My OS thread- New OS for Anniversary....Yaadhein on pt 1,2 pg 23 apr 5 - Page 2

Part 2
wowww thanks for continuing.. That was a brilliant idea of arranging a date
geet loves maan.. Ur writing is soo good me feeling magical fater so many days

Part 3
date wow.. Pasta wo bhi maan ke haath ka.. Maan ko na desert me kiss dena chahiya thha wo bhi a quick and short one...
geet is right ho can she confess first
and now being a girl its impossible.. Dont worry maan will let it rain than geet madam ko kehne padenge wo teen lafz...

continue please

Maneet wedding……...

Dadi is surprised to see Geet….

Geet: gud evening Dadi

Dadi: Geet, what a pleasant surprise? Toh aaj ka kya program hai?

Dadi winks….

Geet: woh…Maan kahan hai?

Dadi: Maan apne kamre mein hi hai, shayad aap ke liye hi intrezaar kar rahe hai? aap upar jayiye, hare Geet, ek minute, ye coffee lekhe jayiye

Geet takes the coffee to Maan's room….

Geet knocks…..

Maan ko laga Nakul hai….

Maan: Nakul, coffee table pe rakho

Maan shouts from the wash room….

Geet ko patha nahi kya karein?

Should she wait for him or leave the coffee on the table and go down and wait for him….

She keeps the coffee on the table and tries to elave….

Maan just comes out of his shower and he is very happy to see Geet…

He was not expecting her in his room….

Fnally she is here….Geet Handa Mana Singh Khurana ke paas aa hi gayi?

He catches hold of her and stops her….

Maan: hare, aaise kaise jaa sakthi?

Geet: woh….chodo mujhe

Maan: hare, tum jis kaam ke liye aaye ho, woh toh katam karkke jao

Maan is eager to hear ILU from her….

Geet: mera kaam ho gaya

Maan: kya? Geet. Mujhe teek se sunayi nahi diya, phir se kaho

Maan ko lagtha shayad jab Maan washroom ke andar tha tabhi ye Maan se baat kar arhi thi…

Ye Geet Handa haina? Kuch bhi kar sakthi…..

Geet: woh….mein aapko coffee dene aayi thi, coffee table pe hai

Maan: what? Are you kidding me? Tum mujhe coffee dene aayi thi, aur kuch nahi

Geet nahi

Maan ka gussa badthe hi jaatha…..

Maan: tum na….kabhi nahi sudhroge, tum bhi dusre ladhkiyon ki tarah hi ho, tujhe kya lagtha, ladhkhon ko hi hamesha appkke peeche bhaagthe rehna chahiye? Tumme aaise koi galatfami ho toh abhi ussko apne dimag se nikhaaldo, mein Maan singh Khurana hoon, samji

Geet also gets angry….

Geet: aap samajthe kya apne aapko? Ye hum donno ke beech ka mamla hai, ladhkiyon ko kyun beech mein lathe ho? aap bhi sab ki taarh hi ho, badhe aaye mujhe lecture dene, pehle aapki soch ko badlo, phir ladhkiyon ko sabak sikhana, samje aap?

Ye baat ko kahan se kahan lekhe jaathi hai, baabji, sach mein ye sab se alag hai……

Maan: tum…..chale jaon yahan se, abhi….

Maan: haan haan, tum aaise hi apne barish ka intrezaar karthe rehna, mein kissi ka intrezaar nahi karnewala, samji tum

Geet: haan haan, ab mein aapko bahut achche se samaj gayi

Geet leaves in anger…….

Maneet stop seeing each other….not even speaking….

Both miss each other so much but their ego is even bigger…..

Next week….

Maan is busy making arrangements for the inauguration….

Inauguration of that same building…..

Dadi is worried about them very much……

She invites Geet for the inauguration….

Geet is not willing to go there….

He can't face Maan gain….she will break down when she comes face to face with him….

She is missing him too much…..she can't bear his silence…..

She wants him by her side always…..

She needs him every minute….

Maybe she should have listened to him…..

Aakhir itna pyaar karthi ahi toh ussko accept karne se kya problem?

Ek bar ILU kehne se kya hotha? Geet itna kyun sochthi ahi?

Maan bhi bahut kush hotha aur Geet ko apna banatha hamesha hamesha ke liye….

Jaise Maan kehtha haina? Maan ek kadam aage jaatha toh Geet do katam peeche jaathi….

