MG OS- EK LARKI KI DASSTA..part 4 pg 20 (30/4) - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Wonderfully written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar jo sucha tha us se ulta paya lovely story pyar takrar dil se iqrar magar bulne se inkar?? Well waiting for next what veer have for maan n what maan hav for his love
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mere ko pagal math samjh yar mere account mein ya phir mere net mein garbar hain jab dekhti hu tho commnt nahi dekhta jab dosri dalti hu tho phir dodno hi dekh jatye hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
le ye maaneet tho ek dusre ko love karte hay bekar mein etna pehnat
lol dono ek dusre ko bol rahe haye naina nd veer ke bare mein both feeling pain
holi part too lovlyy maan care for geet then geet realize she loves him

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome baby both love each other.
Waitingg for maaneet moments
pics were superbbb
sweety how can u made ur title glitter?
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow superb update
amazing for more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 3
awesome...
so Geet loves Maan and Maan loves Geet...
but they dont know this...
very good...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

New morning

New hope

New start

With these things both maaneet wake up''n as usual both went on their jogging but together ''' but 1st tym there were lil lost''but in each other thoughts'.. or can say the plan which was going in their mind'..whatever it is but it is for them'..their happiness '.. n some tym silence creates troubles '..is this is going to happen or something good is coming '. Who knows (except my bhoot hehhehe who write this os :P)

After hour of jogging both reach near their swing '''. N sat on it'..wanted to say something but 1st tym not getting words to express their feelings ( lolz maan ke pass kab word hote h :P n geet to dumbo hai hi )

Maan- soo ka baa rahe h aapke mr.america

Geet-hmm I think in a hour

Maan-hmm soo u need to get ready madam'. Don't u think who tumhe aese deekh ke dar jaega

Geet-what do u mean by it

Maan-geet don't behave like dumbo like u didn't understand m clearly saying u r looking like a bhoot''''.n ran away before she can react

Geet- hawww maan m not going to leave u this tym'.

Maan- pahle pakro toh sahi

Geet-wahi toh karna cahti hu mai 'aese pakre cahti hu ki 7 janmo kya jitni v janam ho aapko humse koi juda na kar pae''..thought n a small smile came on her lips

After 1 n half hour veer came'.wid a bouquet of white roses''.geet receive him by a hug (somebody is burning in anger) 'introduced to each n every member then maan

Veer- hello maan while forwarding his hand

Maan-hiii coldly n shaked the hand

Veer- geet this beautiful flowers for u

Maan- veer, are u both really gonna to get married

Veer- narrowing his eyebrow '.what do u mean maan by this'..yes we are really gng to get married

Geet- maan kya ho gaya h aapko'y saying lyk this

Maan- actually white rose n geet not a gud combination'''. She likes naaa loves red roses only

Geet bite her tongue becoz '.. she never shared this wid veer

Veer- I know but for a change white

Maan-hmm nodded with a smirk '..lyk thinking yeh itna v nahi janta h use change ke lie v sirf red roses hi pasand h'n went from there

Riya- yeh kya jeja je aapko 'diii ke bade me kuch pata hi nahi h kya'..aapse jada toh humare maan bhai bata dege

Veer- hmmm, toh aesa karte h Sali saheba aap hi bata do hume.

Geet dragged veer in corner

Geet- kya jarurat thi flowers ki lolz pakarwa dia na

Veer- hold it on yaar tumne kabhi kaha hi nahi that u like red roses 'they how in this world I will know'n more over I thought yeh kuch aacha n kam karega

Geet- kar dia na kam'huh, maan knowns that I love only red roses''ab kya kare hum, u know he very sharp minded'n he catched it ''''. N agar unhe jara si v hint mil gae that it's a game'''..thakur ji '''.kaese samjhaugi mai unhe'''..

Veer- calm down 1st let me think something

Geet-Mr. America aapne mind pe jada jor mat dalo n next plan pe work karo that gift wala'n agar usme koi galti hui toh tum gae samjh lena

Veer- geet ke thakur ji save me from this pagal

After that veer mingled wid all'..started talking wid everyone'..n actually all are liking him'except rano 'uske lie toh maan is best in all things

Veer was talking about his achievements in business'n all

All were present their talking wid him''knowing about his family, frnds n background

Maan- soo veer say about ur work, business n all

Geet- humne batya h na phir iss question ki kya jarurat h thakur

Maan- hume aap puchne degi'yaa aap hi boloegi'..geet'in lil angry tone

Geet- puchie na 100 baar puchie par humpe yeh aapna gussa mat nikalo'u know I don't like, huh'stamped her foot n went away

Veer started saying about his business n all 'but maan '.was lost as he shouted on her basanti ..that too without her mistake " kitna pagal ho gaya h tu maan'apne gusse me use sad kar dia"

