OS: Seventh Heaven UPDATED Pt 2/ Pg 6 @ 21 april - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc os...
it was cute n lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your slow walk in my life,

gave an innocent knock in heart,

that everything inside became on rush,

became on way of your heart,

reached & started living the life,

imply on all your wishes ,

it doesn't hear me now

it doesn't let me hear myself...



Seventh Heaven



A small meet with him became special moment for whole life'

"Geet Di..!!!!'

Geet hears her sister calling her and she comes back from the tour of destination Maan. With some undefined glare here n there she tries to escape from the questioning eyes of Rajji but was not possible when her own face and body were playing against of her will. But for her fortune Rano comes in and stopped Rajji curious mind before it could start any questionnaire.

"Geet Beta you didn't get ready yet. Dadi ma wants to meet you. Chal jaldi taiyaar hoja'

She spoke while correcting the position of Geet Dupatta on head. Then all ten minutes they both mother daughter spent to make Geet pettier then before by giving her a final touch up but Geet was lost with the thought of her first interaction with Maan.

She couldn't keep those flashback away from her mind, even from the front of her eyes she could easily see everything as fresh when hears Rano stated her to walk along with her.

With slow steps Geet comes out wishing a small prayer to her dear Babaji to help her, to calm down her running heartbeats and few sweats droplets which were just eager to slip down from her forehead. Thank God they had A.C. in hall so that problem of sweats got solved with no hard labour but she couldn't give pause to her heartbeats. After fighting for minutes she reached to there, where she could see his shoes because of her small veil and bent head which was staring floor with most engrossments.

Seems she found something interesting in his shoes that had forgot to look up but when heard Dadi, saying "Baithiye Beta!' she nodded slightly and roamed eyes to look, where to seat.

She had not much strength to seat near Maan so took seat facing to him but did not yet gave any straight look to anyone.

"Geet Beta, idhar dekhiye'

She felt a soft hold of Dadi on her chin and then found herself looking to her only. Though her everything was staring the man of her dream expect those a pair of brown and shy eyes but it was her mishap that only her eyes had capability to see. But amazingly, she could see his eyes on her without looking him!

How it can be possible that human can see without using her eyes as here Geet was seeing him, looking to her only and she shied down with this gaze of him. She knew he was smiling. She pouted slightly not to show anyone that how; he was enjoying on her pitiful condition.

Well small talk from old lady of Khurana's ended and she blessed Geet with all her pure words. And now it was turn of Maan to ask her anything if he was wishing to. Geet hands become colder and amazingly in this AC thing also sweats started appear on her forehead. Her body shook in anticipation and mind became numb.

Geet used to understand herself a brave girl then how could she get scare of this small interview, or was she really fearing?' she thought. No, it was something else, she analysed and till could analyse further on her status, found Maan was sitting near her instead of Dadi.

" Dadi kaha gayi!' she wondered and found her hugging Rano and others were exchanging sweets in their mouth.

"Did everything happened?' she was surprised when heard his whisper against her ears, like earlier.

"Congrats Geet!'

And her head automatically turned to him.

Her eyes met with his and mind recalled his "I love you Geet' and her cheeks turned into red hue in return gift to his every said words.

"Congratulation Didi' Rajji comes and gave Geet a sisterly hug. Geet smiled.

"Congrats Jiju' She fed a sweet in his mouth which he bit half and half held in hand. He nodded in response. Rajji happily runs to her mother.

Geet was having goose bumps sitting over there near him. She too wanted to celebrate this happiness but not here but alone, in her room, behind closed door, hidings face in her both palms. When she found no one was looking her she stood up, clutched suit end to speak any word to excuse to Maan but it was so hard. She ended up standing there like statue, looking down because she knew; Maan was looking her for any word.

"You can go'

She felt he was giving something in her hand then. She clutched it without looking what it was and runs without giving any time to herself to blush again in front of him. She reached her room and shut door behind. Giving a fast look to all around as if anyone was hid there and after becoming sure she was alone, opened the fisted palm of her and found that it was his half eaten sweet.

"Why he had given it to me?' She whispered but as her heart knew the reason she did not argued further. With trembling hand and blinking lashes she ate that half piece of Laddo and found it sweeter then ever.

How easily, without any fight back with her moral or likes- dislikes she had accepted him and his every order in her life, she was self amused but it was so proper and perfect!

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Now it was time to return back of Khuranas. Dadi with Maan stood up to go and Geet with her family were stood on door to wishing then adieu. Though her eyes were staring floor but her soul was staring Maan only alike his. Maan be seated in back seat next to Dadi and turned to her. Geet who could not look him directly in front of whole family, were clutching her heart and had slight cry of her unfulfilled wish of heart, she glimpse him back.

Their car started. Geet runs to terrace. Maan turned his head to see where she was and found her in same place of terrace. This time he could imagine her face her body her everything. This time he could not have any eager to see her clearer but a prick of emotion to be with her, stood behind her, covering her in his arms, in drizzle of rain and walk with her on the way of seventh heaven of their love'


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
lovely update continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
wowww lovuuu superbbb update...new life mein etntry marne se pehle koe ekdum new ek person ko leke ek ladki ka jo soch wo tune bhut acche se describe ki...awesomeee...looking forward...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
res
sorry Mona main cmmnt karongi paka...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
wow great os plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
very beautiful update👏
dreamy 😳
love it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
This was a beautiful update. Loved every bit of it. Fab job as usual.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
WITHOUT LOOKING, WITHOUT SAYING ANYTHING THEY ACCEPTED THEIR LOVE FOR EACH OTHER
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
awesome part...loved it...the story is so romantic...update soon

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