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Happy birthday Lakshmi, May god fulfills are your wishes and five you a joyous life ahead.

And this update is especially for you, a full long maaneet part, hope you love it.


PART 30

It had been two weeks, and maan had just called once geet in the meantime to ensure she is safe and happy and moreover comfortable there. Geet was excited to tell him about her stay in the hostel, how she and meera gossiped about each and everything till late night, or how meera throws her belonging in the room and she had to keep them in right places at the end or how once mess had cooked bitter gourd which she hated the most but still have to eat it not having any other choice.

Maan kept on hearing her other side, it felt so good to hear her heavenly voice that chirpiness, that jovialness, he never knew such a girl exists behind that silent and sober geet. He had to laugh loudly when she told him the prank they planned on some teacher because he was teaching blandly.

It was late Friday night around 12, when geet's cell rang. Geet was sleeping and meera being the light sleeper got disturbed with the loud ringtone. She slowly opened her eyes to see who the hell is calling at this late when she saw geet's cell ringing with maan's name flashing on it.

She threw her pillow on geet to wake her up and said, "uff it's maan bhai, yaar unko bol raat me band na bajaya kare", saying she passed the call to geet and turning other side slept keeping another pillow over her head.

Geet opened her droopy eyes and took the call, "geet" maan said while she replied "hmm" her voice sleepy, as she slept back keeping cell over her ears. "Were you sleeping" he asked quite getting a hint with that sleepy hmm. "hmm" she again replied unconsciously. He was disappointed with the reply and said "ok, I will cut the call" and he was about to disconnect when he heard her urgent reply, "nhi nhi, boliye, kya hua, sab thik to hai na" she said after her mind woke up a little.

"wo umm, kuch nhi, you sleep good night" and he was about to cut when she interrupted sitting up on the bed, "maan sab thik hai na, aap aise kyu sound kar rhe ho and fir itin raat ko call". He sensed the worry in her voice and smiled at her concern and said, "no nothing to worry, wo bas mai soch rha tha ki could we meet tomorrow, wo kal Saturday bhi hai and it had been so long too, so just thought to ask you" his voice was full of expectation, he just hoped she would agree.

Geet thought for some time and was about to answer but when he didn't received an answer he himself said, "if you have any other plan, than it's ok no problem". "no, no aisa nhi hai, it's ok, kal I will come home after school", she said with a smile on her face but he immediately declined, "umm, no I will pick you up, you wait for me outside the school".

Next day after school, gang had planned to go to mall and spend some time there but then geet refused again, "not possible, I have to go home, you all enjoy" "yaar geet not again, every time tumhe ghar jana hota hai" misha said pouting her lips. "yaar kal raat hi plan bana so I couldn't inform and i can't avoid too, so understand yaar please, next time I won't ditch promise" said geet making sorry face. "ya we will see that" misha said pouting while other gave geet an understanding nod.

As gang moved out, she saw maan standing there, waiting for her. He gave her a big smile as he saw her running out, her skirt flowing in air with her as she tried to carry her heavy bag. She replied his smile with her million dollar smile as she reached to him. Soon whole gang reached too and geet introduced each one of them to him except meera.

Maan greeted everyone but when he greeted pari, she instead of saying hello asked, "are those real muscles", as her eyes were fixed on the bulging muscles in his shirt and six pack abs that were quite visible through his tight fitting shirt.

"Nhi plastic surgery karayi hai" meera replied while maan stood quite puzzled with the question and geet, umm quite confused. She didn't like the way pari was scanning him like some open book, chi chi babaji, she thought.

Soon geet bid bye to her friends as they moved outside toward main road. She was about to stop an auto, but maan held her hand and said, "wha nhi yaha dekho". He took her little left where a black apache was standing in it's all glory, shining under the hot sun.

"Ye kiski hai" she asked as they stood near the bike. "padosi ki" he replied sarcastically, as he moved to take his front rider seat. "you bought bike and didn't even told me" she said in fake anger, as he just loved that anger too. "are baba, I had booked it two days back and aj hi deliver hua hai and first thing I did is to show you, now come sit fast".