Geet Maan ke tarah itne jaldhi jaldhi apna kadam aage nahi rakhthi toh kya hai? peeche toh nahi jaathi? Haina? Maan ke haath pakadkke usskke har kadam mein saath dethi…haina?

Ab kuch bhi ho, Geet Maan se baat karne hi wali hai…..

Usska ego itna bada hai toh kya? mere ek lafz sunkke ussko ego gayab ho jaatha, haian?

Geet goes to the function….

Get looks gorgeous in her Saree….

Jab se Geet aayi hai Maan toh Geet ko hi dekhthe rehtha…..

But it's a party and Maan is always busy attending the guests…..

She can't meet him alone….

Geet can't bear this….

Maan is just infront of her and she can't speak with him….

Babaji, ye kya ho raha hai?

Geet Maan ke peeche hi apdi hai…par Maan Geet se bhaagthe rehtha….

Ye kya naya khel hai?

Then they start the music and start dancing….

Geet is standing in a corner very upset with Maan…

She is talking with Adi….

Suddenly Maan comes and takes her to the dance floor….

Geet tries to resist….but Maan forcefully takes her…..

Maan is out of control…..he has just lost himself in her beauty….

Kurban hua….

Tere ashique mein yun….

Maneet passionate dance….

Geet feels embarrassed…

Sabkke samne Maan ka zabardast dance ko Geet sambal nahi pathi….

She is also mersmerised by his passiomate dance….

The more she gets away from him he becomes more demanding...

She is not able to satisfy his demands….

Just when she tries to yield to his demands he starts demanding more….

He is not going to stop until she gives herself to him….

Until she surrenders herself completely…..

Until she becomes his Geet….Maan ki Geet….

Geet also doesn't want to keep him waiting for she is not ready to wait anyore….

She also wants him for herself……forever….

He is my Maan….I love him….and yes I need him too……..

But Maan is still silent….

His silence kills her….

She wants to put an end to this torture….

Jaise bhi ho, aaj Maan ko mere baat ko sunna hi padega…..

After a while the guests leave one by one….

Finally Dadi too leaves….

Dadi: Geet, aap hummare saath aarahe hai kya beta? Hum aapko drop kardenge

Geet ko patha nahi kya karein?

She has to leave somehow…. But Maan is still angry with her….

What if he leaves her alone here…..

It's better to go with Dadi….

Geet: teek hai dadima, mein aapke saath aaarhi hoon

Maan hears this…..

Maan: nahi dadi, aap ajyiye, hum badh emin aathe hai

Geet looks at him puzzled…..

Maan smiles…..

Dadi: teek ahi bete, gud night

Adi comes….

Maan: toh Adi, sara kaam ho gaya haina?

Adi: ji sir, ab mein chaltha hoon

Maan: teek hai

Geet: ye kay ahi? Sab chale gaye, mein kaise jaoon?

Maan: sshhh

Maan closes her mouth….

Maan: chup….bilkul chup…..

Maan ke nazre mein shararat hai….

Geet darjaathi….ye kya chakkar hai?

Maan: tum abhi kuch nahi bologe

Maan lifts her and takes her in….

To the same open space in the middle of the building where thay met on that rainy day….

To her surprise it starts raining all of a sudden….

As if the skies were waiting for this moment…..

Maan puts her down gently….

Geet runs into the rain…..

Maan follows her……

Geet forgets everything and starts to dance in the rain….

Maan smiles….: lo, ye phir shuru ho gayi…..

He doesn't complait as far as she is dancingin his arms….

Maan: Geet, shayad tum kuch bhool rahi ho?

Geet: mein kaise bhool sakhti? Mein bhi issi barish ka intrezaar kar rahi thi

Maan: kyun? Tumme barish itna pasand hai?

Geet: haan, yahi barish humme ek dusre ke kareeb laya tha, haina?

Maan: haan Geet, mein bhi ab barish ka deewana ban gaya

Geet: kya? toh tum mere deewane nahi ho?

Maan: par Geet iss barish ne hi mujhe tera deewana banaya haina?

Maan hugs her by the waist and pulls her closer…

Maneet eyelock……

She whispers into his ears…."I LOVE YOU Maan"

Maan: mein samaj gaya hoon Geet, tumme isse kehna ki koi zarooart nahi hai, mujhe toh ye bahut pehle hi patha hai Geet, shayad tumse bhi pehle

Geet: achcha? toh itne din mujhse naraaz kyun tha?

