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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

painful...bt will she really move on...

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jas_maaneet

@jas_maaneet

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Simply awesome. I really like the way you have portrayed Geet emotions. I hope you have happy ending for her and I am still coming to terms with Maan death.

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
again it's a superb part .well blend with emotions .every one is true at his aur her place with their thinking. my few lines '' koun kahta hai ke ,marna mushkil hota hai . arre mar jaate hai log ,ik pal bhar main mushkil toh marte hue , zinda rahna hota hai n waffa ka khel hai zindagi ,pata nahi yeh tumne nahi ki ya humne nahi ki tumne ik mulakat bhi mujhse na ki ,koi ik baat bhi na ki jee saku jis ke sahaare aisi koi yaad bhi mujko na di lagta hai yahi dastoore wafaa hai ,kabhi tum nahi aaye toh kabhi main nahki chali tum sang main nahi chali ,markar main sati nahi hui par woh ek pal main mar kar sati hona bhi kya hua main tumhari woh suhaagan hu , jo har pal tum bin akele jee kar ,is jeene ki aag main har pal sati hui

wow lovely

thanks a lot

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Well written geet emotion. N her carving for love, unsaid desire.

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Its heart breaking to read Geet's pain.
All small small incidents reminds Geet
Of Maan n craves for him.

Adopted the saint life. Dadima helpless.
Geet will never move on.

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

emotional update. meera is so sweet

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Actually Geet in remembrance of husband, whom she did not even spend a moment with is herself doing all penance which the society forces on women... She definitely needs to move ON... I can't think of Maaneet but of only Geet here...