Geet was about to sit but then remembered her short skirt and said, "how will I sit with this", she said pointing to her skirt. "like this" he replied, as he took her bag and kept it in front of him, and with his other hand, he held her hand pulled her closer while she climbed with her legs straddling him. As she settled, she tried to hold her skirt which was flying in air from mid, maan saw the discomfort and with her hand still in his hold, he pulled her closer till her chest was plastered on his back reducing the air flow.

She stood still for few minutes, the closeness again creating back the burning heat, her mind alert enough to notice even the slight touch between them. Maan raced the accelerator and zoomed his bike on the empty road, cutting through air. Geet loved the splash of cool wind as they passed through a canopy of trees.

Soon her body relaxed as her mind started enjoying the ride. He had felt her stiffness, it wasn't difficult to notice that when you are so close but this time he wanted to try his luck, see what she will do now. but when she unknowingly tightened her loose hold around his waist, it felt he had won the world that very moment. Today sure is his lucky day he felt.

Soon they reached busy roads of Mumbai, just destroying the charisma of ride a little. Geet saw maan turning the bike on other side and asked "where are we going??" "I thought you will want to celebrate because of bike, so we are going to mall". Geet was quite disappointed with the idea of mall as she wanted to spend the day at her own house and said, "cant we celebrate at home"

"you want to go home???" he asked shocked while she nodded in yes surprising him. He himself wanted to spend the entire day together, only both of them, but then he thought maybe she will like to go outside as she loved to roam, but somehow or the other, she had fulfilled his wish today. He just wanted to do bhangra at the very moment but controlled himself as they turned around to go to their home.

Soon they were home and geet was off to change. After few minutes she came back, and entered kitchen. Maan too came inside following her and saw her searching some vessels. He thought she is searching something to eat and said, "nakul usually comes in evening so there isn't anything cooked yet. lets order something from outside."

She thought for a moment and said, "how about I cook aloo parathe today" "but you must be tired" "umm no I am not, chalo aap jao, I will serve parathas soon" saying this she took out some flour and potatoes to boil.

Oh he so much wished to eat aloo parathas and even once he asked nakul to make them, but alas he somehow couldn't eat them. He gave them to adi that day, who was quiet shocked as he remembered the past incident, but when aloo parathas are in question who refuses. He looked at geet as she roamed in entire kitchen taking out utensils and spices; his heart skipped a beat as she tried to push away her loose strand of hair, in turn smearing some wet flour paste on her side cheeks.

He involuntarily moved toward her, till he reached near her back. Geet got startled with his sudden presence in front of her, as he placed his palm on her cheeks, his thump wiping of that paste, lingering there more than required. Geet looked in his eyes, so dark, so intense, a look she had seen before too but couldn't comprehend his emotions, thus making her drop her lashes hiding her orbs.

As he stood still, she moved back thus breaking his reverie. "umm, wo, mai" maan fumbled as he tried to explain his act, "ha wo mai aata, aata lag gya tha tumhare" he said as he showed his thumb to her as if standing in front of supreme court judge.

Geet didn't said anything, and again started her work while he stood next to her not at all moving away. Soon she served a paratha for him with some pickle and gave, " ye lijiye, aap ja ke khaiye, while I will make more", she said as she placed another paratha on pan.

"no, I will eat here" he said as he climbed himself on the kitchen sill next to gas and tore a bite from plate. Geet opened her mouth to say something, but before words come out, hot steaming paratha filled her mouth. Maan fed her the bite he tore shocking her while she couldn't help but smile at his antics. Maan laughed seeing her struggling with the hot paratha as he took his bite.

After lunch, both decided to have some noon sleep, as they both were tired quite tired. It was in early evening when they woke up, and geet moved in his room to keep back the clothes washer man had brought when she saw his room in a mess, with things in a haphazard manner, files scattered on bed, clothes on chair and his purse she found inside cabinet. And in the mid of all these he was sleeping peacefully.

She got quite angry seeing the condition, as far she had seen him, he had always kept things back in place, never made mess and even ensured to spread his wet towel on chair too after taking a shower phir achanak se aise. Then she remembered she had asked nakul to clean his room everyday and murmured "aane do nakul bhaiya ko aj, how can he be so careless, becharre maan ko aise rehna pada" and she started cleaning the room, keeping back things in it's original place.

