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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I am out of words to praise your writing skills..It was awesome...👏👏👏

If its your first attempt at writing,then you are exceptionally good and if its not,then also,you are exceptionally good...

I have read alot of maan-geet tales on this forum but I am experiencing the pleasure of reading such a strong and novel concept for the first time...😊

Their past is as beautiful as dark their present is..Why do I feel,their moment of togetherness happened in some other country {Not India and Pakistan}..and I am very eager to know,What separated them...???

Portrayal of Maan's heart dominating his brain and sense of duty,was beautiful..He was her "lover" in uniform of army personnel during those moments.. 😃

I hope they would get all their answers,and would bind to each other once again..I don't want her to cross the river and I don't want bygones to be "by"...😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

welcome to d world of IF dear😃

quite interesting n vry refreshing concept wid so much mystery ...they were so lovey dovey thn wat happened b/w them ...there r so many questions... feeling lyk a question bank 😆

remarkable writing nd an amazing story ...luving it👍🏼

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Diva7
welcome to d world of IF dear😃
quite interesting n vry refreshing concept wid so much mystery ...they were so lovey dovey thn wat happened b/w them ...there r so many questions... feeling lyk a question bank 😆
remarkable writing nd an amazing story ...luving it👍🏼

I was about to tell you about this story divu..

But no wonderful story could escape your eagle eyes...

Teri "expert nose" soongh leti hai good stories...😆

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sonnal_17
i am freaking out...such an amazing story...and i think the curiosity is going to kill me...what happened in the past...why the got separated...oh Maan wants to save her...i hope everything will be fine...

Glad you could connect with the story!

And I too hope things remain fine, after all we can never see Maaneet separate now, can we?

;)

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: .Tulip.
luvd ur writing ...brilliant start 👏
eagerly waiting fr nxt😊

Thankyou so much!!

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: palindrome
I am out of words to praise your writing skills..It was awesome...👏👏👏
If its your first attempt at writing,then you are exceptionally good and if its not,then also,you are exceptionally good...

I have read alot of maan-geet tales on this forum but I am experiencing the pleasure of reading such a strong and novel concept for the first time...😊

Their past is as beautiful as dark their present is..Why do I feel,their moment of togetherness happened in some other country {Not India and Pakistan}..and I am very eager to know,What separated them...???

Portrayal of Maan's heart dominating his brain and sense of duty,was beautiful..He was her "lover" in uniform of army personnel during those moments.. 😃

I hope they would get all their answers,and would bind to each other once again..I don't want her to cross the river and I don't want bygones to be "by"...😊

Thank you so much!

Its my first time at fiction, and I am glad you enjoyed. I was more into essays and stuff.

Their past moments were neither in India or Pakistan (they couldnt have been possible)

Maan's character has gone through a tranformation that time and circumstances could only have made possible...

He has to choose among two right paths-Tough choice!

And yeah, they should get answeres and be able to reconcile!

And when a story has started, when the two have met; then how can it not end?

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Guys,

Don't get scared if I do not update for another week,

I am out on a holiday so the next part will definately come up on next Saturday for sure.

I will still give it a try to update sometime this week but if not then Saturday it is!

Thanks for hanging on if you still decide to continue!

I assure a good story, if not great!

Frosted Starlit.

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

very touching update..pls cont soon..

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: palindrome

I was about to tell you about this story divu..
But no wonderful story could escape your eagle eyes...
Teri "expert nose" soongh leti hai good stories...😆

Meaoowww😆

Pilli tu hai aur soongh main leti hun 😉...ye sab tera hi asar hai😆