Man: kyunki mein jaana chahtha hai ki meri Geet mujhkko kitna miss karthi ahi?

Geet: what?

Maan: haan, kyat um bhi mujhe utna hi miss karthi ho jitna mein tumme miss kartha hoon ya nhi?

Geet: toh aapko mere pyaar mein barosa nahi hai?

Geet tries to get away….

Maan stops her and pulls her closer….

Maan: ye tera pyaar kaise ho agay? Mein hummare pyaar ko kaise shak kar saktha?

Geet: phir aapne aaisa kyun kiya?

Maan: hare Geet, woh kehthe haian ki roothne ke badh manane mein hi mazaa aatha hai, toh humme ussko miss nahi karna chahiye haina?

Geet: aap bi na?

Maan: Geet, ab kudhradh bhi nahi chahatha ki hum alag ho, dekho barish bhi aagay

Geet: par, mujhe nahi laga ki aaj barish hogi, meinne weather report bhi dekha tha

Maan: tum chahathi toh kabhi bhi barish hoga Geet

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan

The rain stops suddenly…..

Geet: dekha aapne kya kaha aur kya ho gaya?

Geet is disappointed……

Maan: hare, ab dekho

It starts to pur again…

Geet: ye kaise jadu hai

Maan: Geet, mere haath mein jadu ahi, dekho

Geet: ye kya hai

Maan has a remote in his hands…..

Maan: ye Maan singh Khurana ka magic wand hai

Geet tries to snatch it from him….

Maan: hare Geet, chodo

Geet: Maan, ye toh cheating hai

Geet gets the remote and pushes the stop button….

Rain stops …….

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: Geet, mein kya kartha? Ab agle barish hone tak mein wait nahi kar saktha haina?

Geet: waise mein bhi utna intrezaar nahi kar sakthi

Geet goes ang hugs Maan….

Maneet passionate hug…..mahiii……

Geet is also ready for this relationship now…

So why wait….

Maan asks Dadi to fix their marriage…

Handas toh isska hi intrezaar kar rahe the…..

Maneet wedding hojaathi….

Geet gets ready…

She is confused….she tries a lot of looks and sarees…

Kya ye Maan ko pasand aayega?

She wants to be at her best…..

She knows Maan's expectations are very very high…

She doesn't want to disappoint him…

Itne intrezaar karwane ke badh Geet Maan ko bahut bada treat dena chahathi haina?

Par phir bhi mann gabratha hai ki Maan ko ye sab kaisa lagega?

Achcha lagega haina? She keeps looking at herself and changes her make-up till she feels confident….

Maan gets restless waiting in his room….

Ye ladhkki abhi tak kya kar rahi hai?

Duniya mein pehla Dulhe raja hoon jo apna Dulhan ki intrezaar kartha….

Aksar Dulhan ki Dulhe raja ki intrezaar karthi, haina?

Ye Geet toh hamesha sab kuch ulta hi karthi…patha nahi aaj kya kya hoga?

Maan bhi Geet ko lekhe bahut tension mein hai…pehle bar haina?

Geet kaise react karegi?

Finally Geet arrives….

Maan just pulls her in and locks the door….

Bahar sare ladhkiyan hasthe hai…

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: itne dher intrezaar kiya haina? Ab thoda aur intrezaar nahi kar sakthe?

Maan: aur intrezaar? Geeet, hummari shadhi ho agyi hai, aur ye hummara SR hai

Geet: mujhe patha hai, mein aapke paas hi aathi hoona? Kahin bhaagnewali nahi, phir aaise kyun darwaza bandh karthe ho

Maan: toh teek hai, tum chahathe ho toh

Maan goes and keeps the door open…..

Those girls are still waiting there….

Geet stares them…..

Geet: tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho? jao

Geet locks the door now….

Maan: Geeet, mein bhi kahin bhaagnewala nahi hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: Geeet, chalo shuru karthe hai

Geet: mein kuch nahi jaanthi

Maan: achcha kuch nahi jaanthi, abhi maloom padega kit um kya kya jaanthi ho?

Maan gets closer…

Geet steps back and hits the cot….

Maan pushes her on the bed….

Geet moves back as far as she could…

Maan corners her and removes her apllu….

Geet is a little nervous….