With the hustle bustle sound, maan woke up and looked at geet as cleaned his room. What a blessed view it was, as she worked like a wife, keeping everything back in it's original place and cursing him and nakul for the mess too, just the basic character of wife. he hadn't let nakul clean his room, because he didn't wanted him to do that for him. In first few days he had cleaned his room but later he just left them the way it was, and actually he loved the mess too, in his college days, it was just a replica of this. But after geet came he had turned into a nice husband not wanting to tense his wife and thus tried to maintain cleanliness but then living back those college days was a nice feel too'

He was busy in his thoughts, when his fell on gee two was about to trip on his shoes that were left upside down in the middle of the room. Geet screamed as she lost her balance due to sudden tripping and embraced herself for a back pain, but floor never hit her as two hard hands held her in the mid air. [neha realizing she hadn't written maaeet's epic fall ever in her ffs, so here it is' maahiii maahiii]

Maan looked at geet as she tugged on his vest tightly, her eyes tightly closed, while few sweat beads covered her forehead. His fingers lingered on her forehead as he wiped off her sweat beads and said, "mere hote hue tumhe kuch nhi ho sakta". Geet opened her eyes, as his intense words fell on her eardrums.

They both were lost in each other's for a while but finally maan came out of the reverie as he stabled both of them and stood straight stabilizing her with him thus breaking her reverie too. Both stood mum for few minutes, but then geet again started doing her work while maan sat on bed and watched her.

It was night when maan said, "come I will drop you to hostel before gates closes" geet saw him looking away, his face in pain and his voice was weak. She knew she could never give him life time happiness but some happiness won't harm, would it??? Nhi na babaji, thin king she said, "I thought you had asked me to stay here on the weekend that's why I had said meera that I will come tomorrow evening"

Maan's heart fluttered, it's pumping increased million times as he saw her lie visible on face. She stayed because of me, is it??? His heart asked his mind, which replied YES, she did stayed because of you today. Geet saw the happiness that sparkled his dull eyes and her heart felt as if she had won a battle, she didn't knew her yes mattered so much, or she knew but couldn't accept. It will pass away with time geet, her mind said, while heart choose to put ear buds for some hours to block mind's words.

They ordered some pizza and coke as they settled to watch an old movie GOLMAAL, the original one. Geet settled a rug on floor where they sat beside each other placing pizza and coke on floor, she dimmed the lights creating illusion of theater and using couch as back rest, they started the movie. It was so much fun, full of laugh till their tummy's ached. Both were so busy in movie that didn't realized when they sat so close till their arms almost brushed.

It was around the end when maan felt some weight on his left shoulder and turned to saw geet's head was tilted till it rested on her shoulder while she was in deep slumber. He immediately switched off the television and thought to settle her back on bed, but then it would mean going away from her, that he didn't wanted atleast for today, for today he wished to keep her close to him.

Thus changing his mind, he pulled her closer, till her head completely rested on his upper chest while her left body was taking his support, or say she was nearly sleeping on him in sitting position. He then comforted his position, as he sat beside her awake, her breathe falling on his bare chest as he cherished her proximity.

He admired her beauty for a while, then moving closer till his breathes fell on her lips, he whispered "it was the best birthday of my life geet, the one I will cherish whole my life. Thankyou mishty for this gift" and he brushed his lips with hers, placing a soft peck on her plump lips.

So how was it, and I hope it was a treat for those who missed maaneet's moments.

Precap: same

Happy birthday Lakshmi once again, this darmiyaan is a result of your push the most, and without your comments and pics it's totally incomplete for me.

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Happy birthday Maanu...m so sad dat geet didn't knw abt his bday...still he is happy dat she cared n stayed vd him...it's nie to c kind of friendship betwn dem...just want dat...I don't expect more just geet to come to him vd anything n everything...discuss freely n he can guide he as a gud friend...

Hey m 1st...

Awesome updt...I loved d way Pari was chking him out,...real muscles 😆 😉

Geet didn't like it..,..I loved it...

Coming back to seriousness...maan get control on ur thinking man...b mature n don't get too close...geet I knw u can't give anything to dis relation n I don't expect either...just dat don't rise his hopes coz he won't think rationally when it comes to u...ur simple gesture is too much for him...

Happy birthday Lakshmi
Edited by maanmeet1 - 12 years ago

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