Rano came in between to call for lunch'.. All headed toward table n settled '.where all were trying to know veer n uski khatir me lage the 'wahi rano toh bas aapne maan ki khatir me thi 'n just praying from god..to do some magic 'that geet marry maan

Geet was still angry so came n sat with veer intentionally ''maan didn't like that becoz they have always sat at their place beside each other n if anyone took their seat'.. all house was on their head'n today she sat beside veer''maan was angry on geet but didn't said a word '. Becoz he know today his basanti is angry on him'n he have to manofy her'otherwise she will be like that whole day

But for his happiness he got msg from naina that she reached dhehradun 'but want maan to pick her up from airport'maan agreed

Maan- excuse me everyone, m sorry I have to leave'.n have to go somewhere

Raj- where are u going beta, if u forget let me remind u we are in holiday

Maan- I know dad, just going to pick someone spl. N winked at him

Geet looked at him '.. Like use nahi bataya now m more angry

Maan-jada gussa mat karo ase hi tamatar lag rahi hu'or gussa kia toh phat jaogi basanti'n winked her n went

Geet smiled at him'n his buddhu wale pranks jiska na sar hota h na pair

After 2 hrs maan returned wid naina n shiv

They entered home'.mamta welcomed them (naina is lil traditional + western gal'means jaesa mahol who wase dress me najar aati h 'today to impress all she was wearing pure Indian dress'.bole toh suit) she toched the feet of elder 'but all were looking at her like she is alien becoze '..they don't know who is she n y she came

Mamta- rano , yeh naina h'.. humare maan ne isse aapne lie pasand kia h'. n who cahta tha aap sab isse mile'at last uski chooti maa ko v toh pasand honi cahie humari bahu

Naina touched her feet n took her blessing' rano blessed her '' n here geet was standing in corner n watching everything n had tears in her eye' veer try to comfort her but she was not getting anything'' maan came near her n dragged her to naina''' "naina meet my basanti''.. n basanti she is my someone spl. Soo say kassi lagi tumhe"

Geet ' isse kya pharak parta h maan' aapko pasand hai na'. n went from there

Maan, naina, maan's family, n shiv was smiling like their plan working

Mamta showed shiv n naina room 'n thanked them for coming n helping maan..n they chi chatted for sometym .. How to forward it as they don't have more tym just 3 days for engagement soo they have to work fastly otherwise they will lose it

Here geet n veer was talking where now geet is denying to resume their plan '.as for geet maan's happiness is at 1st place 'veer was trying soo much but she was rigid at her decision

Geet- veer, kya aaj v aap humse pyar karte ho?

Veer- yeh keasa q h geet..

Geet- humne jawab managa h veer'..agar karte ho aap humse pyar toh hum, aap se shaddi karne ke lie taiyar h '. Or hum wadda karte h hum ek aachi pani jarur banege

Veer- have u gone mad geet'.. humne itna bada plan banya tha or aap hai ki kuch suna hi nahi cahti '.or hum aapse shaddi nahi karege'.. aapki shaddi bas maan se hogi yeh hum aapse wadda karte h ''.n leave from her room where riya was standing she heard everything

Riya- yeh aap kya keh rahe ho jiju

Veer- aapne jo suna sach h riya '. Hum or aapki dii ek dusre se pyar nahi karte, who toh bas aapne maan se pyar karti h, n it was all for that only'.but seeing naina here she broke from inside'but will u help ur dii' in getting her love back

Riya- yeh koi kehne ki baat h, omg!!! Geet dii kitni badi buddhu h unhe yeh sab karne ke v jarurt nahi thi

Veer- aapke kya matlab h riya

Riya- veer g, matlab yeh ki humari puri family humesha se geet di or maan bhai ki shaddi karna cahti thi bas inse puche aane wale the jis din hum'us din hi geet dii ne kaha who aapse shadddi karna chati h. mom bht upset thi but dii ki khushi ke lie unhe yeh rista manjoor kar dia

Veer- ohh!!! Means sabko yeh rishta pasand h soo bas maan ki haan ka intejar h...n unki family ka...hmm,, riya

Riya- ji

Veer- aapki di ne mana kar dia toh kya hua 'hum toh unke lie yeh kar hi sakte h whats say

Riya after thinking for sec. ' sure'..but hum karege kya

Veer- wahi jo hume or geet ne plan kia tha'. Maan ko jeleous karne ka par ab hume yunhe yeh v bata hoga ki unke sath bas geet hi aachi lagti h na ki who naina'

Riya- but I think, we should talk to maa n papa they will also help us

Veer got agreed n they talk to all handa's their happiness was on peak now'..n the person who is on cloud 9 was rano..she is thanking to god nth times'

