If Only You Saw Me (9) - Page 55

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sach keh rahi hoo Sweety, Mari ne Dr. Khurana ki story mein bohut madad ki thi..😳

Kya kya ideas hain uske paas...Main shaadi shudha ho ke bhi sharma gayi... aur maine mana bhi kiya par yeh hai... usne mujhe force kar ke likhvaya woh sab...😳😳

Mari... 😲 Main toh kitni bholi hoo... ab toh sab ko sachai bata de...😆😆😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Wo koshish kar rahe hain aur aap ho rahi ho? O.o

tumhe lagta hai me emotional ho jaogi...nahi. 😆 Itna hi samjhi mujhe Twinnie 😳

Originally posted by: sweetkj

kiya tha.!! kiya tha tune.!!

agar ek saath do waade nibha nahi sakte toh karte hi kyu ho.!!🥺

kab? kahan? mene koi wada nahi kiya tha ...
do wade nibha nahi sakti isliye karti bhi nahi 😃

Geet's reflections of the day spent with Maan were bang on until this line

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I decide to keep my friendship with him and not let him think the other way. I don't want him to believe that we can actually be more than friends when I'll just be going away within some time, not knowing if I'll ever be able to come back to this place.

This does not sit well with me. Aisa nahi hona chahiye, samjh le..😲

😲

Maan and Ayush convo was such a boy-brag session. Tell me everything, right... They can talk but when it comes to Anaya's teasing, Maan is all chicken...😆

Her mother's concern about the dinner date and rightly so. Which mother would not worry sending a girl out with apna banda Maan...😳😳

The family parts with Maan, Mom and Ranbir are always so much fun for me to read. They are so chillaxed, I feel even I could fit in.😉 I do adore Ranbir by the way as well as Anaya. She is a doll, always there for Geet as a friend. Love her roothna and mooh phering from Ayush time and time again.😊

Maan's mom and Geet's mom the convo was stilted to begin and I think then came the ease. Her sister is coming. Maan saab sali aa rahi hai... thoda flirting shirting ho jaaye...😆

A whole week in Maan's house! Yea! I am loving this idea. The dance trouble that Ranbir is cooking up is awesome. He is truly like me. This should be fun to read!

Lovely update Mari.

Thanks for the birthday present. Ek chipkata toh aur acha lagta par chalega...

Me excited about the whole week and on top of that shaadi atmosphere. It will be fun to read.

Thanks for updating..🤗

Originally posted by: Onir

kab? kahan? mene koi wada nahi kiya tha ...
do wade nibha nahi sakti isliye karti bhi nahi 😃

Originally posted by: sweetkj

wada toh aap kar chuki hai.!!

jhoot hai yeh sab 😲

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sach keh rahi hoo Sweety, Mari ne Dr. Khurana ki story mein bohut madad ki thi..😳

Kya kya ideas hain uske paas...Main shaadi shudha ho ke bhi sharma gayi... aur maine mana bhi kiya par yeh hai... usne mujhe force kar ke likhvaya woh sab...😳😳

Mari... 😲 Main toh kitni bholi hoo... ab toh sab ko sachai bata de...😆😆😆

Ohho Avi! Thodi solid baat ke saath aagey aana tha. Ye thodi zyaada unbelievable hai because many people are witness to my reluctance to read Dr.K's last chapter.

Nope. Ye wala wasn't convincing. Koi aur idea diya tha kya maine? 😆

Originally posted by: Onir

tumhe lagta hai me emotional ho jaogi...nahi. 😆 Itna hi samjhi mujhe Twinnie 😳

Iska matlab DQing seekh li. 😆

^sikh rahi hu... ab tum jaisi acchi teacher aur Avi jaisi idol ho toh mujhe todha progress karna zarrori hai 😉 😆

Originally posted by: Onir

Geet is taking it as a dinner but still anticipating & subconsciously wanting it to be a date. She is binding herself form coming out of her shell or from feeling exhilarated on her feeling for him or accepting them & even him having feelings if any for her as she feels she will soon be going away from them, away from 'Him' precisely. Liked the way her anticipation was shown, while talking to her people back home, or to Anya or even when she receives his call where she expects tiny bit that it would be related to the date but then chides herself that she is just going off track. I loved this pull & push within her. If she has started feeling this then it means the seed of it has been planted. It just depicts that she is close to accepting her true feelings & understanding the depth of it. Well written. 👏

Geet is indeed starting to feel the push and pull, the torn feeling between two things, but it is yet to be seen which side she lets herself be drawn into...

