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cant wait for this epi..pls pls update soon...
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read you os in one go it is amazing ...
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woww i love this title and you know i planned to write some thing based on this but i am late
you did really good work billy loved this cute and sweet stroy of maaneet soo much
geet is such a chalthi palthi disaster haha and maan was her mr.perfect nice combination must say
watching movie with him that too romamtic one uhho poor maan wol control kise kiya me wondering
and geet was flat for him at 1st stght itself ahaa not bad geet
at last they were together and his proposal after there dance and his cute killer smile
theere compliment each other wahvaa loved all those moments

so it was there engagement party geet didn't know that even
geet assumed maan as gawar with narrow mind but he is MSk proved her wrong

there romamce was at peaks such a cute story loved it
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Epilogue 3

Maan made her lie on bed n said to wait for sometym, he went downstairs where all were waiting for them n most of guest started gng, he told his mom n dad about geet n her tiredness, they also agreed not to call her again, he called servant n said him to bring their food in their room, n as geet was weak he decided to stay here only till she will feel good n all agreed, he left again to their room n found his jaan sleeping cuddling like baby, he smiled at her n went near her n out her head in his lap n caressed her hair, she was smiling in sleep, he don't want disturb her even for food, but he had to do that, he was about to awake her lovingly but a hard knock on door made her awake n he looked angrily on the door, like u r gone today , but when he opened the door he found two ladies restless came inside, n went near geet n now he can't say anything to the two beautiful ladies, his mom n geet's mom, they inquired about her health, feed her food n she was showing tantrums like a kid but both the mother's were showing her their big big eyes n she was complaining to maan to save her but he surrendered in fornth of mom's at last she completed her food, they made her eat medicines n went by saying maan to have his food n take care of her.

He had his food made her sleep in his arms after changing into light n comfortable clothes.

It's 7 in evening when geet got up n found maan missing, she was about to stand then saw a letter n bunch of roses on bed, she took the roses n smell it n hug them n start reading note

Jaan

U was pouting in mrng na that u wanted to celebrate n spend some tym wid me, so thought to comp. wish of my queen, soo madam this nite is urs, soo get up fast n go in washroom another surprise is waiting for my mishty

Ur

Mr. Perfect

She smiled n went inside washroom, to get another beautiful surprise, whole bathroom was decorated with roses n candle, was smelling beautifully, smoothening her tiredness, she smiled at all the things then her eye caught a packet there, she went n opened it, there was beautiful pink colour saree with silver stone work, with a note, she opened to read it but two pair of hands slide n hold her waist possessively, she didn't need to see who is holding her, she know it's her mr. perfect, she rested her head on his chest n opened the note but maan started saying the lines.

Jaan, this is for u, u know what u look like angel in baby pink as it add more fuel to ur beauty, this is ur 1st gift of our spl. Day wear it for me jaan, will u?

She turned n kept her head on his chest n said "from when u started taking permission shona, m ur fully n will wear it for u"

Maan smiled n started removing her clothes n scoop her in his arms n slip her in Luke warm water n was about to leave when she held his wrist, they never need words to express their feelings more, her eye said her want n maan followed it, he too removed his clothes n slipped in water n made her seat between his legs n rested her head on his chest n was caressing her tummy lovingly, after half n hour he scooped her out, wiped her body n draped her n himself in towel, scooped her again n took her out made her seat on bed n asked lovingly while kissing her cheeks, "may I have the pleasure to dress my beautiful wife, with my hands" she nodded her head n maan kissed her earlobe n wake up n took the saree n came near geet, who started laughing,

"Y r u laughing madam"

"Jaan, if u act like child then what I will do" maan was not getting any things, he asked what are u saying.

"Jaan, I can't wear only saree maanu, need to wear some more things, wase u didn't remb. While opening them" she said winking at him😉

He took her in embrace, n said "madam, if u will wear minimum clothes, then it will take less tym to love u na" maan said naughtily n took her lips in his, they left each other after sometym n maan started dressing her.

He make her wore her saree in which geet gave directions to him, then he made her wear sindoor n managalsutra... Beautiful chudia,

m made her look in mirror in which geet turned towards him, n bore her eyes in his eyes, maan asked from her eyes what she is searching, she nodded her head negatively n said "me" maan smiled at her n said "u r only there mishty" on which geet kissed his both eyes.

Geet looked n maan n turned her face, maan hugged her back n asked "kya hua jaan, ku gussa ho" geet turned in his embrace was crying, maan held her tightly n he knows again her mood swing, he sighed n asked "what happened" geet hugged him n said "I wanted to gift u something splcl. But I can't, u always make me splcl." Maan smiled at her cute lil. Wiffy who is gonna to become mother but still is a kid,he scooped her in his arm n carried her out near small pool, which is geet's fav. Place after their room,

geet was still keeping her head on his chest n with closed eyes she is sobbing, maan made her seat on his lap n asked her to open her eyes n look around, geet slowly opened her eyes n looked around which make her smile n rested her head on his chest n whispered "I love u" maan hold her n said "u know what geet, u don't need to gift me snything or make me splcl. Geet, u know the day u entered in my it was full of surprises n from the very 1st day u made me feel, spl. U are the only gal of my life shone, but u know what jaan u made me feel splcl. When for the 1st tym u was in my, with closed eyes n trembling lips", geet smiled on it , where maan continued "when the 1st tym I kissed u" geet kissed his lips or say it was peck from her side but it turned into passionate kiss, maan left her after some tym when he feel her lack of breath, after that he cocoon her in his arms, n continued " u made me feel spcl. When u said me to select saree for u, n when without saying any word u wore it u made me splcl. That day jaan.

