THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 58

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Posted: 12 years ago

I was waiting to post a comment on this part... 😳

I love this I-star ki kichayi here.😆 I love I-star. All this cause she is such a strong character, her personality is such that it appeals to me so very much. She is all that I want to be, I would like if somewhat of her persona rubs on me.😊 She is like female version of head strong & principled Maan. She stands for her self- respect & dignity. She knew what she did was right & she didn't regret it, but felt awkward that she will have to face him as in the relation of Boss-employee. I so like her stand. A lot of the credit goes to you for building her character so well. 👏

Her circumstances ditched her, caused her to cave in & swallow her pride for the sake of survival. So realistic in her approach ... it's so true that sometimes whatever you do your circumstances causes you to bow down & compromise to certain things that revolt your whole being but still you go ahead because then you are helpless at the hands of fate. 😡 I really felt for her. I would not use the word sympathy for her ... as that would demean her spirit & self-pride. But I so wanted to jump in & do something for her, when she was feeling so helpless & cracks were being visible in her strong being after having to fight it out at each step of life, struggling it out all alone & yet all her adversities just pulling her down all the more... finally causing her to do something that she detests the most.

You know I started liking Dev more here for he did what a loved one should have done for her, to just sooth her & remove her worries & prevent her from breaking down ... Though he did it in his own style, but yet he just climbed the ladder of adoration for me.❤️ Sometimes we just view people through the lens we ourselves place in front of us. Same happened with Tara, she judged Dev's behaviour in the lift in accordance to what she experienced during the earlier incident at the bus... she was blinded by her prejudices & anger at the whole situation... not even trying to sort it out through what must've actually led to it. So many times we judge people so... So it's rightly said that always don't go by ... first impression being the last impression. (I guess I out it right...not sure...😕)

I so liked him describing her in his mind... softness mixed with hard professionalism, then when he was telling Daadi about the pinkness on his cheek... I so wanted to say that the softness got transferred to him in a very hard hitting form. 😆

I so liked how he dealt with the whole situation...he somewhere did understand her, though not completely. But kuch toh zarror hua hai... He feels connected to her as he doesn't want to see her in distress or hurt.

I-star 😆...only Avi could come up with such stuff. I told you already that there are some things in your writing that are your trademark... Very much associated only with you. I love it all.

The whole discussion on the theme song... & I-star's expressions & retorts were like icing on the cake. Her remembering of all the rules & their exact numbers, lines & page nos. had me in splits. 🤣 It so reminded me of one of my professors in undergrads who used to remember them all, she used to tell us which pg, para, line... along with the punctuations if we ever went to her for corrections... we had heard that she had read all the books in our medical library 8-10 times even the newer editions...🤣 So Tara here is something believable for me. See here I go all tangent. 😆

Tu tu tu tara... Omg...great one.😆 Even in my wildest imagination I could have not come up with this. In my childhood we had watched this Movie & used to keep singing it while playing antakshri if the other team couldn't come up with any song to keep distracting them & irritate them...🤣 Same was when we played dumb charades...I recollected all those moments. The other one Taare hai baraati... I guess he will recollect it when their story will come to a deserving culmination of marriage, or he can always remind her of it. Also does he know her from before???

Precap... I guess it's going to be on MG... Eagerly waiting for it.

P.S. : I'm again in love with second leads... ❤️

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I was so sleepy... that even after reserving once without thinking I went & reserved again here... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aashu tu yahan hai ya mera illusion hai ?🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

wat r u doing here ?? dont u have exam????? 😆 go and study
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Aashu tu yahan hai ya mera illusion hai ?🤔

BHB bulaye aur Aashu na aaye...😲
Meri BHB hai, toh aayegi na
HOPE YOU LIKED YOUR PRESENT NAUREEN
OFF TO WORK SO WILL PM LATER.
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

BHB bulaye aur Aashu na aaye...😲
Meri BHB hai, toh aayegi na
HOPE YOU LIKED YOUR PRESENT NAUREEN
OFF TO WORK SO WILL PM LATER.
🤗


Han Avi tune bulaya to aagai, magar mujhe reply bhi nhi kiya 😭

Tere lye 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile


Han Avi tune bulaya to aagai, magar mujhe reply bhi nhi kiya 😭

Tere lye 🤗

Aaj tere comment ka intezaar rahega...
Maine apna vaada nibhaya... Ab Aashu nibhayegi...
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

🥳🥳🥳
Ye khushi Maan k aane ki hai 😆 🥳
Ok so starting from the note, I wud say k keep going wid the current pace... Its building a curiousity n anticipation of whats more.. n em toh truly loving the shade of sweetness n a tinge of spice in the story... 😊
N to b honest to yew, I've always wanted Dev-Naintara love story n despite reading it them in bad shades , Im easily convinced wid their charactess to b sweet n loving...😊
The song 'Raat Kali' is one in my favs list n having it to imagine at MG, is making me love the song more n more 😳
The dance had me mermerized, though it was all a dream but it had me dreaming Avi 😳
Coming outta dreamland he wasnt the same, he was the son who valued his father's execution in business, his dadi's hardwork, he seemed the guy who wants to b something his family can b proud of, not letting them down by any of his step.. I read both his father's advice more than once, true that, offence is the best defence n never back out if yew believe that yew r right.. 👏
I've already fallen 4 this Maan, a lover boy 4 Geet n a dutiful grandson 😳
🤗 4 TL 😊

Thank you Naureen...
Glad you liked it.
Thanks for the support and letting me give the Dev-NT story...🤗

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