You didn't make next favourite couple of this story A-A to go on a date when given the opportunity. Poor Ayush had to save himself from bashing & had to blurt out Maan's oh -so- no- secret of Liking towards Geet, with Ayush trying to play cupid giving them their privacy. 😆

Now Anaya wouldn't have gone somewhere with Ayush when she finds out he was hiding something all along. Poor him! 😆

I liked how you showed the bonding & ease Geet shares with her Mom. She stated everything even the supposed Date to her Mom without much hesitance & when she felt she might have been misinterpreted she went on to clarify. It speaks a lot about the trust she has on her Mom & her Mom has on her. Her Mom questioned her not because she was suspicious of her intentions but because she was genuinely concerned for her daughter.

Most of us share such bond with our mother, where we can say anything and everything to her but still stay within a certain bound of norms and rules. And a mother's concern for a daughter sitting far away is natural. 😊

Ranbir & Mom's teasing had me grinning. 😃 What fun to have someone whom you can tease when you know the said person will be all sharam se pani pani & will try salvaging something & thus dig a bigger grave of teasing from others.😆😆 Loved all the teasing & dramatics involved. It was so lively showing how these 3 have bonded & a mirror to their relations. What I really liked was the line- 'Especially Mom is the kid amongst the 3 of us''True Maan's mom is such a childlike person yet very matured while handling relations. Loved how Maan liked it when his Mom caressed Geet's head lovingly, & he relating it to Ranbir's similar feelings. Its true we always love someone whole heartedly but then in the corner of our heart want our love to be accepted, & cherished by our loved ones ' People who have a special place in our lives whose opinion & acceptance matters.

Maan's family is the kind which has this teasing as a defense against all that they've been through in the past. They love to laugh and make life beautiful that way instead of dwelling over things.

Rightly said! When we love someone, even though we claim to say we don't care a bit about what others think about it, we still hope for our love to be accepted with open arms among our circle.

Anya- Geet conversation I was dreading that Anya shouldn't blurt out the new found information. She can never be subtle & can't keep things within her. I love her nature but' more so for the completely love she showers on Geet. She is so enthusiastic to dress Geet for her date with Maan.

Well, Anaya succeeded in stomaching the truth from Geet this time! 😆

She is the kind of person who, when once accepts someone as her friend or family, will stay fiercely loyal and loving towards them, so once she accepted Geet as a friend, she does everything for her, which is in her power. 😊

I like how who have time & again given emphasis on the way Geet keeps seeking his smile. It's so sweet & just shows the true depth of her feelings that she seeks his smiling face more than anything. 😳

Of course! After all, it was his smile she admired even before she became friends with him. 😳

When his Mom announced dinner every night I was like ho gaya kabadda date on Wednesday ka. But then beautiful Zara the Bhabhi dearest saved ti from being ruined, but the evil Ranbir again ruined it all. I'm now sure Ranbir is taking training from Mayyo 😡😉 as he is hell bet on troubling Maan & preventing him from going on a date.

Nope, it's the other way around. Mayyo takes training from Ranbir on how to make kabadda of things. 😆

Ranbir's musical arms regarding the sangeet pairs, just to trouble the pairs. Khud toh aapne love ke saath khushi khushi hai dusro ko sataa raha hai. How mean big brother. I'm sure this again must be an idea planted in his mind by our very dear writer Mayyo. So that along with Maan even we readers would give her red faces.😡😡 But then I think it will only be for good as I have faith in Mayyo. 😳🤗 Right na twinnie? You will not prove me wrong.

You do? Soch lo. What if I let you down? 🤔

Waiting for her stay in his place for a whole week with marriage ceremonies in the surroundings, With love in the air. ❤️😳

Me too waiting for it. Somebody else please write that part! 😆