Maan suddenly pulls back…

Geet bahut darjaathi….

Ye kya hai? ab mein kya karoon?

Kissi ne bathaya bhi nahi ki mujhe kya karna chahiye?

Sab kuch Dulhe Raja jaantha hai, haina?

Ab Maan hi takraar kartha toh bechari Geet kya karegi?

Maan keeps looking at her….

Geet: kya baat ahi?

Maan: Geet, mujhe lagtha hai ki kuch toh kammi hai

Geet: kya? Mein pehle hi jaanthi thi

Maan: what?

Geet: haan, meinne do do gante lagaya tha, tayaar hone mein, jaanthe aap?

Geet gets angry….

Maan: itne takleef lene ki kya zaroorat thi? mujhse kehthi toh mein hi apne Dulhan ko tayaar kartha

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, ek minute rukho

Maan goes and searches something in his wardrobe….

Geet: kya dhoondh rahe ho?

Maan: milgaya

Geet: kya?

Maan: ye lo Geet

Maan throws his coat….

Geet: isse kya karoon?

Maan: ye kaise sawaal hai Geet,isse pehenlo, ye tummara hi hai

Maan winks….

Geet: aapke samne?

Maan: nahi, mere peeche

Geet: chalo apne aakhen bandh karo

Maan: Geeet

Maan stares…

Geet: teek hai teek hai

Geet changes….

Maan keeps staring…

Geet ko bahut kuch ho jaatha….

He takes her to the washroom and lays her in the bath tub….

he splashes water on her face….and makes her wet…..

yahi yahi chahatha tha…..issi Geet ko Maan chahatha tha…..

Maan: Geet, mein abhi aatha hoon

Geet: Maaan?

Maan goes and changes into his boxer….

Geet sharam se apne aankhen bandh karthi….

Maan: hare, abhi bhi sharmathi toh kaise hoga?

Geet: aapko yahi milla SR mein pehenne ko?

Maan: isski bhi zaroorat nahi hai Geet, par aaj pehla din haina? Issiliye tum sharmaooge toh ye pehenna pada

Geet: aap bi na Maan

Maan: ab lagthi ho meri Mishty….Maan takes the handshower and creates mini rain effect….

Ek ladhkki beegi bhagi si

Sothi raat mein jaagi si

Mille ek ajnabi se

Koi aage na peehce

Tum hi kaho kya baat hai?

Maan shuru ho jaatha…….mahiii……………….

BTW here is the full song Behne De…with English translation….

Tahnks to Suhaana……just as I kept pondering what to write…this song kept haunting me…..

I kept hearing this song endlessly for the past couple of days…

Wanted to know the full meaning…

Searched the net and found this….I enjoyed it to the core….

I've become addicted to this song after knowing the deep meaning of gulzarji's words….

It just drives me crazy….thanks to Maneet for making me an addict of this song though I haven't seen the original….will never see it….it's just made for MSK…his passion….this song potrays his passion just as Teri deewani emphasizes Geet's love….

I don't know when I will get out of this Maneet magic land…I never want to….it's just so fascinating…

Arey aankh se boond gira koi - Someone falls a drop of tear from eyes

Chingari ka tukda jala koi – Someone burnt a piece of spark

Umeed ko aag laga zara – Fire (Burn) the expectation

sehra ki pyaas bhuja zara – quench the thirst of your lover

umeed ko aag laga zara; sehra ki pyaas bhuja zara

ghan itna baras ke ghalne lagoon - The cloud is about to downpour

main paani ke oopar tarne lagoon – I'm about to relax myself in the water

behne de mujhe behne de mujhe behne de mujhe behne de – Let me flow.. let me flow…