Maan opened the lid of bowls placed on table n served food in a plate, geet smiled broadly seeing her all fav. In plate n kissed tightly on maan's cheek, at last maan left his breath, after seeing geet at last smiling, maan brought food morsel near her mouth, geet opened it n have with his jaan's hand n took chappati from plate n bring morsel near maan's mouth n he had it happily...n both had their dinner happily n full of kisses for every morsel they are having. Maan was happy from heart to his love happy in his arms n now geet was in her chirpy self talking with him, sharing her thoughts about their coming baby, geet said happyily "maanu I want a baby boy same like u" maan cutted her n said "nooo I want a angel like u jaan, sweet caring" but before he complete geet said "nahi boy"

Gal

Boy

Gal

Boy

At last maan made her seat more closely to him n nibbled her earlobe n said huskily "what about havings twins one gal n one boy" on which geet made o shaped mouth n said "nahi I want one at a tym" on which maan laughed n geet pout her face, at last both woke up n geet walked near the small fireplace

which was near the pool, she sat there n was admiring the beauty of nature which is surrounded near this beautiful house, it's really beautiful n geet loved to spend tym here with maan or their family. Geet was lost in thought of maan...their love, how it is blooming with the tym, she touched her belly where there love is blooming inside her, she still remember that day when she told maan that he is gng to become father

Flashback

Maaneet were working In office, geet was not well from last 2 days, maan has told her to be at home n take rest but geet is geet she told him "what I will do here alone, office me kam se kam aap toh hoge na, agar mujhe kuch hua toh dekhne ke lie yaha kaun hoga" maan stopped her from saying further n said "ok" as he too feel its ri8 if she is with her. Geet was feeling drowsy while working on lappy, maan was on round while passing through geet cabin he see her losing her conscious , maan ran near her before she fall from chair n hold her in his arms, "geet ...geet kya hua tumhe geet aankhe kholo jaan" he carried her to his cabin n made he lye while keeping her head in his lap n shouted on adii to call doctor... doc. came n ask him to go out, he was admant but doc. made him agree till then geet also gains her conscious, after doc. checked maan came inside n bombared doc. with his question, on which doc. replied him nothing big she is just weak n need some rest n prescribed some medicines n went from there while geet was smiling brodly, when maan ask her, she nodded in head no n said "nothng bas aewae" after that maan took her home n told her to take rest n was gng in washroom to change when geet held his wrist n pulled him near her n rested her head on his chest n said "wanna to share something wid u" on which maan said "yeh go on but 1st take rest" n tried to go away when geet tighten her hold around him, maan understand there is something imp. Which she wants to share so he scoop her in his arm n sat on couch while making her seat in his lap, geet with shy smile took his hand n kept on her belly n was blushing maan was confused when geet came near his ears n speak

"jaan u gonna to become dadda" maan looked at her with a big grin n again asked she blushed which confirmed him that she is telling truth n happy too, he instantly took her lips in his for a passionate kiss both were living that moment"

Flaskback endsss


Maan came from back n slipped a beautiful necklace in her neck,

geet looked at him on which he said "ur another gift jaan for giving me most precious happiness of our life" he said those lines while keeping his hand on her hand which was on her belly. This was the beginning of their beautiful night, maan made geet lye on the soft n warm bed placed near the fireplace, n howered over her with naughty glints in his eyes n said "u wanted to make me spcl. Na soo time came jaan to make me feel spcl." On which geet smilied n wrapped her arms on his neck n bring him close to her, when maan said "today nobody can stop me as I consulted doc. we can" n winked her geet happily took his kips in lips n nibbled it, it was one of the passionate kiss of them which didn't stop full night, one after one... they were once again one in each way, surrendering themselves in eachother arms, losng their everything still they get emense love from eachother, this night was soo beautiful for them, maan always wanted to make out near this beautiful place but never got chance n today he got it on the beautiful day of their life, on their 1st wedding anniversary.

After 3 n half yrs

Geet was running behind her two naughty kids who always make her run...today is their bday, yes geet gave birth to twins...like god heard maan's wish that day she gave birth to two naughty angels, who always make her life her...but still they love their mumma. Maan caught both his angel n said arymaan ...geetanjali, bad habits baby don't make run for ur food have it on tym baccha, both nodded while geet came there n arymaan went in her lap, both maaneet feed their kids together...

Both maaneet gave their name to their kids as maan wanted small geet so he named his daughter geetanjali...n as geet wanted small maan so he named him arymaan...but in home all called them anjali n arya

Geet's life revolve around arya anjali n her MR.PERFECT who is really mr..perfect in every accepts he was there for her when she needed him, he was there for her when she again wanted to work, he was there for her when she need a frnd, mentor a lover boy n husband... she got so many relations in maan so he is her MR.PERFECT.

THIS WAS STARTING OF HER NEW JOURNEY WITH HER MR.PERFECT

At last my this os ended haye I will miss mr.perfect hope u all liked it, it was my fav. Story of mine which I love to read always...hope u all will not forget this MR.PERFECT n get urs tooo J😊

Edited by geetsmile - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oyeee me 1st 😲😲😲
after a long day 🥳🥳🥳

aweee soo cute ud baby 😛😛😛
long time later read will ud feeling good 😃😃😃
lovlyyy sweet caring hubby maan 😉😉
geet so happy 😊😊
maaneet becoming parents 😳😳
all r veryy happy shappy 😛😛
maaneet kds too naughty like them lol 😆😆😆
lovee itt baby muhaaa 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by sumaiyariya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely epilogue
maans wish granted and maaneet become parents of twins who are really naughty
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful epilogue of a beutiful journey
Specially pics selection ...
Geet is pregent with twins
And Maaneet nok jhok is supab
Love it sooo soo much
This os is so snoothing and peaceful
Pearl in ur whole writing bunch and my fav one too
Edited by BULBUL.A - 11 years ago

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