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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG.. so touching touching...this part s gonna be soo sooo emotional i guess!!
plzzz update sooon...
n yo noe fa many dazzz hv been askin yo to update "MY INNOCENT DOLL" plzzz dear update tat also...!! fa nw eagerly waitin fa "A THRASHED BARBIE" update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor young soul... longing for the parents love :'(
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser...

continue soon...

thnks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice teaser
This shows much geet longed for parents love
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff ye Maan ...poor Geet

Loved Randeep ...the way he taking care of Geet n her future

so Maan heard Geet n randeep convo

Awesome Update...loved it

continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago



Waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can we hope for a double blast 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 7

every time maan end with hurting her poor maan😭 and geet don't wanted any economic trouble to maan convo bet maan' dad and dadi and dad and geet is too good that is height of update 👏


your teaser made me very emotional for some time i am blank totally blank because this geet give me memorry of my dear one who is realy closed too me and i cannot have to rights to watch that dear one from far so 😭 i can not put this is word i lost that dear one from last year only pray to god for well being of that person
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Posted: 12 years ago



Chapter 8


I started my dream story here "DARING LOVE STORY" checked it out already posted 3 chapters.

MY DREAM STORY

Daring love story june 18

DARING LOVE STORY CHAPTER 1 JUNE 20

DARING LOVE STORY CHAPTER 2 JUNE 20

DARING LOVE STORY CHAPTER 3 JUNE 21



Geet went in her room as this is evening time and she wants to see all her new books which are attracting her just like any other student.

Maan entered in geet room with thief step but still she turned and saw maan there, all car memories come in front of her and she just again starts to see in her book instead of maan.

Maan shook his head and went near her without say anything took his seat and hold her foot which made her almost jumped. Geet is watching him from corner of her eye but didn't expect that he will touch her foot suddenly.

"Now abb ye kya kar rahe hai Krishna jii (now what is he trying to do Krishna jii)" geet thought and saw maan with baby like confused face.

Maan chuckled and show her bandage which is still on her foot and maan got a perfect chance to talk with her, and pretend that he is here only for change her bandage, but to maan astonishment geet pulled her foot back from maan grip.

"Wound is ok now, no need to Change bandage" geet spoke meekly.

"When you did MBBS hmm" maan said with sarcasm in his voice.

Geet pout after listened his comment and turned her face. Maan again pulled her foot on his lap carefully.

"Chup chap bandage change karne du warna" maan said with a hidden smile which is noticed by geet.

"Warna kya" geet asked with so much courage.

Maan smiled and little bent on geet side and she bent backside reflex.

"Warna.. injection laga duga" maan said and laughed hia head out to see her shocking yet little bit angry face, in reality he liked her tikki mirchi gussa but still somewhere its Locked like to show your anger is sin for her.

In all this maan slowly opened her bandage without hurting her but her all concentration is in maan right now, who is teasing her and laughing on her so openly, giving injection threats also. Geet by heart want to go Randeep and complaint about maan teasing so he will scold him.

"I will tell uncle jii" geet said with small baby face.

"What!!! That I was teasing you and threading you but you are just pouting here" maan teased her more and tried to irritate her and she is effected also and twisting her foot from his manly grip but he is just done with his bandage.

"Shopping per chalo gii" Maan asked seriously this time and after saw her widen eye.

"Dekho saari mistake meri nahi thi, how will I know the reason to behind rejecting everything? I am not anteryami (magician) types like you that why I am telling you again, share your problem with other if your pea size brain don't work perfectly ok hmm chalo ice cream bhi khila duga as compensation" maan said with a small smile to see her widen eye are just ready to pop out from their sockets.

"Hume nahi jana apke saath" geet said and turned to other side and concentrate on her book after completing ignore maan.

"Chalo warna utta kar le jao gaa" maan said with smirked but his smirked vanished to saw Randeep on the door with his hand folds on chest.

Geet ran to ranveer and saw maan with natural mischievous eye like now who will save him today.

"Uncle jii he is threading me or teasing me" geet looked like a small toddler who is complaining to her father with full of expectations that he will scold to culprit.

