The Unsaid Promise pt-14/pg-62/23oct - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start

thnx for pm dear
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#22
nice start
loved it continue soon
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#23
interesting

geet is like maan
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#24
Nyc ss. Geet apna bday celebrate nhi krti kya.
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#25
Interesting dear can u plz send me pms to suhaaana
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
awesome nice part
loved it
very interesting start
sply GEET here
loved it
continue soon
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lets start the fight to be best hitler
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#28
awesome !!!

PS : write in English or trans d dialogue to English.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-2
In Geet's office
after 2 hrs
mr patel :may i come in mam?
geet :yes.
mr patel : mam yeh sighania's k project ki blue print ki file..
geet :okk...yeh file ko aap desk par rakh dijiye aur jayiye.
mr patel wo file ko rakh kar chale jate hai

geet ka mood aaj bahut kharab hai kyuki aaj uska b'day hai..geet ko apna b'day celebrate karna accha nahi lagta geet apne mann mein sochti hai...arnav mujhe malum hai ki tum dono ne mujhe aaj kyu bulaya hai khushi k cafe mein tum logo ne is baar bhi mere liye kuch surprise soch kar rakha hoga par tum log kyu nahi samajhte ki mujhe apna b'day nahi celebrate karna...kyu har saal aisa karte ho har baar bol bol ke mein thak chuki hu ki mujhe aaj ke din se nafrat hai phir kyu tum dono nahi samajhte...

at evening geet goes to khushi's cafe

khushi' cafe

jab geet cafe mein jati hai to dekhti hai ki cafe ki saari lights off hai aur wo dheere dheere cafe k andar jati hai jab wo cafe ke centre mein hoti hai tabhi lights on hoti hai aur arnav aur khushi surprise kehte hai aur uske pass aa jate hai aur geet ko b'day wish karte hai par geet unhe koi jawab nahi deti...geet ko aise chup dekhkar khushi usse puchti hai... geet kya tujhe surprise accha nahi lga??????to geet usse gusse mein kehti hai kyu tum dono har baar mere b'day ko celebrate karne ki koshish karte ho tum dono ko malum hai na mujhe nafrat hai iss din se phir bhi kyu nahi samajhte
tum log...geet ko aise gusse mein aur dard mein dekhkar khushi rone lagti hai aur waha se chali jati hai khushi ko jata hue dekhkar aur geet ko aise gusse aur pain mein dekhkar arnav pehle geet ko samjhane ki koshish karta hai...arnav use pyaar se geetu kehta hai..
arnav :geetu...geetu...
geet : arnav mujhe koi baat nahi karni tumse..
arnav :geetu meri taraf dekh na plzz..geetu plzz..
geet uski taraf dekhti hai aur usse kehti hai arnav tum log kyu nahi samajhte itne saalo se mein keh rahi hu phir kyu har baar tum log...aur geet rone lagti hai arnav geet ko rote hue dekh kar use chup kraane ki koshish karta hai
arnav :geetu plz ro mat..geetu plz chup ho ja..
arnav use chup karate hue kehta hai ki geetu kya teri nafrat humari dosti se bhi badkar hai...kya tu humare liye bhi apna b'day celebrate nahi kar sakti...tujhe malum hai na ki hum dono tujhse kitna pyaar karte hai aur tujhe aise rota hua nahi dekh sakte...geetu bhul ja na un baaton ko...
geet :arnav kaise bhul jau un sab baaton ko tum sab jaante ho na phir bhi..
arnav :geetu humare liye plzzz..
jab geet arnav ki baat nahi sunti to arnav use emotional blackmail karte hue kehta hai..theek hai geetu mat sun meri baat hum hai ki kaun tere liye..tere liye to humari dosti se bhi badhkar teri nafrat hai...to phir mein khushi k paas jakar use keh deta hu ki use geetu k liye rone ki koi jarurat nahi kyuki wo to hume apna dost bhi nahi samjhti jab geet khushi k rone ki baat sunti hai tab wo apna dard bhul kar khushi ko dhundne ki koshish karti hai jab use khushi cafe mein nahi dikhti to use malum chal jata hai ki khushi terrace par hogi to geet upar terrace par chali jati aur arnav bhi uske peeche
-peeche terrace par chala jata hai..
At terrace
khushi ek corner mein baith kar ro rahi hoti hai aur khud ko hi daanti hai aur kehti ki khushi tujhe kya jarurat thi geet
ka b'day celebrate karne ki tujhe malum hai na use yeh sab nahi pasand phir bhi tune aisa kiya ab dekh geet teri wajah
se kitni hurt hai...khushi ki aisi baatein sun kar geet uske pass jakar use gale se lga leti hai aur use sorry kehti hai
"sorry khushi mene tere par gussa kiya"...aur khushi "geet se kehti hai sorry geet meri wajah se tu phir se hurt hui"..ab aage se mein kabhi tujhe tera b'day celebrate karne ko nahi kahungi..to geet use kehti hai kyu nahi karegi mera b'day celebrate hum aaj bhi mera b'day celebrate karenge chalo ab neeche chalte hai aur cake cut karte hai...geet ko aise kehte hue
dekhkar arnav aur khushi dono shocked ho jate hai...aur jab wo apni shocked state se bahar aate hai aur dekhte hai ki geet niche ja chuki hai...aur wo dono bhi niche chale jate hai aur geet ka b'day celebrate karte hai...yahi hai in teeno ki dosti ki khud ke baare mein na soch kar apne frnds ke baare mein sochna...

precap : maan's entry

prev : - part1
next : - part3


Edited by angel_smily - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think she has painful past is liye MSK ki aatma Geet main hai literary ...She is too much khadoos...But from heart she is too good...Loved her buddies...as there is lil bit revelation her past had some unexpected things...will wait for the revelation but story is going great and will wait for next part


Lov


Sonia


@ edit : I commented witout pm keeping eye on you 😉..Great effort 😳
Edited by Sonia.KN - 12 years ago

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