Later in the evening

All ladies were choosing saree n lenhga for geet's engagement 'n geet too was there but wid a faint smile n maan noticed it ''while selecting lehna he sat opp. To her '.. geet was loking at blue lehnga 'then looked at maan ''n he knows that she we look at him'.he nodded head in negative''then on green 'maan nodded again negatively..then veer come intentionally n handed a orange n green lehnga n said it will look perfect on u' but geet was looking at maan face which was stern n actually she liked his expression'.n looked at him by indication from eyebrow '. Is this good'n how can maan miss chance he gain made faces

Geet- veer hume yeh pasand h '. I will take this n pouted her lips

Maan got angry ..n about goo when naina came

Naina- maan choose one lehnga for me na plzz, dekho na tumne mujhe itni jaldi me bula lia that hum koi wedding me pehne layak dress lae hi nahi pae..while eyeing toward shiv

Maan- "hmm" after 5 min of searching he teeok out 2 lehnga one in green n purple n one in light pink n silver

Maan- naina this purple one suits u

Naina-thanks maan I like it'but yeh pink wala ku nikala'.

Maan- yeh kissi pe bht aacha lagega agar use pasand aae toh pehen sakta h n leave from there in mid way shiv thanked maan as naina ki lehnga was seleted by him'by his eyes he was saying maan to pick wht'..where in hall aal were puzzled what maan said n y he said but kehte h hum jise pyar karte h unki unkahi v baat kabi kabi samjah jate h same happened wid geet she understands that maan choosed that for her n she picked it

Maan shiv n niana was standing there in balcony but shiv was lyk hided from pillar soo no body can see him actually till then he went near them'.veer n riya got thought they have catched maan n naina sooo they should start their plan n started talking loud

Riya- jiju ur selection is awesome..kitna beautiful lahenga pasand kia hai

Maan heard then n said in low tone- haan na sara hua'geet usme bilkul aachi nahi lagegi

Veer- thanks salli saheba'was aapki dii kitni sundar hai hi ki unpe kuch v aacha lage

Maan- usme koi shaq nahi h meri geet toh bht bht sundar h but chaparganju ko itna v nahi pata that uspe kya aacha lagega n kya bura , huh !!!

Riya- soo jiju aap dii ko honeymoon ke lie kaha le jaa rahe ho

Veer- paris

Maan-huh!!! Jana tu chaparganju jarur par kisi or ke sath, mai apni geet ke sath honeymoon pe jauga tu nahi'who Switzerland uski fav. Place with a smile

Riya- not bad jiju

Veer- hmmm !!! smiling

Riya- geet dii ke bad maan bhai ki shaddi hogi'. I like naina 'pur u know jiju phir v kuch kami h unki chemistry me

Veer- matlab, maan or naina sath me aache nahi lagte kya

Riya- hmm, jiju something is missing'by saying this they left

Maan ' ab missing nahi rahega toh kya ab yeh naina or shiv ki pahle hi itni aachi chemistry h ku n winked at them'merit oh meri basanti meri mishty ke sath hi cahlegi na

Naina- u know maan, aap pagal ho gae h

Shiv- ab tumhe shaq h kya ''wase maan gr8 choice 'she is lyk angel

Maan- who toh hai hi ,,,,,,,,,

Shiv- jada der mat kar maan 'tu janta nahi h in sab baato me jada der nahi karni cahie'experience hai iss lie bol raha hu'kam se kam geet ko aapne pyar ka kuch hint de warna'' uski shaddi me nachte reh jana n or who veer ura le jaega use'.

Naina- shiv, sahi keh rahe h maan u should give her hint

Maan- okk I will

After dinner all went in their room '.. geet was standing in her rooms balcony n crying ( pahle v batya h phir se bata deti h maaneet ki room ki balcony ek hi h) maan saw her standing their' he thought this is a ri8 moment to make her realise

Maan wid thief steps went behind her n encircled his arm around her waist.geet was 1st shocked wid the action then the grip n his aroma..make her realise this is maan

Geet- maan aap

Maan- hmm, soo aapne pehchan lia hume

Geet- kaese nahi pehchante ''''''

Precap- maan giving her hint'.n admitting his love infront of geet

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Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
man this one i tell ya
hope they both dont ruin things
man aint it funny
pyaar toh dono ko hai magar neither had confessed
and she almost decided to marry veer
but thank god veer didnt agree
now aint he good getting maneet together
and please maan dont make things worse for them
gosh i just loved it
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
le sari family ko pata hay srif maaaneet ko nahi
ye geet kitna roti hay😭😭
heahaaa ye veer ka choice bhi na 😉😆😆.
naina aur shiv 😛😛.
sasu ma ji apni damad(jhuti wala) ko kuch tho khatir karo😆😆
love maan talking about veer🤣🤣🤣

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