Behne de ghanghor ghata – Flow like thunderstorm filled clouds

Behne de paani ki tarah – Flow like water

saagar mein jaa girna hai; behne de nadiyaan ki tarah

However, the fall will be in the sea, still let me flow like rivers

shart lagi hai mar jaane ki jeena hai to pyaar mein -

I have taken a pledge before I die that if I live, I'll live in LOVE

deh kahin bhi ho mera , jaan rakhi hoo yaar mein

Where ever my body be, I've kept my life on my lover

beh jaa.. beh jaa.. hai sagar ka kehna

Flow.. Flow.. the sea says

beh jaa… beh jaa… hai nadiyaan ko behna

Flow… Flow… Let the river flow

patte se tapakti boond ki aawaaz sunaai di thi

The sound of a water drop dropping from the leaves is heard

nadiyan mein tapak aur gum ho ja

Fall into the river and disappear

beh gaya beha gaya… jo reh gaya reh gaya

Whatever flows would flow out… whatever stays would stay forever

beh gaya beha gaya… jo reh gaya reh gaya

behne de mujhe behne de…

mera pal pal ang ang bhar diya

you have filled my my every moment and every part of my body

tu ne jaan pe junoon sa kar diya

you have done something crazy in my life

mera hai kya jo main haar doon, jaan teri hai tujh pe waar doon

Nothing is mine, even my life is yours and I sacrifice for you.

doob gaye jo suna hai saare tere dere aate hain

I heard that everyone drowned who come near Ur embrace...

dil ke chullo mein bechaare dubkiyaan ghaante khaate hain

they plunge and sink into the heart...

beh jaa… beh jaa… chal tod kinare ko

flow out and break the banks

beh jaa… beh jaa… dhar le majhdhaare ko

flow out and

chingaari udaake raakh se

by taking a spark of flame from the ashes

ek boond gira ke aankh se

by dropping a tear from the eyes

chalne ka ishaara kar gaya

a signal is given to go on

kar gaya kar gaya… sab bhar gaya bhar gaya

a signal is given and my everything (heart, soul and body) is filled

1. Let fall a drop, from your eyes.
Burn a fragment of the spark,
Alight a hint of hope,
Quench the void's thirst,
That I may cascade so dense and liquify,
Floating over water.

Let me be carried in the ebb
Let me be carried in the ebb
Running like the thunderous wind
Running like water
Plunge into the sea
Let me surge like the river

I have gambled for my death
To live only in love
Let my body be castabout
But within my beloved, my essence shall be
Succumb to the ebb
Succumb to the ebb
The sea calls
Succumb to the ebb
Succumb to the ebb
The river must surge

A sound was heard somewhere
As a drop toppled onto a leaf
cascade into the stream, and dissapear.
All is adrift
all is adrift
He Who remains, will forever be so
All is adrift
all is adrift
He Who remians, will forever be so

Let me be carried in the ebb
Let me be carried in the ebb
Running like the thunderous wind
Running like water
Plunge into the sea
Let me surge like the river

You have permeated each moment and limb
You have immersed my essence in madness
What do I even have, to ever relinquish
This life is yours, I yeild it to you
Those to have ingressed upon your abode
Have all drowned, it is said
All wrteches, plunging and sinking
into the heart's quagmire
Succumb to the ebb
Succumb to the eb
And breach the banks
Succumb to the ebb
Succumb to the ebb
And seize the swell

Igniting a flare from the ashes
Letting a drop fall from the eyes
gesturing for progression
And once given
and once given
Everything brimmed
Everything brimmed

Let me be carried in the ebb
Let me be carried in the ebb
Running like the thunderous wind
Running like water
Plunge into the sea
Let me surge like the river

Hayeee my fav woww wat a sweet romantic one.. Well dear meri last demand h abhi bhi... To continue it .. Behne de is just awesome

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Hayeee my fav woww wat a sweet romantic one.. Well dear meri last demand h abhi bhi... To continue it .. Behne de is just awesome

Laga Chunri mein daag…..

This is just an imagination…..

I always stay away from sensitive issues…

But this has always bothered me whenever I read anything related to this issue….

Just came across an article about a brave heart who dared her destiny and is selected for studying in the US…..i salute her…..apart from saving herself she is helping tribal girls get out of this hell…..she is only 19 yrs old….we need more shernis like her…..

No offence for depicting Geet like this, want to see all those Geets free one day….

ye zara hatke story hai...as the reality show judges say it's completely out of my comfort zone...pls bear with my mistakes...

Part – 1

Now coming to the story…….

Geet enters a star hotel and goes to the reception…..

Introduces herself….

The receptionist looks into the monitor and gives the keys to her….

Geet is surprised…..

Everytime her clients wait for her in their room…

This is strange…..this seems to be a special case….

Yes, it's a new client……one who had been escaping her all the while….

But who can miss Geet?

Finally he too joined her elite clientele….

She deals only with the big shots…..

This is one big shark that has kept her waiting for a long time…..

Geet takes the lift and walks toward the room….

Entering the room she hangs her bag and adjusts her make-up…….

