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Posted: 12 years ago

chapter-77




It was still dark when maan shook geet to wake her up from her deep slumber...

Mishty, get up...!!

Umm...groaning lightly she turned the other side. Maan sighed and knew it would take hell lot effort to wake his mini kumbhkaran'. She looks so peaceful sleeping in his bed that he thought to let her be, but then he also knew it was important for her to be back before morning brightens.

Geet, its morning dear, you have to go back to your room...please wake up, sweetheart...!!

Please na maan, let me sleep...she murmured and snuggled into him. Sighing deeply maan placed a loving peck on her hair and decided to carry her.

Careful not to disturb her sleep, maan picked her up in his arms and walked out in his balcony. No one could see them in the darkness which helped them to go unnoticed by the guards. But he couldn't cross the railing with geet in his arms. So, finally finding no other option he thought to make geet stand after shifting her to the other side of the railing carefully. He thought she would wake up, now, but to his utter surprise and amusement she was leaning back as if to find her bed and pillow in air.

He chuckled shaking his head at his sleeping beauty. Supporting her head, he somehow managed to keep her stable and jumped the other side and again scooped her up in his arms. Finally, after placing her in her bed, he left quickly.



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Next morning was well for geet, but hell for maan. The moment he walked down the stairs he was surrounded by ladies...er...actually his mother, his to be MIL and his sweetheart, mishty for the very obvious reason...SHOPPING...!!

As told by raj, maan thought to make them understand and all hell break loose...

WHAT...???...you don't want to go shopping for your own wedding that too for your own clothes...??...How could you, maan...??...yes, this was his dearest mother's most dramatic reaction. Before he could say anything in his defence, his MIL, though a bit softly, but still chided him...maan, its your wedding too, son. If you won't participate, who would...??

And then before he could reply, he once again interrupted and this it was a long long interruption with his chatter box sherni at her best...

I knew it...!!...I just knew it...!!...my friends were right, all you boys are the same...she glared angrily...you are already ignoring me before marriage then what will happen after we are married. Then toh you'll behave as if I don't even exist. Dekha aapne aunty, how he is ignoring me. Shaadi ke baad mera kya hoga...she was full on drama queen. Maan was thoroughly annoyed and frustrated and turn to look at his father and brothers laughing their head off at his expenses. He gave his dad a meany' look understanding his prank to land him in trouble. He had to do some damage control before geet chew his head off.

Okay okay, fine. I am ready. Please spare me the dramatics...he told geet rolling his eyes at her continuous dramebazi. And the effect were instant for a big smile shone brightly on geet's face next second of his announcement.

So, finishing their breakfast, maan and geet left to do their shopping while others got busy with different work. Maan had taken bodyguards with him as he wanted full security for geet. They reached the designer boutique and geet went wild seeing the lovely collection of the designer while maan chuckled shaking his head at his adorable mishty. Next few hours geet kept maan on his toes selecting different wedding outfits for both of them. It was nearly lunch time when they finished and so decided to stop by a restaurant.

They had just finish with their order, when geet spotted sneha and Vicky at another corner of the restaurant. Her eyes turned wide in excitement and sparkled with mischief. Maan noticed every change in her expression and turned to the direction geet was looking. He was surprised to see his little brother with his secretary on a lunch date. A smirk automatically formed on his lips...so Vicky is actually trying hard, not bad brother...!!

Maan, did you see them...??...geet whispered as if they will hear her from that distance. Maan rolled his eyes once again at her stupidity...yes, I can very well see them, geet and there is no need for you to whisper. They can't hear us...he stated much to geet's annoyance.

Oh shut up you devil. I know okay...showing him tongue.

Yeah right...!!

Okay listen. Don't spoil my mood now. I don't want to waste this opportunity...geet grinned like an imp that she was and maan knew Vicky was in for some trouble. Though he pity sneha more for she was way too innocent for both his devil fianc as well as brother.

Geet, what is running in your brain, now...??...he raised a brow.

Just wait and watch Mr. Khurana...she winked at him and instantly dialled some numbers making maan shock out of his wits. His fianc was a walking danger sign board.

They waited for some twenty minutes as their order arrived and saw Vicky and sneha enjoying their own food. Maan was still shocked at what geet had done and waited for his brother's headaches to arrive, while geet was giggling all this while awaiting for the dhamakas to arrive for her dear friend and devar.

And soon geet's first surprise arrived in a short black dress.

Vicky was so happy today after all it was his first date with his lady love. He just couldn't express his feelings and by looking at sneha's glowing face he was sure that it was only going to be much better. Well, he was in for a great surprise himself...!!

Soon enough both Vicky and sneha were interrupted with a loud shriek...

