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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 20

Posted: 12 years ago

#251

OMG awesomely written once again...

I could not stop the tears... ufff.. this FF is taking all my attention to the exetent ...

Her each small pain and desire you have put so wonderfully... Now again eager for more...

I don't know how you have planed this but if Maan is not coming back then for first time I really want Geet to move on... coz this is too painful..

I want her to cherish all small small happiness that she is yearning for...

You magic is magically working

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago

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Sonali92

@Sonali92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

how could he die and leaving her so alone...it broke my heart...pls bring him back...she should move on with him...love the ss

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

hope someone comes into Geets life soon..

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Emotioinal part
Geet choosen meditation to controll her feelings

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Feel so bad for geet... She is doing so much eventhough she doesnt even know maan...
Very nice update

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Tanu

@ytanuja

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Awesome story, looking forward for more.

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FanDeep

@Fandeep

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

This part depicted the pain and craving of geet
.awesome update

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

oh god so emotinal turmoil in geet
geet to move on is grt
bt witj maan is nt there
hope geet again tc of busissness

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

again it's a superb part .well blend with emotions .every one is true at his aur her place with their thinking. my few lines '' koun kahta hai ke ,marna mushkil hota hai . arre mar jaate hai log ,ik pal bhar main mushkil toh marte hue , zinda rahna hota hai n waffa ka khel hai zindagi ,pata nahi yeh tumne nahi ki ya humne nahi ki tumne ik mulakat bhi mujhse na ki ,koi ik baat bhi na ki jee saku jis ke sahaare aisi koi yaad bhi mujko na di lagta hai yahi dastoore wafaa hai ,kabhi tum nahi aaye toh kabhi main nahki chali tum sang main nahi chali ,markar main sati nahi hui par woh ek pal main mar kar sati hona bhi kya hua main tumhari woh suhaagan hu , jo har pal tum bin akele jee kar ,is jeene ki aag main har pal sati hui

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.OneDirection.

@.OneDirection.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

This is so painful Di Where is Maan ???:??? Atleast give a small hint if he is alive What if Daadi insist Geet to move on btw lovely update want more ❤️