~sati~ maaneet SS THREAD 1

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Di. Hats off. U write very beautifully all things. Par our hero. :( nhi rha.
Superb update

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

nice concept..

but u did not say how maan died

i think the body may not be him..

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

awesome one , geet is so strong ,she started thinking in positive way . that 's the way to lead life . its so irony na , girls live half of der life with der parents but still eventhough we married for one day our heart beats for our husband only and we dedicate whole life to them 😳

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Congratulations for the new STORY

and as always you swept us all with your bold n beautiful concept...

amazing start...👏

eagerly waitint for more..😊

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Anisa

@anisaf

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Wow ...Awesome start Muskaan di...But i dont understand what is the meaning of Sati?? I am a Muslim and dont know the whole concept of these rituals.Sorry if this sounds ignorant...but would really like to know more...

I dont think Maan is dead...Mera dil nahi maanta...

Update soon Muskaan di.

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

cngratz for new story. really looking forward to know how this story will proceed. its such a touching concept.

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OsheenDGr8

@OsheenDGr8

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Ooo can I say I loved ur new story... Probably not bcz its beyond that...
The first chap was amazing, at the end i had so many ideas like they wud have a reincarnation or somthng rofl... Bt the 2nd part removed that thought n I think daal me kuch kala hai, maybe Maan didnt die it cud be dev at his place or it ol cud be Maan's trick to nt get married or perhaps u have something else in tat wicked mind of urs... The mystery is gluing n refreshing
Shru di's banner n Aishu's poem were also mind blowing
Ol n ol superb n m waiting fr next

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

very beautiful start

a unique concept

give the next part soon

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aashi14

@aashi14

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

both d parts were just awsum...

d concept isbilkul hatke types i never thought dat maan will b her 1st hubby n m damn sure dat he just ditched her nd ran away nd may b dadi also knws it...😕

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

shocking start...i had actually stopped breathing...but the turnover was mindblowing!!!!

it was sooo painful to see her losing him on their wedding night..and then the sati thing...but am glad that dadi saved her!!!
and that caption of your story di..
not only in this world,
but the one beyond.

i can really speculate the way the story might progress...keeping my fingers crossed because am just awestruck right now. just too gud..
its like maan gave his bit of life to hers so that she could live the way she had always wanted...just with a difference that he would watch her from afar!!!

it will gloomy for geet...lonely...painful..and the path will be thorny..but everything seemed to be decided by destiny...by maan...like he knew death was inevitable..so he decided to reside within her and fulfil everything!!!

just speechless...i have a lot to say...but somethings r just need to be felt!!!!
i really wanna know how she reaches maan!!! loving it a lottt