OMG...!!...viks darling, I am so happy to see you...vicky felt himself choking with the tight grip with which the girl hugged him. But what worried him more were the fuming expression on sneha's face which he saw for the first time and though made her look absolutely cute, but were of great danger. He gulp somehow pushing the girl away from him and looked at her...

Uh, sshikha...what...are you doing here...??...he asked his over enthusiastic ex-girlfriend.

Oh come on, viks...how could I refuse your invitation...??...she purred and Vicky immediately shook her head at a boiling sneha. But before he could say something, another shriek rang in his ears making him close his eyes...

Hi lover boy...!!...Oh...!!...I knew you'll come back to me...another girl in green tried to choke him and he cursed himself to date such clingy girls in past.

Neha...I can explain...he tried to salvage the situation...there is some misunderstanding...!!

Oh no Vicky...this time sneha couldn't stop herself...misunderstanding nahi balki kafi achchi understanding chal rahi...she gritted. She was herself surprised to feel so much jealousy. She was always the mild tempered, lovely natured girl and here she was feeling like throwing something. What is happening to her...??

But she couldn't go over her thought process for long as once again they were graced with a ear piercing voice...VICKY...!!

But before the new girl in bright pink could hug him, he got up at once and went over to sneha's side cursing his bad luck for ruining his perfect date. But what he didn't know was that his very own best friend was the master mind here and she was thoroughly enjoying it sitting at another.

Geet, what are you doing, yaar. You are ruining their date...maan exclaimed feeling sorry for them.

Shut up maan. I am not ruining anything. That moron hid his love story from me for so long. Thodi saza toh use milni hi chahiye. And its so much fun, now...she replied rubbing her hands in glee.

Back at Vicky and sneha's table a hell lot of scene was created...

Viks darling, why are these three girls here...??...its supposed to be our reunion date...she fake a pout trying to gain his attention and sending glares to other three girls.

The other too were no less.

Don't talk rubbish okay. Its my date with Vicky. He just invited me. So you three better get lost...the green dress one spat.

Who are you to tell me to get lost, you...you bloody date-crasher...the pink one said totally in rage.

Vicky clutched his hair in frustration, while sneha just didn't know what to do anymore as the other three un-invited guest started a full blown cat fight. Vicky gave a pleading look to sneha...

Please trust me, snahe. I have no idea what they are doing here. I have not met them in ages, I swear...!!

Before sneha could reply, Vicky was pulled by the girls in their quarrel. He was pulled from one girl to another as if five year olds were fighting for candy. Sneha too now was feeling pity for Vicky. Vikcy was fed up and at once shouted...

STOP...!!

The whole restaurant quietened with his shout and manager too came with guards to sought out the matter. Maan was about to move to handle the mess created by geet, when the very imp's laughter resonated throughout the hall. All heads turned to her direction and Vicky knew who gave him hell. He groan and cursed her for putting him in such a situation.

Hahahaha...she clutched her stomach and came to them...oh Vicky darling, how was your date, huh...??...wriggling her eye brows comically, she teased. Maan was busy pacifying the manager.

GEET...!!...this is too much yaar...vicky whinned annoyed, but just couldn't stop her laughter and soon sneha joined her too. First she was annoyed too, but then seeing the situation from a third person's point of view she couldn't hold herself. The two laughed and geet somehow managed herself and turned to the girls...

Sorry girls...it was just a prank. My dear friend Vicky is already hitched as you can see...she pointed at sneha making her blush at her words...so no x or ys are needed. Thanks for the entertainment though...she smiled too sweetly.

The girls huffed in anger for making a fool of themselves and left giving angry glares to geet and Vicky. Geet then turned to sneha...

I am sorry, sneha. I didn't wanted to ruin your date, but I had to teach this moron a lesson for hiding everything from me...geet glared at Vicky.

What...??...you did all this for that...??...he couldn't believe it, but actually he could. Geet handa never spare anyone. She was just looking for an opportunity. He shook his head pitying himself.

Maan too came there and sneha was once again conscious as it was working day and she was here with his brother. Maan saw her discomfort and said...relax sneha, I know you are on leave. Moreover, as I am not there, you don't have much work too. So, just chill...!!

Yeah right, how can one chill with this firing dragon around...vicky muttered glaring at geet.

You said something...??...geet asked to which he just nodded in a no.

Good, come sneha we will have lunch together...!!

What...??...vicky at once held sneha's hand and said...we are actually done with our lunch. I'll just drop her home...he knew geet would eat all his time with sneha if he let her go.

Oh really, then don't worry. I'll take her with me and show her my shopping...geet was not finished with him yet. Finally knowing he can't win, he literally pleaded...

Please meri maa, kyun meri date ka kachra kar rahi hai...!!

Geet snorted smugly, while sneha giggled seeing their interaction. Maan was just rolling his eyes, which has become his part time job it seems.