Randeep suppressed his smile and took geet in his side embraces.

"Maan!!! Why are you teasing my sweetheart hmm" Randeep said sternly and a small smiled come on geet lips with a unknown sparks in her eye.

"Dad ye koi sweetheart nahi hai nakhre dekhe hai apni ladli ko apne" maan said with a glare to geet.

And geet jaw touched ground this time. He lied with so much confidence with a smile maan left for dinner and Randeep and geet follow him.

"Chode beta khadus hai bigda tu boiled vegetables khani padgi" Randeep said with baby face and geet smiled to saw their cute relation, for her this is like a dream only.

***********

Dadi and other sat on table and to see a new face geet felt little bit frightened. What if this new aunty don't like her ?

"Geet!!! She is my mother and your dadi" Randeep introduced both.

Geet went and touched dadi feet with respect and dadi kept her hand on her head for blessings but frowned little bit which scared geet again 'rejection and hatred'.

"Ye kya bal (hair) itne rukhe kyu hai oil massage nahi karti kya" dadi said with frown and made Randeep broke in a grin.

Geet nodded her head in no.

"Tum aaj kal ke bache naa, after dinner come in my room with oil I will massage your head, fashion mai tu health bhul jaye ye bache" dadi murmured last line and geet is amazed with old lady affection for her. She nodded her head again in yes with smile.

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After 3 days college starts and this is first day of geet but for vicky and annie this is second yr first day and whole mansion is on fire, servants are running as Vicky and annie didn't know how to get ready on time and on other side geet is waiting for them in hall. She is wearing a red leggings with white kurta which is had read lace as border. She is looking like a divine flower which is meant to cherish by god only. Human are not deserved her. Her young age glow and deep almond eye with kohl is making her pure just like dew drop of morning.

"See ye bui tu aaj kal ki ladki hai, she was ready before time but Vicky and annie, kuch naa hi bolo bas" dadi said to Randeep who is reading newspaper there on couch.

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In College

Geet entered in the college with annie and vicky, vicky got strict warning from Randeep to take of her. She is little bit excited and little bit scared.

Vicky show her office where all first yr students collecting their time tables so vicky took geet there but suddenly his phone ring and he told geet to stand in queue he is coming.

Other side some college bullies is watching geet from the time they entered in the college so now this is perfect moment for them.

"Wah kya beauty hai tulip in Delhi" one said.

"Haa yaar humare liye aai hai" second said and all laughed to scared geet, she starts to see here and there for vicky and hold her bag tightly to her chest. Other students go to a side in fear of this type of boys.

They starts to take geet round and commenting on her, geet eye starts to pour in fear just than when they tried to touched her someone caught their hand and punched them.

"Vicky" geet whispered slowly and hugged him tightly.

"Abbe oye teri kya lagti hai ye"

"Behen hai meri ankhe nikal luga ager phir uski taraf dekha bhi tu (she is my sister and dare you even see her)" Vicky fumed but geet saw him in surprised.

"Chalo vicky" geet pleased meekly.

"Bilkul nahi!!! My friend went to call principle here and before they come here, punch him" Vicky said in outrageous.

Geet nodded noo

"Common geet punch him, show him what power a girl possessed in her soul, common I am here" vicky encouraged geet , he didnt want this fear is left in her for forever.

Geet moved ahead and saw behind in vicky eye and vicky again said common and she punched him really hard which broke vicky in grin.

They restricted from college but today vicky put a self confidence in her. She is introduced with Vicky gang today and all took her as their small sister, vicky gang had 5 boys only.

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Now one month is fly for geet and she is adjusted in this new atmosphere and family, only madu (maan mother) is still not in good terms with geet but generally she stayed out in parties or tour, meera became a good friend geet, maan loves to teased geet whenever he got any chance, Randeep shared a very closed bond with her. Dadi always show her care by stickiness. Vicky turned out a lovely brother of her, still Annie kept a distance with her, dev is only gave her a small smile whenever they come in front of each other. Overall geet accepted her new life and tried to make her life useful for others.

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precap: same as teaser


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Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago


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