She looks at herself in the mirror…..

She admires herself…..perfect…..ready to drive anyone crazy….

Her looks and her ravishing features are her assaets….

She is very conscious about her looks and takes pride in her ability to conquer any man within a matter of a few minutes….no doubt they call her Cleopatra…the eternal seductress….

She is taking so much care about herself today, b'coz of the special client she is expecting anytime….

Normally she is very confident and deals with her clients with much ease…..

She is never involved emotionally and amuses her clients just for the sake of it….they pay her for her services and she makes sure they are not disappointed…..a win win situation for both of them…

She has been lucky enough to say no to unwanted mean creatures….

Thanks to her good looks and well maintained figure…...

She is the most sought after and the most paid in her lot….

Not everyone is lucky enough to afford this kind of luxury….

But this man seems to be the one she had been looking forward to meet for the past couple of months….

She met this Maan Singh Khurana a couple of months before at Rahul's bachelor party….

As every eye was kept hooked by her beauty, a pair of eyes kept annoying her by totally neglecting her….

This made her curious and she learnt that it's MSK of Khurana Constructions and he is new to Mumbai…..his business is based in Delhi and he had just opened a branch at Mumbai…

He is not used to partying, only official parties that are strictly devoid of girls….

He was here b'coz of his new partner Rahul's compulsion….

As Geet and afew girls kept dancing and entertained the drooling men around them ,Maan stayed away from this mad crowd….

Rahul signaled Geet to egt him involved as he thought he was shy….

Geet tried to gain his attention by getting near him almost touching him….

But he didn't have the decency to appreciate her and he rudely pushed her away and left the party abtruptly….

Geet felt ashamed…. She had never been insulted like this before….what an attitude?

My God! What a guy? She liked this attitude….

She had seen many MSKs before and all fell at her feet in their next meeting….

But this man was a tough guy……it took her 2 months to woo him….

They met often at Rahul's parties…..

Though they were official parties Geet had the privilege to attend them as Rahul's special guest…

She has remained special to him even after his marriage….that's Geet….

No one can resist her after being with her for once….

This guy thinks that he is extra ordinary….

But let me traet him once and he would never forget me in his life time….

She felt this urge to satisfy him….this is the first time she is feeling this way…

Low in confidence…..highly emotional……

She had successfully kept her personnel and professional lives separate all these days….

She never felt emotionally attached before…she remained aloof inspite of the intimacy……

At times she had enjoyed a little comarederie with them, like this Rahul…..

Rahul…..ahhh…one sweet rascal, who knows how to treat his girl, make her feel special……though it's just a gimic….she also knows he is faking…but what matters is the act, it doesn't matter even if it's fake…..

Geet kept thinking about this MSK as she made herself comfortable and tried to hide her anxiety…..

Actually she felt nervous as if it was the first time she is seeing a man….

Indeed this is the first time she is seeing a true man….

Till then she had met numerous men one different from the other but when it came to business none of them seemed to be different…..all were the same…..simply expecting her body and always demanding….

I have paid for it….it's mine….never minded to look at the soul behind it….

Geet too never expected anything better from them….

But this man and his piercing eyes always connected with her soul….

Though she had never spoken a word with him it felt like he knew her very well….

But he always remained mysterious to her….

She is very nervous…wht to expect from this mystery man….

He had already shocked her by making her wait for him…

As time passes Geet gets restless…..

Is he trying to fool me?

I am here just b'coz rahul insisted…else I wouldn't be least interested…..

The truth is she always wanted to know him, be with him….

Geet keeps looking at the door and her watch…

There is no sign of his Majesty…..

That's what he thinks of himself?

Let him come, I will make sure that he means nothing to me…..

She gets irritated by this attitude…..

That's it…she had waited enough….she is leaving….

As she opens the dorr fiercely in anger and moves forward, she bangs into something solid as a rock….it's MSK…..she could barely stand when he ctaches her and holds her in his arms….

She looks at those penetrating eyes……always posing a query with an authority as if she owes him an answer…..

He pushes her in and locks the door behind….

He doesn't utter a single word….

But Geet felt guilty….as if she had made a mistake and kept him waiting…..

Though she is aware of her deeds she never felt guilty, but this man's look makes her swoon and question herself…….

She never tolerated such assaults……..

She always walked away from such guys….

But today she couldn't just walk away….

