O.S.-Holiday in K.M. (COMPLETED) -Part 2,3 - page 4,6 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Full on badlaa by Maan.

Poor Geet and Dadi,fell prey to Dev and Maan.

Very funny and happy update.


And about the PM, dont worry I'll book mark the thread.



Thanks.
And I really felt bad while refusing to pm.
Specially because of you as your comment always gives me immense support to write further, from the first time when I decided to write to till now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: krati5

<font color="#6600cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">lovely update... i too wish a cool family like this... but most of them dn't play holi😡... according to them its a wastage... me baccha loves it and had to wait till noon 4 my frnds to come... 😭</font>

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<font color="#6600cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">atlst here i cn imagine wht a scene would be wd geet & dadima in one team and dev & maan in another one.. gr8 update👍🏼...</font>
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<font color="#6600cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">i'll check for updates... but if u hv a page 4 updates here on IF or in fb thn plz post the link</font>





Till noon my holi usually got finished with colours.
Shaam me to sirf avir se hi baki holi puri karte hai.
Btw,Thanks for appreciating.

And I have started writing just one month ago . So till now not made any such page where my update links will be found. But surely make one soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAAN AND DEV PLANNED WELL AND GOT THE LADIES
NOW IT IS THEIR TURN TO FACE THE COLORS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

While maan was in room . Geet and daadi chased dev as their next target because they had no idea where maan had gone.

Dev ran into his room and locked from inside. Daadi and geet soon reached there.

"dev, darwaza kholiye. Aap humpe rang daal kar aise chhup nahi sakte. "-daadi said in authoritive voice.

Here geet remembered the incident when maan had locked the main gate of outhouse and she entered through window. So , she goes to check window and there found window was unlocked . She looked inside and saw dev walking inside bathroom with bucket which he emptied just now on daadi. As soon as dev entered bathroom, geet jumped in room and opened gate for daadi.

Daadi entered the room and both waited on each side of gate for coming of dev. Dev came out with colour filled ballons. But to his badluck he himself was drenched by colours as both daadi and geet throws on him. Geet took the balloons and moved out shouting "thanks for balloons , dev."

This all happened so suddenly that by the time dev was able to react, daadi and geet had gone.

Maan came in center of hall and tried to capture geet and daadi's state but attacked with balloons by geet . First balloon hit camcorder and it fell down from maan's grip due to sudden attack. Next target of balloons was maan.

Balloon hit directly on his head and maan sat down holding his eye. Geet ran down watching colour entered his eye followed by daadi.

As soon geet and daadi came down. He snatched balloon from geet's hand and winked at her. Geet jaw drop down as she realised it was his drama.

"Maan, aapne naatak kiya"-daadi said in desbelif.

"Akhir pota jo hoon aapka"-Maan said winking and moved in living room. In haste daadi and geet too followed with dev behind them.

Geet and daadi had forgot that they had told Nakul to setup colour bucket on this door too. Result was same with little difference.

This time all four of them were coloured. All four of them looked at each other and brust out laughing looking other's condition.

"hum to kafi thak gaye hain. Hum aur nahi khel sakte "- daadi said in tired voice and moved from there and picked her camcorder.

"vedio youtube pe jarur daliyega daadi."maan said from behind.

"hum aapko achhi tarah jante hain, maan. Hume pura viswas hain aapne cd change kar di hogi."daadi said and went in her room.

"dev tum bhi naha lo jaake"-Maan said to dev and turned toward geet-"to mrs. khurana hum bhi chale."

Maan and geet entered room and geet decided to go inside bathroom to bath first. But maan stopped her.

"jab rang humne ek duje ko lagaya hai to khud apne rang kyu chhudayenge. "-Maan winked geet and picking up in his arm , moved inside bathroom .


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Wish all of you readers very veryHappy holi
I hope you liked this os.
Thanks for all comments and likes.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
All parts Are superb.
I loved it.
Happy Holi 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
lovely part
all drenched in holi colors😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
wow...maan kya romantic holi hai...

awesome n wonderful story...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Lovely part dear


Happy holi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THE BEST THING IN THIS STORY WAS THE ENTHUSIASM OF DADI TO PLAY HOLI WITH HER GROWN UP GRAND SONS AND ENJOY IT TOO
LOVED THEIR MASTI AND THEN FINALLY THE BESHARAM MAAN
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
all the parts were lovely..

happy holi..

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