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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Good catch Lilly...It can be...
After all wo MSK hai...

aisahi hoga,fir ham mona ko dad denge,cross ur fingrs babie..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

aisahi hoga,fir ham mona ko dad denge,cross ur fingrs babie..


Lets see yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago



This FF I am updating daily so please don't wait for my PM because its very hard me to send daily pm for this. please Bookmark or check yourself for update. It's my sincare request to all




Hope you all are feeling well after reading yesterday part 😆 .. Dont worry yours every confusions will be cleared in next update 😊


Part 77

The storm had stopped and similarly Geet's life too. She had lost everything which could be identified as a living thing in her, around her. But no, she was wrong! Not everything had ended and that was her suffering and struggles. It was not ending anymore.

She felt someone was there, looking her, nearing her. But she had no consciousness, no sense to look back and then she heard someone was laughing on her grief.

She looked back. It was Brij, her brother, was laughing on her mourning but she didn't mind. When her own Babaji had been enjoying on her drained life, nothing could be worse than this. But one side she was indebted to Brij because he was the one who brought Maan in her life and now she was happy to know that he will send her along with Maan to the other world. She smiled on her thought and hugged Maan closely in arms.

"Brij Veerji, Please send me to him. I know this is why you have come here!'

She uttered hazardously lost in her Maan.

Brij smirked. He came closer and tried to pull Geet clutching her arms but she denied, hugged Maan even tighter.

"Geet stood up!!!''

Brij yelled but she heard nothing.

He forcefully pulled from her arm and made her stood up. She cried even more, pointing toward Maan. Her hand became stiff, was aching to hold him. Brij was pulling her taking her away from there and she was screaming her heart out. She was not ready to leave him, wanted to go with him but was helpless in front of Brij. She was clutching Brij shirt tight, tried to make herself free..

"Chal!!!!'

He was forcing her to walk and finally Geet screamed..

"Maaannn!! Please don't let me go!!!'

But it had happened late. They had come far away from the farmhouse and now Geet couldn't see even a glimpse of Maan. Brij stopped when found them surrounded with massive and dark forest where it could be impossible to be caught.

"Veerji leave me!!!' She pulled herself out from his grip and started to run.

"DO you really think I will let you go my dear sister!!!?' He said within gritted teeth. "Geet.. Now I came to know how much required you are for me!'

She looked him confused and scared.

"You don't know how much I can make money from you Geet!!'' Brij glared her from up to down. She hated his gaze, struggled to be freed, more.

"Veerji leave me!!!'' She wanted to run away from this man nasty grip. She wrung arms for coming out but his hold was much tighter.

"Shut up!!!!'' Brij raised hand to hit her but then stopped.

"No Geet, not like this I will punish you. Only because of you today I am forced to hide in this forest place!!! Had not you escaped from HP, then today I would have been playing in pool of money but no problem dear sister.. not that it gone any late!!! Still many can come to marry you. How foolish I was earlier that never thought this way!!!!' He gave a beast laugh that her weak heart started to dash in terror.

"I didn't know that stupid Dev would agree on to give his half of the property just to marry you!!! But that bas***d.. He became good boy for his brother and my entire plan seemed to be falling down in drain!!! What not I did for to get this plan get worked but That bas***d' your that Maan..'

Veerji.. don't say a word against him, I will''

"You will what Geet.. you will kill me ..Maar dogi mujhe!!!!'

She removed her eyes from him, she hated his presence, standing under the shadow of his eyes, she hated everything.

"Maan where are you, please come back soon!!' she wished a silent prayer.

"Don't pray to your Babaji Geet because Maan will not come back again to save you this time'

"My Maan can't go leaving me alone Veerji he will come back and that, you will be seeing for sure!!!!' she had loftiness in voice that amazed Brij but he ignored it in his madness.

"Do you really think so!!!' He smirked dangerously. "Did you forget that your Maan has been dead Geet, he is no more!!! He can't come back Geet...he can't!!!! Once he had escaped from the accident which I had got done but today, he himself been aparted from my way without any fuss!! And with his departure, his entire family is gone finished!!!!' He laughed.

"Here your Maan is laying dead and there, his brother that Dev is in jail!!! How wonderful plan I made to trap him and Maan understood that he was forcing you!!! How stupid they both brothers are!!!!'

Geet found his hold loosened down in and with fast swift she pushed him back and tried to run but been caught with no difficulties and this time Brij became more furious.

"I told you not to move Geet!!!'

"Leave me .. let me go!!!!'

"Geet!!!!' And he raised hand to slap her but it could not touch her face but been stopped in mid air. A pair of red eyes glared Brij with that intensity that in no time he could have been killed with the sharp blaze of it, If could be possible.



Precap: Brij ki dhulaai; 😆😆

THREAD 9


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



mera bhi nahi karthi... lekin agar comment nahi kiya tho zaroor poochthi hai...

akele motichur ke ladoo kha jati hein iskee class lene padegii ek baar theek hone do...
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Posted: 12 years ago
though me on second post... but comment wise dekha jaaye tho me first... an after a long time too... is baat pe dhumka lagaana tho bantha hai... haina????

this brij definitely does not belong to human community it seems...the way he is trying to use geet for his benefir makes me feel YUK...

the way geet was pleading him to leave her and let her go to her maan was making my anger rise more and more on that kameena brij...

end was dhasu!!! maan aa gaya... yipeee.... and the precap is just THE BEST... dhulai brij ke... maan karega aur ham mazaa lenge aur usko cheer bhi karenge...


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-


jaise ki... may be they can tell brij have pushed maan and put him in jail


Hmmm.. fake case...😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
i dont want brij ki dhulai i want brij's murder that too in hands of maan 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

akele motichur ke ladoo kha jati hein iskee class lene padegii ek baar theek hone do...


kaan pakar ke showwieee lily .. ab se galti nahi karungi .. pakka ... asli wala sollyyy all mighty smiley

per ye lakshu jhut bolti hai ..


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


kaan pakar ke showwieee lily .. ab se galti nahi karungi .. pakka ... asli wala sollyyy all mighty smiley

per ye lakshu jhut bolti hai ..




oyeee... maine kya jhoot bola?
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Posted: 12 years ago




Poor Geet...
Why she is calling him ..Veerji...S*** , K*****, K****
Kill that B******...grrr
I'll burn him alive...

Oh!!! Babaji!!! I m so happy...
ye Maan hai...Yippee...
Waiting for Brij Dhulai Mission...


Love u Mona...


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