Something stopped her….maybe it's his aura…

Geet: mein kitne dher se intrezaar kar rahi hoon? Tumme patha bhi hai ki mere har gante ka keemat 10000 hotha hai?

Maan is least bothered….

He takes a lakh from his pocket and throws at her….

Maan: this shpuld shut your nasty mouth

Geet feels insulted…..

She tries to leave……

Maan holds her hand and stops her…..

Maan: tummare apise milgaye haina? Ab tum nahi jaasakthi

Geet tries to get rid of his hold….

But he is too string…..

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan: nahi chod saktha, mere paas abhi bhi 8 gante hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, agle 8 gante ko yahan se hilne ka bhi koshsih mat karna

He just dargs and pyshes her on the bed….

Maan keeps staring…..

When he met her for the first time he just hated her, had no pity what so ever, hated her abusing herself…..her natural beauty…..yes, he too noticed that raw sensual beuty of hers….why blame the men? She is iressistable ven for the saint MSK……..but still he can't digest her acts….how could she be so shameless……what if it's her fate and it's her profession……let it be within closed doors…not in front of everyone….spaecaily not in front if MSK….

It took a few more parties to realize that he is actually upset with others being so close to her….

Is he anyway protective…what the hell? Why would he bother himself for some silly girl…

She seems to be comfortable with it….

Maybe she is pretending….deep down she is shattered….

Oh man…..juat stop imagining……she is no one to you….

Not even someone who entertained you someday….

Neither do you want her….then why this frustration?

Geet realizes how foolish it was to come here….

She always meets them at her palce for the first couple of times till she gets acquainted with them….

Had it been her place she would have got help……

She curses herself for comimg here….

She came only for this man….

She desperately wanted to meet him….wanted to conquer him…..

To prove that all men are the same…..when it comes to women….they want them….to fulfil their needs….ready to do anything for their lust…..buy it with money or use their mighty power….

Geet is always ready to take money but never allowed soemoneto force her…..

Why do they force as it comes to them easily at some extra bugs….

Geet has learnt to handle her clients in these few years that she had been in business….

But she had never met someone with such an attitude and rudeness….

There were a few incidents were someone had tried to manhandle her in a drunken state, but she always had her backup at her service who took care of them….

She never thought that this man would be like this….

Rahul was all rpaise for him and was surprised when he wanted to arrange this meeting….

Warned Geet that this fellow is completely new to this business…..

Geet boasted that she can handle this easily, given her experience….

Geet was a little scared….what if he is one of those beasts that she had heard of form her friends…..

As a matter of fact she is still inexperienced in handling such situations for hse had never come across such men earlier….thanks to her youth…..there's still time to be detained to the lower level….in her profession there is no promotion, your value only depreciates….

Maan feels pity for her seeing her scared…..

Maan: darne ki koi baat nahi hai…..

Geet collect herself and gets herself erady….

But Maan moves to the couch, opens his lappy and starts working….

Geet is puzzled by his behavoiur….

What's the matter with him?

Maybe this is the first time for him?

Jaise bhi ho, Geet is the senior here…..

Maybe he is feeling guilty?….

Maybe he is thinking about his wife?…..

Geet decides to make the first move….

Maybe he will then follow suit….

Geet takes a quick shower and comes out in her towel….

Maan is least bothered….

Geet tries to gain his attention….

Geet : tummara kaam ho gaya kya?

Maan turns back and is astonished to see her….

He oculdn't take his off and is spell bound….

Geet looks triumpant….atlast she has done it….

Geet gets closer…..

Maan gets back into his documents…..trying to hide his anxiety….

Geet knows men very well….he is no exception….

Maan feels her warmth as she stood behind him leaning forward as if peeping into his lappy….but he knows her intensions….her chest almost brushing his neck…..

Her fingers play around his neck and start moving down …

Maan is in his casual shirt…

She starts unbuttoning his already half open shirt….

Her eyes are fixed on his hard worked torso….

Maan stops her……gently removing her hands form his bare chest…..

That's the limit…he is not going to take anymore….

Maan: mujhe thoda kaam hai, thode dher mujhe disturb mat karo

He says candidly still keeping his eyes in his lappy….

Geet: toh mere kya zaroorat?

She turns back and gets into her clothes….

She switches on the TV…..

Surfs the channels for her favourite hero…Salman…..

She turns back and stares Maan's back...