Hmm, okay. Take your date with you...geet turned to sneha and added with a genuine smile...I am really happy for you sneha. Yeh idiot zaroor hai, but he'll keep you happy...and hugged her.

Both the couples paid for their lunch and left in their respective cars.


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Did you find out...??

Yes sir. It seems like vikrant khurana is dating this girl. She is also a very good friend of geet handa and she works in KC as MSK'a secretary...the guy replied to his boss.

Sandy was shocked. Sneha was really very close to khuranas as well as handas. He knew she would soon become a danger to him and he could not let that happen.

Listen to me carefully. I want that girl dead. Do anything but I want her existence wiped out completely...he spat menacingly.

Okay boss...he turned to go out, when sandy spoke again.

And finish her chapter today itself...!!

Right sir...with that the man left, while sandy smirked...oh sneha, you were nowhere involved in all this, but you had to date that good for nothing khurana...he paused for a moment then continued...and that time you showed so much attitude. All sati-savitri act and here dating that Casanova...he grinned evilly...If only you had co-operated, I wouldn't have messed your name in your city...!!


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Geet returned home and went up to meera's room. It was evening, now and meera had night shift again. She thought to have a chat with her friend. A long due chat.

Meera was busy in some file when geet entered...

Hey busy...??

Nope. Almost done...meera went through the last page and then put the file aside...so, hogayi shopping...??

Haan yaar. It was so tiring...she looked at meera who was busy fixing her hair with her cluther and asked suddenly...have you met dev again...??

What...??...meera was confused at her sudden question...matlab...??

I mean, have you both met after that day in the hospital...??...she asked cautiously.

Nahi, par tu kyun pooch rahi hai...??...meera was still not aware of her friend's findings.

Meera...she paused for a moment and finally asked...do you love, dev...??

Meera was dumbfounded at geet's direct question she didn't know what to do or say. She just stared silently.


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Here Vicky was driving sneha to her home. It was late in the evening. After geet ruined their lunch, he took sneha for a movie where he spent some quality time and finally was dropping her back.

They were talking and laughing about the movie scenes. Sneha was very happy today. Her day had went perfect, in fact beyond perfect. It was a lovely date for her and she couldn't help but feel the bubble of love arising in her heart for the charming man beside her. He was everything a girl could ask for and she was thankful to god for giving her Vicky. She knew now, she could never let him go.

On the other hand, Vicky was just too happy to see sneha so much lively. She was laughing and giggling throughout the movie. Enjoying with open heart, which was a rare sight for him. He wished she would always remain like this...always...happy and glowing...!!

They were on a bit dark and lonely road, when all of a sudden few bikes surrounded them forcing them to stop the vehicle.



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Maan was busy in some files, when his cell rang with adi flashing on the screen. He at once received the call...

Yes adi, what happened...??

Maan, we got the cctv footage scanned and guess what...??...its that bas***d...adi replied with a tinge of victory as well as disgust in his voice...you were right, buddy...!!

Maan's jaw tightened recalling the encounter with sandy in the hospital. Suddenly, he felt even more rage for him. That dog tried to harm his geet in front of him. He would not leave him.

Very good adi. Talk to commissioner and get a warrant at the earliest. He should not scot free anymore...maan ordered.

I am leaving to meet him only. Don't worry, sandy is going to pay very soon...he was about to keep when he received another call from the guard appointed for Vicky...maan, call wait pe Andrew hai...!!

Let me hear him...!!

Adi connected andrew's call and what they both heard next drew the breath out of them. After disconnecting, Maan quickly got ready and rushed out without informing anyone.


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Edited by shining_moon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing
I'm not feeling well but reading your update made me all better well sort of
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally they got proof to put him behind the bars, but will it be easy ??
loved the update ...wonderful surprise for Vicky on his date with his lady love.
awesome part
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RishbalaAsyaMG

Amazing
I'm not feeling well but reading your update made me all better well sort of


thanks
I m glad u liked it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Finally they got proof to put him behind the bars, but will it be easy ??

loved the update ...wonderful surprise for Vicky on his date with his lady love.
awesome part


yup, proofs r there...lets see how much it helps
vicky ka band geet ko bajana hi tha, but zara delay hogaya😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaar Nice post..
How u took out so much time 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update ..lol vicky ..poor his first date ooops cliff hanger first meera-geet then maan-vicky-sneha gr8 please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very pleasant update. Thanks for pm
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Viks in danger... so new twist in store.
Great going.
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Posted: 12 years ago
God pls don't hurt sneha or Vicky...dey have had enough of probs,...now it should b sandy's turn...poor maan shopping n all...hehehehehehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
god
i just hope ki vicky and sneha be save
arghhh hate that sandy
morom b*****d wanna kill him
he should riot in hell
god geet's prank loved it
awesome

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