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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
poor geet have to agree with parents 😆😆
uper vai ka problem i knw😆😆😆.
geet love to watch movie😉.
ohoo geet met mr.perfect😛😛
geet total laddo on him😳😳.
aweee seeing romantic english movie witha boy hell embrassing☺️🤔.
geet doesnot maan calling her mom as his mom lol
kuch tho pak raha hay
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
lovely update

loved it

maaneet were outstanding

loved maaneetevery moment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Lovely story.. 👍🏼
And Geet always a chalthi phirthi disaster only 😆 😆 and also has egoistic attitude, hmmm interesting 😊

Will be waiting for next update.. Do pm me ur next part dear


Luv,
~Shine~

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Maan n Geet meet! She calsl him Mr. Perfect which he is n she is disaster queen! She has not realsied tht she will b marrying him! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
omg.. hilarious.. poor geet.. nice start hun.. cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
part 1
awesome...
too good...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
haaye ni...!! diduu me faint... i mean almost faint.. kitni cutiee cuittiee story h 👏 love uh didu MR PERFECT Will ROCK...!! ...

All the best i love uh..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suddenly he pulls me into his arms. My lips are now soo close to him. 1st time ever in my life I have been soo close to a boy ...i was getting red due to anger? Nahhh m blushing actually...He was looking at my eyes, n I was trying to look everywhere else in his eye 'I know if I see his eyes I will be drowned in his ocean lyk deep chocolate eyes...but I was afraid to if I will look into his eys n he will read my eyes n can see into my soul where is soo much love for him...lolz I have got love at 1st sight...

He lifts up my chin from his index finger n at last I was drowned in his eyes ...n I can feel his thumb over my lips..he was caressing my lips through his lips...hell! I was not getting wht to dooo I was just lost in his eyes ... I was feeling different emotions inside me...he is the 1st man who made me feel this things...

Suddenly he left me...I came back to reality I was embarrassed of loking lyk this'..actually he heard some voice around room so he left me n is leaving from room but I can see he was smiling with a smrik on his face...gosh his this smile made insense ...

My mom n mamta aunty came in my room to know about my foot ...i was looking her there 'not to get caught...

'Hows ur foot now, Geet' mom asked

'It's ok,' I muttered

"If it is swelling sooo I think we should cancel the party" mamta aunty said while checking my foot

I looked at them questioning n my mom understands what I was asking for

"Today is a party in evening we have to goo there" mom said with a smile

'If u r ok then we will do that party otherwise we will cancel it,' mamta aunty said with lil tense

"No no aunty m fine n this swelling will be ok till evening u don't bother its nothing new to me ," I said with a smile to comfort her

"Hmm ok dear ..." she said with a smile while caressing my head

"Hmm wear this saree, Geet u will look beautiful in it" mom said n passed me a beautiful red saree with white borders it was a elegant saree I can say that


"Hmm ok" I muttered I took it.

In evening all were busy in getting ready for party...n I was thinking if they had a big mansion ...hen y they are throwing party from somewhere else...lolz have gone mad...n 2nd Mr.Perfect morning act they ways his hands were clutching my waist n they way his thumb was on my lips...gosh I still feel his hand on my waist n lips...he had made me nuts...

We all descended downstairs to go to venue...he was there ...But I was unable to meet his eyes n more over he was drooling over me...I can feel his gaze all over me... embarrassed I came down ...

'U r looking beautiful, Geet' tej said

I was shocked becoz my bro never complimented be before

'Thanks bro' I muttered wid a shocked smile

All started settling in car, 'U two go in that car' says Mom

I was hell surprised what had happened to my mom she is telling me to go wid a boy 'that to alone'.. 'No, I will also go wid u' I insist

'Yes , Mom there is no need of another car', says Mr. Perfect

Thank god, I really don't want to go wid him alone after morning incident... But some tym my Mom is really headache

'No, you will go in separate car. That's it, no more discussions.' Says Mom

We both take another car... It was beautiful foggy evening...all dark outside

Mr. Perfect doesn't say a word. Soo to end this awkwardness. I start conversation

"How about your higher studies? You don't want to study further? Maan"

"Geet, I have already done my civil engg...and operating KHURANA CONSTRUCTION. N helping here to develop city with making new things. N also learning my father's BUSINESS...n learning some actuall farming. What else u want me to do?"

My jaw almost falls to the ground.

"Oh!" I said

"Hmm so tell me, Geet what are u doing n ur future plans" asked Mr. Perfect

'Hmm'..now completed my architecture designing ''..n about future plans '..want to work with best company' I said smiling

"Hmm, nyc soo u wanna to be a desgnier"

'hmmm, I already become Mr.budhu, I have completed just taking job is left'.

'Oohh yaah' he said smiling

'So u would want a wife who can stay with u? I mean, a housewife.'

'Yes, I would definitely want a wife who can stay wid me, Geet.'

I knew it! A narrow-minded control freak. Huh!

'But, he continues, if my wife wants to work, she can work with me in our business.'

He always left me surprised. N m feeling good about it. But as m confused soul still confused y he wants to marry me...he can get any girl he wants...

