relations. What I really liked was the line- 'Especially Mom is the kid amongst the 3 of us''True Maan's mom is such a childlike person yet very matured while handling relations. Loved how Maan liked it when his Mom caressed Geet's head lovingly, & he relating it to Ranbir's similar feelings. Its true we always love someone whole heartedly but then in the corner of our heart want our love to be accepted, & cherished by our loved ones ' People who have a special place in our lives whose opinion & acceptance matters.

Anya- Geet conversation I was dreading that Anya shouldn't blurt out the new found information. She can never be subtle & can't keep things within her. I love her nature but' more so for the completely love she showers on Geet. She is so enthusiastic to dress Geet for her date with Maan.

I like how who have time & again given emphasis on the way Geet keeps seeking his smile. It's so sweet & just shows the true depth of her feelings that she seeks his smiling face more than anything. 😳

When his Mom announced dinner every night I was like ho gaya kabadda date on Wednesday ka. But then beautiful Zara the Bhabhi dearest saved ti from being ruined, but the evil Ranbir again ruined it all. I'm now sure Ranbir is taking training from Mayyo 😡😉 as he is hell bet on troubling Maan & preventing him from going on a date.

Ranbir's musical arms regarding the sangeet pairs, just to trouble the pairs. Khud toh aapne love ke saath khushi khushi hai dusro ko sataa raha hai. How mean big brother. I'm sure this again must be an idea planted in his mind by our very dear writer Mayyo. So that along with Maan even we readers would give her red faces.😡😡 But then I think it will only be for good as I have faith in Mayyo. 😳🤗 Right na twinnie? You will not prove me wrong.

Waiting for her stay in his place for a whole week with marriage ceremonies in the surroundings, With love in the air. ❤️😳

aadha chapter hoga ye toh.!! 😲

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

superb update Mari 👏

Originally posted by: dqno1

Geet's reflections of the day spent with Maan were bang on until this line

This does not sit well with me. Aisa nahi hona chahiye, samjh le..😲

😲

She never said she's going to cut ties off with him, just that she'll be friends with him. Ab uski marzi se kitna chalta hai ye dekhne ke liye hum log hain na! 😉

Maan and Ayush convo was such a boy-brag session. Tell me everything, right... They can talk but when it comes to Anaya's teasing, Maan is all chicken...😆

Boys brag? 😆

Maan is the shy boy, you see. 😆

Her mother's concern about the dinner date and rightly so. Which mother would not worry sending a girl out with apna banda Maan...😳😳

The mother who doesn't know how very charming the banda is! 😳

The family parts with Maan, Mom and Ranbir are always so much fun for me to read. They are so chillaxed, I feel even I could fit in.😉 I do adore Ranbir by the way as well as Anaya. She is a doll, always there for Geet as a friend. Love her roothna and mooh phering from Ayush time and time again.😊

I've taken the hint in here and I'm going to try my hands at it. 😉

Maan's mom and Geet's mom the convo was stilted to begin and I think then came the ease. Her sister is coming. Maan saab sali aa rahi hai... thoda flirting shirting ho jaaye...😆

Maan ka toh pata nahin, saali hi shayad karey flirting! 😆

A whole week in Maan's house! Yea! I am loving this idea. The dance trouble that Ranbir is cooking up is awesome. He is truly like me. This should be fun to read!

Another one-up for Ranbir! 😃

Lovely update Mari.

Thanks for the birthday present. Ek chipkata toh aur acha lagta par chalega...

Ye baat baat pe chipkana kyun aa jaata hai? 😆 But I'm glad you liked it Avi!

Me excited about the whole week and on top of that shaadi atmosphere. It will be fun to read.

I would've been as excited if only someone else was writing it! 😆

Thanks for updating..🤗

so replying to all comments yani Avi wala date ka update is very soon

Originally posted by: Onir

so replying to all comments yani Avi wala date ka update is very soon

Replied to all the comments so that I can get my mind on writing the next update, which may or may not be date wala. 😆