She wants to feel him now….feel his broad shoulders…….

What's the use of his workouts if he keeps them hidden……

This damn waiting is killing her….

She had never yearned like this for someone's touch ……

After all she realizes her own feelings now which she thought were gone for ever…..

Her body had gone numb to all those senses……

She was always mechanical in bed….fully automated….

She just wants to get her job done as fast as it could and get rid of her partner once for all….

Baring a few whom she can't say no anytime for some reasons….

She keeps staring maan and looking at the time…..

It's almost 2 pm…..

Mostly she is back home by this time….

She never sleeps over at her client's place….

Most of them don't want to have her after they have used her……

Geet: aur kitne dher lagaoge? Mujhe neendh aarahi hai

Maan: toh sojao

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan

Geet: nahi, mujhe koi neendh se utatha toh mujhe bahut gussa aatha

Maan: mein bhi toh dekhtha hoon tere gusse ko

Geet: kaise aadmi hai? aajtak kissi ne mujhe itna pareshaan nahi kiya

Geet lays down and falls asleep….

When she wakes up Maan has finished his work and has freshened up….

Geet: tummaar kaam ho gaya?

Maan: haan

Geet: toh, mujhe utaya kyun nahi?

Maan: tumme kamakaam gussa nahi karna chahatha

Geet looks at her watch….

Geet: tere paas abhi bhi ek ganta hai

Geet smiles….

Maan is standing in the balcony looking at the stars…..

Geet gets out of the bad and gets near him…..

She also looks at the sky…..

Geet: kya dekh rahe ho?

Maan: ye raat ki chandini aur ye chamakthe tarein ko dekho

Geet: issme kya nayi baat hai? ye toh roz aaise hi dikhtha hai

Maan: haan, aur ye sabko darshan detha hai, ye aasmaan pe sabka haq hai, chahe woh aamir ho, gareeb ho, buda ho, jawaan ho, kissi bhi desh ka ho, sab ke liye aasmaan ek hi hai, sab aasmaan ko choone ka sapne dekhthe hai, sare maa apne bete ko chand ko dikhakke hi khana khilathi, chahe woh Rajmahal ho ya koi mamooli sadak….

Geet: tum toh koi nakli babaji ki tarah batein karte ho, mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aatha

Maan: kash ye zameen pe hi sabka aaisa hi baarbar ka haq hotha? toh duniya mein itne sare differences nahi hothe

Geet: tummara bashan katam ho gaya toh kripiya mujhpe pe thoda dhyaan doge?

Maan: tum ye kaam kyun karthi ho?

Geet is hsocked….she stares him confused….ye kaise sawaal hai?

Maan: tum isko chod kyun nahi dethi?

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tum isse chod dho, koi achcha kaam karo, mein usska intrezaam kar saktha hoon

Geet: toh tum mujhe pana bashan sunane ke liye hi bhulaye ho?

Maan: tumme nahi lagtha ki ye paap hai?

Geet takes out the cash and shows it to him…..

Geet: isska kya matlab? Mein paapi hoon toh tum bhi toh paapi ho

Maan gets angry…….

She pushes her aside….

Maan: mein aaise gatia kaam nahi kartha

Geet gets angry too……

Geet: toh ye kisske liya hai?

Maan: ye, tummare kaam chodne ke liye, issko advance samjo, bolo tumme kitne paise chahiye?

Geet: tummara matlab hai ki tum mujhe apne dasi banana chahathe ho?

Maan: kya? kya kaha tumne?

Geet: mein aaisi ladhki nahi hoon, koi dusri laddhki doondhlo

Maan: tum aur tummara gandha soch

Geet: itne ahcche abnnne ki koshish mat karo, chalo aaj ke liye toh mein teri hi hoon

Maan: mujhe aaise gatia harkat karne ki aadat nahi hai, tum jaasakthi ho

Geet can't tolerate this nonsense…..

Geet: mujhe bhi bheek lene ki aadat nahi ahi

Geet throws the cash on his face and leaves…..

Still reeling out of shock u write so well

Spark hatred lust and a bit of laga chunri me daag movie clips reminding me...

this is new and u justified it.. I am eager to read this.. Please if its possible do make a index and update soon...

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Spark hatred lust and a bit of laga chunri me daag movie clips reminding me...

this is new and u justified it.. I am eager to read this.. Please if its possible do make a index and update soon...

Index on pg 1 dear...