My thoughts got a break when suddenly car stopped... "we reached?" I questioned

"Is car stopped working" I again shooted another question

"Will u let me speak then na only I will say what happened" he muttered while glaring me with his big big eyes...n got down to see what happened ...he opened bonnet..after n checking

'I told u na it must be stopped working...huh, from where we will get a mechanic at this hour on this foggy cold nite say na thakur g' ...i was nonstop blurring ..after 2 sec I fund his rough n hard hand but yet softly on lips

I looked at him narrowing my eyes as I didn't get what happened

'Can't u stop taking for some tym' he almost shouted at me n remove his hand

'Huh, I will not talk ...more' n move from there as he again got busy in checking car

I started moving forward...i heard some footsteps...1st I thought Mr. Perfect came to manfoy me but after some sec the footsteps I heard were more than one person 'I got scared'.as I really don't know where to goo n how...i turned to see ...who are behind me...

There were 3-4 boys totally drunk n talking about me ..gosh not about me only but about my figure...1st tym in life I regretted wearing a saree ...n a backless blouse'.from where almost my whole back was seen...i tried running faster...n tried to call mom...but cut the call thinking how can they help me now n I don't have maan's number ...what a crap

I was trying walking faster at that tym one boy running came n hold my saree pallu I was scared ...i don't to what to doo I just screamed Mr. Perfect name maan ...where was trying my level best to run...but as the boy has holded my pallu I was unable n now all has circled me...

My tears start flowing I really don't to how to tackle this '.i was just screaming his name "maan help me"...one boy came deadly near me n cluthed my waist...i was feeling disgusted...i tried to hit then but unable n also trying to losse his grip on me...he was almost touching all the open parts of my body ...n my tears were nowhere to stop ...after 5-6 attempts their grip lossed my I tried running...I which my pallu which was in his hand torn...n some part of my blouse tooo...(yeh maan kya soe gaya )

I was running holding my blouse from front n got bumped with a storng body'I was scared to heel to look above then realized it is my MR. PERFECT MY MAAN ...i was sobbing hard n indicated my hand back side to show the goons...he just cocooned me in his embrace n then he looked at my condition...my torned saree n blouse n quickly removed his coat n made me wear n made me seat in car 1st

"U seat hear n dare to move from here, n lock the door too" he muttered dangerously

"I just obliged him like a kid" ... n before I can say anything he moved further

N was beating them black blue...I was not able to think whats happening near me I lossed my conciseness...don't know when he came back near me n I was in his arms when opened my eyes...he was patting my checks n sprinkled some water too...which was on my face

I looked around 1st...when find everything good I just hugged him ...almost bone crushing one ... he too receipted the same...he made me drink water...then start shouting too

"Who said u too go from here, haan"

"U only said na just keep ur mouth shut" I said meekly

"Geet, are u mad I said not to shout not to goo go away"

"Yes!! M mad becoz I can't seat n stand quite ...what can I doo know huh,,"

He actually smiled at that n said " ok now don't get angry we are gng home"

"Nooo" he looked at me narrowing his eye-brow..when I said this

"I mean all must be waiting for us n it is not look gud if we won't go"I said looking outside

"But how can u goo like this" before I can say anything he started car n don't know started driving where ...I didn't questioned him...n relaxed my head on seat...n closed eyes

After 5-10 mins he stopped the car...n said " lets come"

When I came down from a car ..we were near a big gals dress shop ...n he took me inside

Manager himself came to attend us " how can I help u MR.KHURNA"

"Hmm show her some saree" he muttered..i was actually impressed

We went near saree counter...n started checking saree...but alash! 1st tym I was choosing saree soo it was hell difficult for me ...n started making faces

"What happened?" he asked

"M not getting what to choose, will u help me ?" I asked innocently

"Hmm sure" he said smiling'.n I love his this smile

He checked few saree n then showed me a golden sarre with maroon border... I liked his choice

"Goo change" he said bosily lil

I went to change n came after 10-15 mins till then he actually cleared bills n all

(not getting perfect pic 😡)

I was looking at him...for his some words but Mr. Khadus didn't said a word '.i forwarded his coat to him...n we again took seat in car started the drive to venue

I was thinking how different shades I have seen of him'actually e is turely like my prince charming ...no my hottie MR.PERFECT in every way...actually he made me comfortable'n smile too after that incident n said not to share with any one as all will get panic...i agreed...to him but still looking r a compliment...strange ...1st tym in my life I m looking forward for a compliment soo eagerly...

My thoughts got stopped as we reached the venue...hold it on...what I m seeing it is on hill... "no I won't goo there" I screamed

(1891 words)

precap-last update

thanks u alll...m really doing bhangra...u all comp. my demand in 1 day only lots of love n hugs to every one who liked n commented🤗


this tym too 50 likes do n update le jaooo



Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just love it how u narrate evry scene from geet pov her feelings presantation of the story all are so good and goonda scene also geet is cute when she say she cant sit on one place and be quite... love this perfect maan ... prachi one suggetion dear if u dont mind add little emotion like get tears rolled down from her eye... or her eye widden in horror like that or else this part is so good
Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update maan beating goons...geet scared of height in the end.
Waiting for the next update eagerly

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